Date: 09/03/09 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, I llove the way it was written. It was full of emotions and it was indeed, moving. :] any plans on writing a sequel? D=
or will you just let Tom and his one-sided love be?
Author's Response: Sequel, I'm not too sure, perhaps not but you never know. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 09/03/09 01:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this so far.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 09/03/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, i really liked it. the use of song lyrics connecting to the passages was phenomenal. Loved it. Short n to the point. Its nice to get away from the fluff, I was getting really tired of it. Thank you. hope to hear more from you soon.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/03/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, i really liked it. the use of song lyrics connecting to the passages was phenomenal. Loved it. Short n to the point. Its nice to get away from the fluff, I was getting really tired of it. Thank you. hope to hear more from you soon.
Author's Response: Woah, thanks so much!
Date: 09/02/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was depressing it's well written w/ a good mixture of addiction/bitterness/sadness but it's not so fun to read b/c it doesn't have a happy endng, even if he does call him back at the end.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/02/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it, the statistic thing threw me off for a bit but I got it afterwards
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/02/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Laura i am actually amazed.
seriosuly, since when could you write like this?! at the first part i thought it might actually have been the Madina Lake song, and i said out loud something like if these aren't lyrics then this is fucking amazing. but i checked the lyrics and it wasnt and i was like woahhhhhh!
'Numerous branches from the variety of trees outside your window scratch deep into the glass so hard that I wouldn’t be surprised if they left marks the following morning. '
I love that line!!
Wow and i read this mega quick, YOU MUST KEEP WRITING THIS! it sounds amazzzzzzzzing. it sounds a lot like a song would, and it made me think of turning it into a song :L MAYBE YOU SHOULD THINK OF TAKING UP SONG WRITING! as well as this, cos this is amazing.
YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER LAURA SIMMONS.
Author's Response: Well, I don't really know what to say. Thank you :)