Date: 02/16/10 10:18 am Title: We are us.
This story was really cute, though Bill got scared quite often, not a negatively speaking. =)
I liked this one, you have a very good writing style, you make your story believable, and you drag the reader in, plus you have few mistakes, which makes it very easy to read.
I think you did great, and the build up you had with one scene from various ages was brilliant, you did great, and now I'm at a loss for words so I think I'll end this review by congratulating you with an amazingly catchy story :D
Author's Response: im glad you liked this.. not many people did so that made me happy :D
Date: 01/31/10 07:25 am Title: We are us.
I'll be honest, my first thought was that it wasn't very well written, grammar & sentence structure-wise, but that could be easily corrected by using a beta reader, cuz it just kept sticking out for me :(
I liked the evolution of the twins' relationship throughout the years, but then it got to the sex and it felt very rushed. I think I would have prefered if the end was just short and romantic. I think it would have fit better with the rest of the story... but that's just my opinion. Thank u for writing. :)
Date: 09/03/09 01:16 am Title: We are us.
I like the swift change from innocent kissing to sitting-on-a-vibrator fun. :) Very nice!!
Author's Response: haha yes i liked that too xD
Date: 09/02/09 11:24 pm Title: We are us.
i think this was good. and very hot. =)
Author's Response: hehe i try : D
Date: 09/02/09 07:46 pm Title: We are us.
It was neat, but please, next time, add crossdressing to the warnings...
Author's Response: O.O i thought i did =/ im so sorry il change it now..
Date: 09/02/09 07:22 pm Title: We are us.
nice one
Author's Response: ^0^ Thank you
Date: 09/02/09 12:18 am Title: We are us.
You did a great job don't be so nervous!
Author's Response: ^0^ Yay :DDD
Date: 09/01/09 08:39 pm Title: We are us.
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG WOW THIS IS BETTER THEN PEA RAPE! love it fav xxx
Author's Response: pea rape is the sex xd