Date: 05/11/11 08:41 am Title: Chapter 23
omggg i wish you would update more often well really update like today so we can find out who her mate is because hell i want it to be bill! please dont wait cause if you do i will miss it..
Author's Response: As of right now i don't have the next chapter written. But last night i had a mini break through with the help of a friend, so i'm kinda going through ideas right now!
Date: 05/11/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 23
WOW! I guess I've managed to have a chapter all for myself! My review was number 100 and I remember how happy I was when I first got my 100th review myself. I can't remember what I've written exactly but trust me, everything was in your favor, because I love this plot and the writing style. I find the relationship between the girl and Bill very well pictured, intense and intriguing, I'll surely need more soon!
Author's Response: Irene i'm so sorry i deleted your review. this chapter was for you then! thanks for letting me know, i felt bad for deleting it. Thanks for reviewing again! I'll try to write more soon, i just have a million and one things on my plate at the moment, but i've been brainstorming hardcore on this story since like last night. Anyways, again thanks!
Date: 05/10/11 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 22
Awww. There's no more. :( *cries* Usually I don't like TH/Vamp stories but I'm loving this one.
Author's Response: by 'no more' do you mean in that chapter, cause this story isn't near finished yet :D
Date: 05/10/11 10:42 am Title: Chapter 22
screw the grammar and spelling errors. I most happy u updated *yay dance* it is amazing the sense or sceneary u put out that make the image in my head so vivid. I loved it so much!!! Jordan is changing so fast the poor thing, it is so awesome to see this updated again.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, glad to see that you're still reading! i'll eventually go back over and change the grammar and spelling errors, they will start to bug me lol. i'm glad you like the story!
Date: 05/10/11 09:10 am Title: Chapter 22
Poor girl. ;(
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 05/10/11 03:23 am Title: Chapter 22
(reviewing from my phone )
Ah yay you updated! Me loves this story!
Author's Response: lol thanks for reviewing...even if you have to do it from your phone! Aren't phones awesome these days lol
Date: 05/10/11 01:37 am Title: Chapter 22
oh how i have missed this story....
Author's Response: I'm so sorry about how long it took me to update. I usually get horrible writers block and have to get a burst of inspiration to write on my stories. That and honestly, i've been busy...but thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/24/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 21
I have read the whole thing through! I couldn't review until I got up to here cos I wanted to see what happens next for I couldn't wait any longer.
I really like the slow pace of this story that u don't rush that bill/Tom HAVE to Have these girls here and now. I love the plot of the story, when u think about it the change that go through is not that much different from a litlle girl growing into a women. But of course we aren't vampires so that begs to differ.
I love ur express of emotion from each character, Jordans heartbreaking confusion with what she is going through is very relatable. As well as the barriers she has put up would make it hard for new people to enter. Using the TH characters but having nothing to do with Tokio Hotel as a band is very hard to imagine, but u have done a well off job. I LOVE Ambers role-play onplaying hard to get with Tom and by the sounds of it...it working.
Well me as a reviewer has done my part... Now all that needs done is this story so that my WANT on wanting to knows what happens next is satisfied. Hope to here from u soon!!
Jster ^_^
Date: 10/09/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh, you really spoke the truth when you said it was sad. I almost cried! It was good though! Really good! Update please! :)
Date: 10/06/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! This is a really good plot! and easy to understand. It sort of reminds me of the "Marked" series by Kristen and P.C. cast. but also it's very original. I hope you update fast its extremely interesting.
Date: 09/30/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 21
Really really good very different for a vampire fic not cliche(sp) at all i get a kinda anime feel from this i don't know if it's intentional or not but its a brilliant plot x keep up the good work and update asap!
Date: 09/30/10 10:16 am Title: Chapter 21
Yay update. Loved it!
Date: 09/30/10 05:25 am Title: Chapter 21
oh more more more for ur fav new reader :) im afraid if u take to long to update ill miss it and u wont get another review.
Date: 08/15/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ok I'm a new reader xD and I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!
I hope you haven't forgotten about this 'cause I really want to see them getting together! - no pressure, honest, well a little =]
PLEASE update soon!!
xoxox
Author's Response: I haven't forgotten it, i sometimes suffer really bad writers block...right now i'm trying to find a way to rework some of the chapters i have written because i don't particularly like them...i'll update as soon as i can
Date: 06/23/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Gonna update anytime soon? I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05/06/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 20
I love your story! It's so enthralling and I can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...i'm currently trying to work out some stuff in future chapters that i don't particularly like, i'll try to update as soon as i can though
Date: 04/26/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 20
LOVE THIS STORY!!! keep going, can't wait for the next one!! :D
Author's Response: glad you like it, i'll try to update not too long from now...
Date: 04/25/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 20
I love it! :D please update ASAP!
Author's Response: glad you like it, i need to write more so i can updat!
Date: 04/22/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 20
oh amber you SASS! love it! i love that tom is feeling a little shaken there at the end. hope to hear from these two again soon! and what ever happened to Georg?
Author's Response: lol i love amber, she and gustav are seriously my two favorite characters....they just crack me up!
Date: 04/22/10 11:06 am Title: Chapter 20
Go Amber!! Haha
Nice chapt!
Author's Response: thanks!