Date: 12/20/14 04:08 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
okay... that was the best one shot I have ever read! I love it when people go out of their 'comfort zone'
nicely written. I was not expecting the pee scene. It was definitely different. props to ya!! I think I'm going to have to add ya as a favorite author~ nice work!
Date: 09/25/10 06:40 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
Oh my gods. That was, more than I was expecting. Brava. Very violent, very uncomfortable.
Author's Response: Awes thank you. I try and push myself beyond my boundaries of being comfortable. I sure if I was reading this as someone else's work I would have had to read it through my fingers. But thanks for the review.
Date: 04/04/10 10:39 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
They run out of money once more and are forced to have twincest sex! *cheers*
Author's Response: I'll get there eventually. I just have to get inspired. But yes and it will be depraved and humiliating and delicious.
Date: 12/10/09 08:56 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
Oh my god.
Will you be writing more in this series? Please?
Author's Response: Yeah, there will be more. I only write them when I'm inspired and disturbed. lol If you have any genious ideas to torture the twins I might be inspired to write them. Glad you enjoyed Tom's beating lol.
Date: 09/28/09 10:00 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
No no, rape isn't what disturbed me, if you look at what I write and what I like to read, it's pretty obvious that I don't find rape disturbing. What disturbed me was the pee LOL! And the whole fact that Tom was left out of what was going on, so he had no idea he could've said no. That disturbed me. And the pee. Mostly the pee. Sometimes I find it hot, but in this case I was like...OH GOD.
Author's Response: LOL I like the rapey bits too. LOL being disturbed was kind of the point, the fact that he could say no but didn't realize. That was my and Anis' purpose. The scene wouldn't have been as genuine if he had known he could say no. We wanted him to be terrified and fearful. We wanted him to believe it was real. The pee was to further the humiliation, if you found the pee disturbing then it didn't its job.
Date: 09/07/09 03:57 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
Damn that was wow very good
Author's Response: *grins* thank you very much!
Date: 09/01/09 06:45 pm Title: Tom take one for the team
I can't believe I read that entire thing. Ugh. By my "standards," bestiality would be like, the worst thing (after necrophilia) so when I think about it, Bill's story should have grossed me out way more, but it so didn't, this one made me go OMG NO D: *nausea*. But it was good, you are a great writer and I hope you write something soon, even more of this "series" would be cool! :)
Author's Response: I know, I know in the whole scheme of things bestiality is like up there with scat and necro and *shudders* a bunch of "OMG ick" stuff. The confusion of not being totally grossed out at bestiality was totally the goal of the first one. The repulsion of doggy cock not being repulsive because it wasn't about Bill and Hans it was about Bill and Tom. So wait let me get this right...you found "rape" more disturbing then bestiality, hum? I might better at this writing thing then I give myself credit for. I have written lots I'm sure I'll think of lots of dirty, dirty stories to share!