Date: 12/05/09 10:18 pm Title: The Green Eyed Monster
And you just leave it there!?!?
I'm so sorry this review is super late, I found your story about a week ago and loved it! But I never tracked it, so I didn't know you updated until now
*is stupid*
But this chapter, oh my goodness, so much love to you.
Gustav on a motorcycle. HOT. And you made him seem so scary, too. The first part of this chapter almost made my have a heart attack, you seriously made me think he killed Bill.
And the show down he almost had with Tom. Tom's all bad ass, he has a gun, but Gustav has a shotgun! One-uped, hehe.
Now, I love Tom/Bill, but the scene between Gustav and Bill was so sweet.
*Bill smiled sweetly, covering Gustav's hand with his.
"Hey, Gusti," Bill said softly. He twined their fingers together and squeezed.*
That killed me. Its just such an endearing gesture, and heartbreaking all at once.
And Tom still got shot! And Bill's gone. AND Gustav and Georg are being hunted?
My goodness girl, do you ever know how to write cliff hangers!
Date: 11/30/09 02:17 am Title: The Green Eyed Monster
Damn! *kicks rocks*
Date: 11/30/09 01:46 am Title: Reluctant Housemates
I have a couple different reactions.
1.) ARE THE G'S STUPID TO NOT WONDER WHAT OR WHO THE HELL JUST KILLED TOM?!?!?! ARE THEY FORGETTING THAT HE'S STILL THERE AND THEY MIGHT BE NEXT!?!?!?! STUPID STUPID STUPID!!!
2.) Awesome story, a little off beat from the usual ghost tale but still a real kick to read!
3.) Mind if (pretending that the homework will let up) I make a banner for this story? I hate to see good tales not have a banner to catch people's attention.
Much love
Date: 11/29/09 10:04 pm Title: Reluctant Housemates
I'm loving this story! It's really exciting and adorable and funny, but I did notice one thing I'm not too clear on- why would Gustav think that Tom killed Bill if Tom just moved here from Massachusetts? That's really the only thing I'm noticing about it, the rest was great!
Date: 11/29/09 01:55 pm Title: The Green Eyed Monster
chanchanchaaaaaaaaaaan DDDDD:
i'm the mucus girl!! :D the dust allergy xDDD
and omfg :00000000
i wanna know what will happend nowwwwwwwww :Q
well i must be andreas xD ooooh :000
wanna keep reading xD
well
i send my cute mucus to u so u can have inspiration xD
baaaaaaai ;D
.nekito.
Date: 11/29/09 06:50 am Title: Reluctant Housemates
So help me you better not leave this hanging!!!!
I honestly NEED to know what happens! Great story btw, this is the first review I have felt compelled to write so keep up the good work!
Date: 11/29/09 04:44 am Title: The Green Eyed Monster
awwww, well do Tom and Bill get to be ghosts together?
Date: 11/23/09 08:15 pm Title: The Interloper
No, don't talk about it Tom, don't kill Bill. (psh, kill Bill, sorry, that made me laugh).
But this story is sweet, I love Tom and Bill, and Simone never leaving the "gay teenagers" alone. It almost makes me forget about Bill being dead. Almost. You just keep bringing back the dark undertones.
Bill died and needs to accept it (again); but if he finds out about how he dies he will be forced to relive his death again. The odds for Bill do not look good here. D:
*Please make it better*
Author's Response: *Soothes* I'll do what I can. And I can't let ya'll forget Bill's dead now, can I? <3 It'll be okay.
Date: 11/19/09 06:33 pm Title: The Interloper
i finished xD
and i have to study now xD
bye =D
i loved it and hurry! xDDD i wanna know who was :0
.nekito.
=D
Author's Response: 8D
Date: 11/19/09 04:53 pm Title: A Date with Death, Part 1
it's "dépeche toi, petit. L'obscurité frappe à ta porte"
google is shit xD don't believe it D: it's evil! xDD
u put like "the fly(insect), bit one (not for person). the darkness beats (yeah something like that) over your door"
so yeah... D: it's not the same bill translated xD
i'll finish the story! xD
Author's Response: I changed it. Thanks so much! >////< I can't believe I did that. XD
Date: 11/18/09 11:55 pm Title: The Interloper
okay just dont kill off Bill or Tom... love ya!
Author's Response: <3 you too!
Date: 11/18/09 09:05 pm Title: Deeper and Deeper
oh i was reading the first chapter and the light went off D: but my pc had battery so i was like um...and i did something by photoshop xD
well then the light return and i was like: omg yes :D
and here i am xD
i ve to go to sleep though xD
so bye and i let u the "something" xD
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af75/paraDoxe_/risingfromtheashescopiacopia.jpg
babaaaai ;D
.nekito.
Author's Response: AWHWHWHWHWHWHWHWHWHWHWHH!!! I love it! I love you! OMG! SQUUUUUUUEEEEEELLLLLLLLL!
Date: 11/18/09 04:56 pm Title: The Interloper
GO ON!!!!!
I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hmmmm.... Well.... I was thinking... JKJKJK
Date: 10/28/09 08:39 pm Title: Push
oh my god wow! oh please dont let Tom or Bill die, again in Bill's case? Gustav.... or andi.... hmmmm..
Author's Response: 8D
Date: 10/28/09 06:48 pm Title: Push
Noooooo......bill can't know cause then he'll die and won't be able to be with tom....can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/28/09 06:32 pm Title: Push
It's gustav or andi. But my guess is gustav. Omg update soon!
Author's Response: I will. And I did.
Date: 10/28/09 04:48 pm Title: Push
I KNOW TOO! I KNOW TOO!
Well not really....
Author's Response: LOLOLOLOL
Date: 10/28/09 02:31 pm Title: Push
First to review this chapter!
Author's Response: Cheater. XD
Date: 10/12/09 03:15 pm Title: A Date with Death, Part 1
Ok, so I've read the four chapters like one after the another and now I'm craving for more! It's so cute, and so endearing, and so magical, funny and so...*is babbling*
Keep it coming,puh-lease.
Author's Response: Aw... I'm glad you liked it! More soon, 'kay?
Date: 10/11/09 01:46 am Title: A Date with Death, Part 1
Oh, my! Write more, please!
Author's Response: I'll update soon, 'kay?