Date: 09/09/09 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
=O
Poor Tom, I think I feel worse for him than Bill, the poor thing.
He's just confused and in need of some twin lovin' and cuddlin'! Yup, yup!
And Chantelle....*hisses* don't know why she's still around....but I wish she'd hit the bricks, for serious!
*patiently waits for update*
Author's Response: Naw, Tom doesnt deserve your pity, the jackass! xD. And dont worry, Chantelle's gone for good. XD
Date: 09/09/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Dude that ending was epic!!! I loved the play of words Bill was using throughout most of this chapter. it is cleverly written and definetly something I will be favoriting... head/palm I reallllyyyyyyy would like a new chapter.... xD
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm so happy someone likes my wit! =^^= And thank you so much for the review!
Date: 09/09/09 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5
*imagine a very annoying recording, going on forever*
:next please. next please. next please.
Date: 09/09/09 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1~ Prologue
*_* This could've SO stood as a splendid one shot! :) But I adore the fact that it's chaptered. ;) Twin love, confusion and realization is aaalways adorable. :) All the more if written so well!
Date: 09/09/09 07:20 am Title: Chapter 5
I love love love this!!!!!
Update... Please :D
I'll give you a cookie... You know you want it!
Date: 09/08/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 5
My chest aches from reading this. It truly is a tragic story. I sort of want to smack both of them, though and be like "Wake up - you LOVE himmmm" lol. You definitely deserve that featuring :] Great story so far - keep up the good work!
Date: 09/08/09 12:52 am Title: Chapter 5
awesome awesome awesome! you totally deserve to be featured! Love it!
Date: 09/08/09 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1~ Prologue
woo hoo!
Date: 09/07/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow...this really deserves to be featured!
congratulations!!
Date: 09/07/09 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
god i started crying when i finished you should write more that was amazing i rlly liked it
Date: 09/07/09 09:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bill, Poor tomi ): poor me too because i can't wait for more anymore, come on more more more more more more /o/
Date: 09/07/09 03:22 am Title: Chapter 2
i love it i literally forgot to breath it was so good lol
Date: 09/06/09 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my god i dont even know wat to say just it broke my heart... my god i was listening to automatic while reading this chapter and man is so fit with it.... wow you just captured the song in one chapter
Date: 09/06/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Omg... I was crying. This is such a great story.
Date: 09/06/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
O_O omg im so happy this got featured cause otherwise i probably wouldnt have found it ! Its the best thing i read since a long time, cant even describe it, so, so good ! Cant wait for the next chap, soon please ?
Date: 09/06/09 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1~ Prologue
Addictive!
Date: 09/06/09 06:33 am Title: Chapter 5
oh gawd, i just started tearing....
that was...this is....UGH. like amazingly sweet, yet painful and angst-filled and I want to cry and i was to yell and yell at the both of them, and I'm just like ARGGG..
so yea, me writing all of that, is me asking you to update. like today xD
Date: 09/06/09 05:52 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm pretty incoherent from the intensity of this story. You've done an amazing job of telling it. The emotions are written so well, and the details are great. Right down to making Bill's nose congested in this last scene, referring back to Bill only being congested when he's holding back tears. I absolutely cannot wait to read more of this! :D
Author's Response: I absolutely cant believe you noticed that~! I thought for sure no one would. :p XD. I always think I'm being too vague :/ xD. And, thank you so much for your kind words!
Date: 09/06/09 05:10 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad this got featured because I hate to think I'd have missed this. It's smokin so far. I like seductive!Bill. Nice!