Date: 09/03/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
OOoooOooOooOOOOoh...this is nice! Its like the kind of fic youwould write for new years...i like how you pulled all of the recent events together and make them all pertain to your original storyline. And the way you write, its so realistic, its like you were there! It seems so true to life.
I like the way it is organized, not in chronological order.
The only criticism i have is a personal thing XD I like a lot of dialogue, and this fic doesnt have much. I mean, its better with the fic, i guess, but I just like a fic with a bit more actual talking. ^^
AND OMG WHERE'S TOM???
Date: 09/03/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
OH, I'd KILL HIM.
Date: 09/03/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
ooh no! Poor bill that's so awful! Why didn't Tom come home? It wasn't Bill's fault that he had to stay longer. I love this story, please update again soon! =)
Date: 09/03/09 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
I was going to ask about Ehren since he is in another story. ;) I didn't think he was real. I like this story, keep up the great work! I am so glad I have one more chapter.
Date: 09/03/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is awesome!! Should be kinda featured!!So-so good!! *.*
Date: 09/02/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this fic. The plot is precise and feels/sounds like it would be an accurate account of what really has happened in the current life of Tokio Hotel. It has brought out emotions in me that fanfictions rarely do: curiosity and love. Thank you for keeping my interest and I applaud you on your ability to compose such an outstanding piece of work!
Date: 09/02/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooo, awesome! I can't wait to read more. :)
Date: 09/02/09 04:08 am Title: Chapter 2
HOT! I like the idea of how it's only allowed once a year and am curious to see where it's going :)
Date: 09/02/09 02:40 am Title: Chapter 2
gawd that was hot.
*fanself*
wow
Date: 09/01/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, dear *__*
That was just what I needed.
Date: 09/01/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
whew, this one was HOT. XD sooooo goooood!
Date: 09/01/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
You're absolutely amazing with this story!
xD I love it and I can't wait to read more of it.
Date: 09/01/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw, this is lovely! I'd love to read more. :)
Date: 09/01/09 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1~ Prologue
awesome. Really awesome. :)
Date: 08/31/09 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1~ Prologue
I... fucking... love... you... SO MUCH! Youuuuuuuuuuuuu have no idea. Sad it's only once a year! But amazing sex scene, is amazing