Reviews For On Fire
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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/18 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 - He's on fire

this was a good story!!

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/15 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1 - He's on fire

Whether the twins wanna admit it or not they always wanted a story like this for their birthday. :D

Reviewer: duckynz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - He's on fire

aieee! ♥

Reviewer: glinfaewyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 - He's on fire

I noticed a few grammatical issues, but overall, I thought this was very hot and sweet.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/09 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1 - He's on fire

oh this was fantastic, possibly the best one shot of the day and believe me there were a lot.

Author's Response: awwwweeee! :D thanxs so much sweets!and I know rite?lolzrnglad you liked it!

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - He's on fire

That was awesome.
The sex was good, but I wish it had lasted longer!
And I liked that last line :)

Author's Response: Thanxs!Yeah I probably should have made it last longer, would have too, but I was so tired.I wrote this t like 3 in the morning, and I already had 3,000 words!lolzrnNext birthday, its gonna have to be some long steamy stuff!!ahahharnrnThanxs so much for the review!!! :)

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