Date: 01/30/11 05:02 am Title: This love was ment to hurt
OMG...OMG...luv it so much
Date: 01/30/11 04:43 am Title: The rules are simple...ish
Enjoying it.
Date: 01/28/11 06:34 pm Title: The rules are simple...ish
-.- you are impossible ya know..I enjoyed this >.> and this IS a good story..and I bet that one person agrees
Date: 10/14/09 08:14 pm Title: This love was ment to hurt
I think your doing a great job so far, really love the story.
Been noticing a few things though, occasionally you get a word wrong here and there. The one word I notice the most is psych, which you keep using physic instead. Do you have a beta for the story? It might help get you catch a few of these type of problems that a word processor won't. It would really make the story flow a bit easier if the readers didn't have to guess what your trying to say instead of just reading it correctly the first time.
Now, I would like to reiterate I do like the story, a lot. So keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: thank you sooo much <3 but to be honest i dont know how to use beta and i really am a shitty speller. i make my friends reread my story for me ahha. but yeah. this site is new to me so i dont know what is what
Date: 10/14/09 04:28 pm Title: This love was ment to hurt
Yo. You. PLEASE MAKE IT SO BILL IS NOT A SADISTIC ASSHOLE! :D mmkay danke ^.^
this is jojo btw, and can i be ur beta??
Author's Response: haha heyy jo! and yeah .sure. i sstill dont know wht BETA is! haha
Date: 10/12/09 10:16 pm Title: Window in the Door
T-T congrats tears are pouring down my face cause of you!!
Loved it!
Love you :P
Author's Response: ahah love ur bitch ass heather. but i think i mite just have bill.......ull have to wait till laterrr
Date: 10/09/09 10:19 am Title: This love was ment to hurt
this story is so addictive. luv it :)
Author's Response: haha thanks a34;
Date: 10/05/09 05:43 pm Title: Good night Tom
yeaaaaaaaaa plsss moreeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: of course haha :]
Date: 10/05/09 04:58 am Title: Good night Tom
UGHHHHHHHH cliffhangers!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha i know i know but it'll get better.. maybe. ahha
Date: 09/05/09 01:08 pm Title: This wasn't meant to happen
Bill's an idiot...a big idiot...*cough* Maybe you should hurt Tom just to punish Bill (a)..I can hope, can't I?
Date: 09/02/09 09:28 pm Title: Mary Had a little Lamb
I ADORE this story but you already know that :P
Mr.Graff is the best
You best keep it up!
Author's Response: oh really. u already knew that....heather.. why thank you haha
Date: 09/02/09 04:15 pm Title: Mary Had a little Lamb
yay :] there's more chapters on the way
Date: 09/02/09 04:10 pm Title: Mary Had a little Lamb
I love it :D
Date: 09/02/09 02:12 am Title: Repression comes in all shapes and sizes
haha thank you ;]
Date: 09/02/09 02:11 am Title: This love was ment to hurt
thanks. i like describing things in detail but im glad its not too wordy :]
n im working on an update now
Date: 09/01/09 09:20 pm Title: This love was ment to hurt
I really like the way that this story is written, you made it descriptive yet not too wordy. Throughout the story so far I think my favorite parts are where Tom and Bill are together. Update soon!
Date: 09/01/09 03:47 pm Title: Repression comes in all shapes and sizes
Why won't people review this? It's a great story, I love it :D
Date: 08/31/09 02:53 am Title: Music Theory
omg omg omg luv it)))
Author's Response: thank you :]