So Tom knows that Bill is his brother? What!! Wow that's one hell of a way to met your brother!! So what the hell Tom is on the same bus and sees what's going on with Bill and doesn't do anything!!??

You know I really have to thank you for coming back and still up dating this. I stop coming to THF for some time but you with this story keep pulling me back in. So really thank you =}

Author's Response: Yes, Tom has known his whole life that he has a twin brother and that Jorg has custody of Bill. Bill does not know that he even has a brother, let alone one who wants to know him. Yes, Tom does ride his bus, has since his first school burnt down, which is why he is now going to Bill's school, but he gets on the bus before Bill does and doesn't pay much attention to those around him when he'd with his friends, as most 12 year olds would. rnrnI'm glad that you have a story that keeps you coming back to this community. It doesn't seem like much is being posted very ofter in this lull period, but this community is one of the best I have been a part of! :D Thank you for reading and your great comment! -12

Damn, no next button :c but seriously, this story is SO good. You're a really good writer and Bill's feelings are portrayed so well...it's like I'm living his life with him! And usually when I read a story with such intense paragraphs an long chapters I really can't get into it, I scan over the paragraphs and get bored but with this one I didn't want to miss a word. I spent an hour on all 11 chapters and usually it takes me about 20 minutes to read that many chapters!

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and excited for Tom to spend Christmas with his dad and find out all about Bill...also I am sorry for not reviewing every chapter but I was just so captured by the story :p

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting and for reading. I am glad that you were able to be sucked in by this story and able to feel what I was trying to get across. Yes, Christmas will be in the next chapter. Don't worry about reviewing every chapter. I know how it is to be sucked in with a next button. Right. There. to click. XD -12

awwwwww, poor billa. your story just made me cry again. i feel like I'm checking this story every five minutes to see if it has been updated. I dont want to rush you while you work your magic but do you have any idea when the next chapter will be up? i also want you to know that this story is like one of the best ones on this site. you really feel bills pain, if ya know what i mean. not like literally but you get this kinda uncomfortable feeling in the pit of your stomach, its really weird and I dunno how to explain it but it really shows your talent as a writer. Anyways, good luck with the story and I'm gonna shut up now. sp yeah...:) xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment! There will be an update later tonight, I'm pretty sure. I've just have to beta the chapter and put some final details, so if not tonight then by tomorrow. :] Thank you so much for your compliments. I'm glad that the feeling that I feel while writing this story is translated into text and then affecting the readers they way I intended. You do not realize how happy that makes me to know I am accomplishing my goal. Do not feel like you need to "shut up". I love to hear what you all have to say, so keep talking! :D rnrn-12

it' so good I feel the need to review again! Ohhh! I t tomi gonna find out? I can't wait to see what happens next, now I am gonna go re-read it again so I'd better get the tissues.
I think you area an amazing writer, I love the depth of emotion and pain in your stories, it gives me goosebumps!!! xxx

Author's Response: Thank you! Tom's not sure yet, I don't think! We'll find out his thoughts in the next chapter! :D rnrnThank you for that compliment. I try to actually "feel" the emotions that Bill is feeling (though I can't hardly fathom what someone in his position would really feel like) and I think that's why it takes me a while to update because I have to be in that mindset and it's not always easy getting depressed when your feeling alright. XDrnrn-12

wow, this is the best fic i have ever red. seriously, i am not just saying that. i cant wait to find out what happens next, it even made cry a few times! please update soon! xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and praise! :] I cry while writing this (and whenever I reread this), so it's good to hear that this effects someone else the way it does myself. An update is in the works, but it's taking longer than I originally planned to get the way that I want, but it will be soon. Thanks again!rnrn12

I'm so sorry for your loss.

Just started reading this story, I like a lot but is very cruel for poor Bill. I guess it's good because there will be a better life for Bill. So please update very very soon, I'm dying to read the next episodes.

Greetings, Bye

Author's Response: Thank you for your comment! I like new readers and I'm glad that you life this story, despite it's darkness. rnrnAn update will hopefully be up soonish. I've been working crazy, so I haven't had the chance to sit down and really work. rnrn-12

I'm sorry for your loss hun and thank you for updating.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for commenting. I do really appreciate it, even if it took me a week to say so. :/

OMG i love this fic so much and its really well written i hate bill's dad he is an ass can't wait till you update again

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you like it and there will be an update coming soon as I'm working on it right now! rnrnI'm glad that you hate Jorg, that was my intentions. :]

Oh, this is a really intensive and dramatic fic! Poor little Bill:-( Jörg is evil!! And these monster is really there or it is from Bill`s mind?