Date: 07/12/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sweet though it makes me wonder what happens next. It seems like Bill returns the feelings when he said "If only you knew." I wonder if they ever end up together. That's the good thing about an ending like this, I can decide for myself. haha.
Author's Response: Exactly. ;D Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/23/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes, it was very nice :]
i really liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 09/23/09 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww, that was cute. Tomi thought Bill was going to kiss him :P
kinda sad.
Author's Response: It is kinda sad. But it's nice, right?
Date: 08/30/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so beautiful! i think you should expand on it, though maybe part of how much i like it is that it ends here. idk... wonderful writing though. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot! If I do expand it, it will only be one more chapter and it'll be smut! :X
Date: 08/30/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. Can you make another chapter? PLEASE
Author's Response: I might. I have two other ongoing stories that need updates, so I'm not sure if I can handle three at a time without it taking forever. If I do, this can only be a two shot. But I'll try! :D Thanks for reading and reviewing.