....how long have you been writting this? Its really good i like it. Dont stop ^_^

Author's Response: ....two yeas almost? id say...maybe.. glad you like it!

I love it! Amazing :) Update please! :D I just have one question... Have you read the house of night series by P.C and Kristen Cast?

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing...yes i have read House of Night...as well as Vampire Academy....Twilight and many other supernatural books...i like them all..

Wow.... I just read the though thing and I'm in love with this story!
I love your idea about vampires.
Can't wait for more! =)

This is a great story, first I tought that it wud not be becouse it's abaout vampaiers, but this is the best!! :D Continue ;D

Author's Response: thanks for reading...i've had more than one person tell me that they didn't know if they would like my story because it was about vampires then turn around and tell me that i made them change their mind on the vampire story thing....makes me feel good. i'm glad you like it!

.... one word love, that's right i am in love...can't wait for the next chapter

Hey I am so sorry I've been sick with the flu for the past few weeks and I even had to drop my college classes cuz I missed so much >_< and now Yahoo is being stupid and won't let me get to my email. If you want you can go ahead and update without me reading and I'll just catch up the next time? I just feel bad for holding you back but I want you to know I haven't given up just things haven't been going my way lately. I'm sooooo sorry I'll keep trying to get in my email I promise

Author's Response: well i hope you feel better....i'm actually kind of glad you didn't reply cause it gave me some time in between posts to think of more stuff...lolrnjust let me k now if your yahoo starts working again that way i can send you the next chapter.rnbut focus on feeling better okrn:D

Just keeps getting better, though I think I have a hunch on what Bill wants to say.

Author's Response: hmm, maybe he just wanted a few tips on sparring :D

I'm really glad we're seeing some more of the other characters, it's going really well!!

I'll admit that I'm a little confused by the final line of this chapter, but I think I get it. I'm a little slow sometimes :)

You have a few technical issues, mostly with small grammar errors, apostrophes, missing out speech marks, etc. etc. The best way to catch this yourself is to print it off and read it aloud. There's something about reading off a computer screen that means you can miss little things really, really easily.

Also, you're still a little lacking in description. Seriously, I really think that you need to stick just that little bit more. The part where Amber was digging her pen into the paper? That part was fantastic. It really showed what she was feeling, it may not seem like description, but it is. Putting in more of the five senses as well, I think would help. I can't really describe (oh, the irony) what else you need, maybe some more colour. I just find it a little hard to really feel what's going on. And seriously, I wouldn't make such a fuss, but I really think you have the talent to pull it off and make this come alive. And because of that, I'm going to keep going on about this!!

Still, all that aside, I love the new chapters so much, and I'm so looking forward to the next bit!! *hinthintnudgenudge*

Author's Response: i have such a hard time with description. i get so frustrated sometimes because i can't seem to get the description out...lol kind of funny isn't it. i want to work on that though so that's why i'm glad that you pointed it out. i have trouble slipping it in without like, how do i explain, without just going off topic to describe something. i'll work on it though. thanks for your review i really liked it and it makes me happy when i see i have a review from you. also, when i was in school my english teacher used to call me the comma queen, she said i like to slip them in too much which is true. lol i know i need to work on that lol. anyways thanks, and i'll update here in a little bit!

Aww, why didn't she go with Tom?

Author's Response: lol because she knows exactly how tom isrnand she's not about to fall at his feet either...lol even though she secretly wants to

Hi agen :D I think the story is very good, and it makes sens! But I like longer chapters :D but its youre story so you can do as you like.. :)

Author's Response: i'm sorry the chapters are shorter, normally they are longer but i'm trying to break it up so that way i have plenty to post and enough time to write more!rni'll try to make them longer though!