Date: 12/09/18 10:56 pm Title: Bye
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this
Date: 03/08/15 11:51 pm Title: Stranger in the corner.
Aw man, imagining Tom sitting there like a twig breaks my heart because i can see he's trying to be so strong.
Date: 04/22/13 08:40 am Title: Bye
this was a awesome story!!
i wish h u would do a sequel to this??
Date: 04/22/13 08:39 am Title: Bye
this was a awesome story!!
i wish h u would do a sequel to this??
Date: 02/14/11 01:10 pm Title: Bye
it was cute . i liked it . I saw a few errors here and there but not too bad .
Date: 02/14/11 12:52 pm Title: Shower?
Not bad for your first sex scene . I am not very good at them myself but it wasnt too bad .
Date: 11/06/10 05:54 am Title: I love you.
this is going a littel fast don't you think? they met...what, a day ago, and already they're in love? i mean, dont get me wrong, i'm totally hooked, and i'm really liking reading this story, but just as some constructive critisism, it could be a lot better if you paced it a bit more.
Date: 02/10/10 04:22 pm Title: Shower?
Go Bill! =)
Author's Response: =)
Date: 02/10/10 03:40 pm Title: Help.
Excellent first chapter!! My only thought though is that if Bill was 4 stone, at 15, someone would notice his weight even when he had clothes on. Just saying...and now I'm on to read the rest XD
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 06/25/09 06:55 pm Title: Bye
aww cute story ! weird to imagine the twins like that but it worked and the story was good :D
Author's Response: Aw thank you :)
Date: 10/26/08 03:08 pm Title: Bye
i really liked this one :] for the tom's parents chapter, jorg and whatever her name was-- anna?-- they were asses. xp but that's how they do i guess, at least in this xd. i liked how it turned out and im loving those twists OoO! :D
Author's Response: Thank youu :) Yeah, Anna, and i know they were. I'm glad you like the twists!
Date: 10/25/08 03:16 pm Title: Stranger in the corner.
I understand Bill, but TOM?? Man, don't I love your twists! xD :D
Author's Response: Hah, thanks.
Date: 08/31/08 11:43 am Title: Bye
Awww :) I'm just so glad they're out of that! Nice job ;)
Author's Response: Yeaaah. Thanks :D
Date: 08/31/08 11:32 am Title: You make a very cute couple.
Aw :/ those aren't parents, they are monsters. But I'm glad he has Bill :)
Author's Response: they're not the nicest of folks, no.
Date: 08/31/08 11:24 am Title: Meet the parents.
O_O what the hell. They didn't even ask him how he was doing.
Author's Response: i know... bastards.
Date: 08/31/08 11:18 am Title: I love, love, love hair wax.
:O oh ho!
Author's Response:
Date: 08/31/08 11:15 am Title: Entertain Yourselves.
Oh geebuz xD the woman is awkward.
Author's Response: yuh-huh 8-)
Date: 08/31/08 11:09 am Title: It's a bed.
I guess it feels both good and awkward for them to be in a house after so much time X3 I don't care about 'events', I'm just looking forward to when TOm's parents will enter the scene @_@
Author's Response: hehehe