Date: 09/13/09 11:47 am Title: Chapter 7
This story was simply amazing. The best birthday fic I read this week. It was done so nicely, and you have a very nice way with words. I enjoyed it, great job! :)
Author's Response: :D Thank you! I couldnt find very many bday fics for the twins, except for the amazing ones done by cynicalrock and Haylz! (homg ._. amazing xD) Thank you soo much, I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: 09/13/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter 7
LOVE it. This certainly deserved to be featured.
Author's Response: Thank you! *_*
Date: 09/13/09 01:18 am Title: Chapter 7
I finally got through this one and I'm so happy I did. It was lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it all XDD. I'm happy you liked it!
Date: 09/12/09 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww i loved thiz=]=]
Date: 09/12/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
YAY YOU SHOULD :DDDDDDDDDD
Date: 09/12/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
that was such a sweet ending n_n
“Every night.”
hehehe, I think that was so sweet. The ending was perfect. I loved how, despite how you had them go through this big long thing, they still seemed to be themselves in the end n_n. Hehehe, because I think "Wanna do it again?" Would be one of the first things out of Tom's mouth. Plus Bill's reaction was the best n_n great job hun :D
Author's Response: I know! Sugar sweet right? Well, i do hope it didnt give anyone cavities ... I'm not very good with fluff, I'll admit. D: I'm really glad you thought the ending was perfect, I think it was the easiest part to write out of all of it, except of course the beginning. xD. And i know! Tom's such a perv, of course he's only thinking of Bill's cute little ass. (n_n i would be...)
Date: 09/12/09 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1~ Prologue
This is ssssooooo friggin' AWESOME! The emotions were sooo real! It seemed like this story happened in real life! I could totally feel what Bill was feeling. I'm a sucker for sad stories, so I thought you could of have one more chapter with Angst!Tom and Hurt!Bill, but then I would be bouncing in my seat waiting for the next chappie. XPPPPP I loved this ssoooooo much! I didn't really mind Ehren being with Bill, but Chantelle grated on my nerves. I guess it's because I think Tom deserved a little hurt. *shrugs* Anywho, I congratulate you for getting this *EPIC* story featured! It's truly a masterpiece, one of the best stories I've read E.V.E.R.! 8D I thouroughly enjoyed this and I hope to see more from you in the future! *favs story*
~WhiteTiger
Date: 09/11/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
I loved this story, I'm sad it's leaving, but it was AMAZING while it lasted. I can tell this is going to be one of those stories that I go back and read from time to time.:).
Author's Response: Thank you soo much, I'm so happy you loved it! I know, I'm sad to see it go too! And it went sooo fast! I think i had it all up in just over a week! Crazy mad skillz? Nope, just a twin addiction. xD. And to share a secret, lol, I've gone back and read this fic at least 5 times since finishing it. >.> Narcissistic? Only as much as Bill and Tom. xD
Date: 09/11/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like the way you've resolved this story! Will there be a sequel or is this it? If it is, I am glad you got featured, otherwise I probably would not read it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Right now, i really for the life of me, cannot see a sequel being written. The end seems pretty...resolute, you know? I think i covered everything. XD. And thank you for giving it a chance. ^^
Date: 09/11/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! Fantastic job.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/11/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
i agree; they should have put that in the Automatic video :')
Great story i love it.
xx
Author's Response: *drool* I totes wanna see it one day for realz. And thank you :)
Date: 09/11/09 10:58 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow. this was great!! Wonderful job. perfectly angsty with a perfectly sweet and hot ending. =)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it.
Date: 09/11/09 10:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Awwwwwwwwww this fic was so awesome! It was really sad at times, and it almost made me angry when Bill was kissing Ehren but oh well. The twins ended up together, and that's the best thing ^.^
I also really, really loved how in this chapter, there was that scene where Tom was touching Bill, on his hip, then under his knees, and then tickled his foot... I mean, I found that part more special than the sex scene because well. A lot of stories have sex, and after a while I got a little bored with it, and that's why I notice when an author has something special in their sex scene.
Another thing I loved about this story was in chapter six, I think, where Bill said that Tom was automatic. I mean, before he mentioned it, I could SO see that he was going to say that! ^^ And the fact that he wrote the song about Tom... Totally blew me away. It was. Beautiful.
And the last sentence of the story!!! He's absolutely soooo right! I mean, it would've been so amazing *drools* I can't even imagine! I would've had a heart attack, really.
I really love this story. It just HAS to go to my favorites. Your writing is mind-blowing, breathtaking, phenomenal, and every other great thing out there! You totally deserved to get this fic featured! ^_^
Author's Response: Yaaaay, long review <3 HEART. Of course the twins ended up together! It was their bday, could you really see it going any other way? Lmao, i suppose i could've been really mean and had Bill run off with Ehren in the end. xD. I really loved writing the foot scene too, in my head it was sooo cute and i was grinning my ass off while picturing it. Yeah, sex does that for me too sometimes, which is why i took a lot of the focus off the orgasm scene, and took out all of the obvious ejaculation stuff. I hoped to write it a lot more spiritually, hope i succeeded! @_@ The Automatic stuff came out of nowhere, that wasnt even going to be a part of this story, but suddenly, inspiration spit of me. xD Thank you soooo much for reviewing and liking my story, this review made my day! *__*
Date: 09/11/09 05:22 am Title: Chapter 7
LOVE IT
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/11/09 05:16 am Title: Chapter 7
I absolutely loved your fic. I'm so glad it was featured, otherwise I would probably have never stumbled upon it. The story really did have everything: conflict, love, development. And there were some parts that made me smile so much until it was almost embarrassing.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I'm so glad you liked it and gave it a chance! Believe me, i was smiling right there with you, and i wrote it! :D
Date: 09/11/09 02:34 am Title: Chapter 7
What a wonderful ending. The emotions are just so real. I really enjoyed the whole story. Nicely done! :D
Author's Response: Thank you soo much!! I'm so glad you liked it :)
Date: 09/11/09 01:57 am Title: Chapter 7
Best fucking last line EVER!
*sigh* ommigod, I'm so in love with this fic... you are just... gah, I've been robbed of my descriptive vocabulary...
*sobs* no more! WAAAAA!
Through out the entirety of the story there was real emotion, not just the quick fast and easy, 'you're hot, you're my soul mate and i'm in love with you... let's fuck!' element that is so common and over-used in this type of fic, you had real emotional turmoil (and that lovely bit of angsty-ness and the outside characters that are all used for realisation purposes) and smut! Smut, smut, smut! All in all, pretty fucking fabulous... congrats! *billflutterclaps for you*
danke for the amazing ness that is this story and I look forward to future updates... I wonder when you'll update 'Flirting With Faliure' (hint hint)
..so yeah, thank you so much and I loved it sincerely... ciao! *bows out*
Author's Response: Squeee, thank you! <3 I love your review, lol. Yeah, i always try to go for the more drawn out stuff, since i dont like a quick fix either. ^^ I'm so glad you liked how i wrote it, really. And i love the BillFlutterClap, fucking amazing, thank you. XDD. I just updated FwF the other day! :o It was a pretty long chapter too! But, i will be devoting all of my time now to it, since this fic is finally completed. ^^ Thank you so much for the review. <3
Date: 09/11/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter 7
Beautifully, beautifully, insanely well written. Congrats on a job well done. :D (Added to mah faves)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I'm so glad you liked it, and added it to your faves *__* <3
Date: 09/11/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG. So passionate and hot.. *run to change panties XDDD* LOLLLL OMG, this one is one of the best fic in awhile in THFiction. I love you to death for this one. Amazing. Genius.
By the way, i just get counfused a little “We should’ve put that in the Automatisch video.” What is that? O_O
Author's Response: Thanks! <3, and the 'that' is their sex of course. xD. I personally would've head a heart attack. xD
Date: 09/11/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter 7
That was some amazing porn, I must say. Oh yeah, and this story fucking ROCKS. 8D Gold star for you for writing such a lovely twincest bday story :D
Author's Response: Yay! The porn was the hardest part to write, not gonna lie .__. Thank you for the gold star, lol, i srsly love it. XD, thank you so much for reviewing babe. ^^