Date: 09/28/09 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Indeed! I wanna know what Bill had to say, too!
Author's Response: maybe we'll find out....maybe not :D
Date: 09/28/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aw, why didn't Bill speak up?
Author's Response: he's shy? lol...thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/28/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
awww bill just do it! what every you want to do DO IT!!! i love it, can't wait for jordan's change! awesome awesome awesome!
Author's Response: lol you can't wait for Jordan's change....are you sure about that?
Date: 09/28/09 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aargg.. Continue!! A wery long chapter next time? ;) And faast :) :)
Author's Response: we'll see, it may be long or not
Date: 09/28/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hum I wonder what Bill wanted to tell her =D
Author's Response: he wanted to talk about the weather ;D
Date: 09/27/09 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Great story :) continue faast :D
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/27/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 11
*dangerously close to falling off bed, for sure*
I can't wait!
Author's Response: careful, don't fallrnlol glad you like it
Date: 09/26/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Is Jordan ever going to not be angry? Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: maybe, but jordan's just an angry person. she's got a lot of stuff in her past to make her angry
Date: 09/17/09 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
I dont' know if it's me or what but, I couldn't help to laugh. I think that would have been my same reaction if that would have ever happened.
-Awsome chapter (:
Author's Response: lol, i'm glad it made you laughrnamber's ment to bring a bit of comedy to the storyrnwell whenever she interacts with tom that is..rni hope it's working wellrnthanks for your review!
Date: 09/17/09 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait for the next ch., loving ur story (=.
Author's Response: glad you like it, the next chapter will be up maybe tomorrow.
Date: 09/16/09 12:26 am Title: Chapter 9
!!!!Poor Jordan....I imagine she's scared to death....
Author's Response: hah lol, yes i'd say she is scared to death....or just really frightened right now.
Date: 09/15/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
No I'm offering, lolz I really love to edit things x3 oh and btw.. same thing happened to me with my HP... unfortunately when I looked it up on google it happens a lot and the next thing will be your laptop's demise... happened to me and a bunch of people on a discussion I found... sorry for the bad news... I got a Toshiba after mine died... anyways my email address is xxmteresaexx@yahoo.com if you think you might need my help ^.^
Author's Response: LAPTOPS DEMISE!!!!!!!rnWHAT!!!!! That cannot happenrnat least until i get my mac :D. I decided today after some discussion with my father that i'm going to try getting the mac. For the past four years all i've wanted was a mac, and in the past four years i've had two computers (both hp)....so i think it's time to spring for the mac!!rnrnanyways i'm glad you liked the new chapter and i'll email you now just to make sure the email goes through.
Date: 09/15/09 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well, I never usually read vamp!fics, and I don't think I'll be starting. I'm not even sure why I read this one, but I enjoyed it!
Seriously, the plot is lovely, and you manage to avoid cliche, so kudos to you. However, be sure to keep on top of your characters, because otherwise it can get confusing for the reader. It would also be nice to get a little character development, especially on the twins part. Also, a bit more description wouldn't go amiss. I mean more similes, metaphors, personification, use of the five senses, that sort of thing. Anyway, update soon!
Author's Response: dude, your review was the kind of review i love. you complimented then you made suggestions! i love it!rni'm always wondering how to make this story better, and i know it's not perfect.rnanyways thanks, i'll try going back over it once i get the whole thing written out and try working on it some more, and i'm hoping that some of the chapters already written are good too.rnso i babbled...but thanks for your review!
Date: 09/14/09 09:12 am Title: Chapter 8
You got me addicted to this story^^
I want more! Please?
How do they know who their mate is??
Author's Response: an addiction huh lolrnwell i'm glad you like it.rnsometimes they know their mate because they'll end up falling for them...like deliah and georg. they were going out before she changed so therefore they had an attraction to one another and...well they became mates.rnbut in the event you dont meet your mate before you change...well other things happen.rnyou'll just have to continue reading and find outrn:D
Date: 09/14/09 01:09 am Title: Chapter 8
this is great! i really really like it!
Author's Response: i'm glad you like it, thanks for the review!!
Date: 09/14/09 12:32 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG I LOVE THIS FICTION!!!! -giggles- And I don't know a good beta but I'm a fairly good editor myself... my mother used to be one and has sort of trained me... -looks at the paragraph she just typed- Wow... didn't show it much though xD Anyways I love this story!!
Author's Response: lol thanks for your review. im glad you like...i mean love it! :Drnso, are you offering to look over the chapters, or are you just stating a fact lol.rnalso... i had a girl before say she'd beta for me, but then after i sent her the story she emailed me saying she had a ton of school work and then never messaged me back.rnso if you are offering, are you up for actually doing the work...and not just taking the story and running?rnlol not saying you would, but i got really sad when she never messaged me back...
Date: 09/13/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm loving this story! It's so different to all other vampire ones out there at the moment. I can't wait till your next chapter :D
Author's Response: im really glad you like it! thanks for reviewingrnrnright now the wireless is acting up on my computer, so until that gets straightened out it may take a while for me to update! but never fear i'll figure something out!
Date: 09/13/09 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
!!!!!
*waits patiently for next update*
And so!!! Omg!
Author's Response: glad you like it!rndepending on if my computer is being a pain right now, or if something really is wrong with it, it may take a while for me to update...but never fear, it should only be a couple days!
Date: 09/12/09 05:33 am Title: Chapter 7
i have to say, that made my day :)...hmm didn't mean for that to sound like poem
Author's Response: lol i'm glad it made your dayrnand made you sound like a poem lol
Date: 09/12/09 04:21 am Title: Chapter 7
!!!! Poor Deliah !!! And Georg, too!!!
And a date with Bill!?!
On edge of seat here.....
Author's Response: Poor Jordan too man, it's a nasty process, the change, isn't it.rnShe already hates the idea of it, then to watch her friend go through it...rnrnBut we'll just see how this 'date' lol goes