Date: 10/30/09 03:00 pm Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
LOVELOVELOVE.
Shy Bill is amazing. Hes so adorable. I picture this in my head and it's great. Awesome chapter :D
Date: 10/30/09 02:03 pm Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
I love shy!bill! He's so cute! Tom might be slightly sketchy, but he's fun!
Date: 10/30/09 12:59 pm Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
Wow!! very nice)))) I think in the end Bill would be sex-beast in comparison to Tom))))
Thank you girls, charachters are charming)))
Date: 10/30/09 12:19 pm Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
aww this was adorable, i rather like like this fanfic (:
just kidding, LOVE this fanfic. I adored the little rant about being gay and how Windex was mentioned, thats some kinky stuff. please update soon! :D
Date: 10/30/09 11:41 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
UPDATE! PLEASE!!!
Date: 10/30/09 09:02 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
Holy ...
I think I just died.
Completely died... Oh God...
When their lips touched, I think my heart was beating even faster than theirs! And I mean it.
Oh mein Gott!
This is just so incredibly good written and I think one of my favorite fics so far!
You must update REALLY soon!
Date: 10/30/09 05:31 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
i LOVE shy/Bill! this pace is fine, but more fluff and steam befor you get all smutty. this is going well!!!! i love you!
Date: 10/30/09 04:29 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
omg! more :D This is fun :D
I hope it won`t be long untill next chapter is out !:D hurry up
Date: 10/30/09 04:07 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
This chapter was really cute that would be the perfect kissing moment ever! So are you saying tom is married? And has children? Wow does that mean bill is gonna be the other woMAN ?
Date: 10/30/09 03:09 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
"I think I liked it."
Tom smiled. "Think?"
"Okay," Bill gave up, his cheeks heating like a furnace as it obviously showed how hard he was blushing. How hard he had actually felt towards that and how much he enjoyed it. "I guess I really liked it."
And they kissed again.
OKAY. I LAUGHED REALLY HARD. =)) Bill is really really shyyy...
hmm.. im taking Tom's already liking Bill?
Date: 10/30/09 01:23 am Title: Lesson #4: Kissing is with Your Mouth
This is going great. Shy Bill is fantastic. Please don't rush them just take it nice and slow so Bill can gradually overcome his fear of sex.
Date: 10/27/09 02:53 pm Title: Lesson #3: Have Good Table Manors
Oh dear. This is so good that I got goosebumbs. I haven't read anything like this before and maybe that's the trick that got me so into it.
Can't wait to read more and I have a wild guess what is going to happen with the step 5. ;D
Date: 10/12/09 09:06 pm Title: Lesson #3: Have Good Table Manors
This is great!
Oh and yeah Andy's a "Virgin" and going on "Buisness Trips"... Or am i just gettin cynical in ma old age lol! =P
Please Update soon I reali like this stori. I onli like Bill!Virgin ones.. Don't know why but I just don't like anything else! XD I'm quirky!!
Kitten.
Date: 10/11/09 04:52 pm Title: Lesson #3: Have Good Table Manors
You HAVE to update any time soon, because I cannot wait too longer to read this amazing fic! The idea of Tom as sex therapist is INCREDIBLE! Hope to read soon the next chapter!XXX
Date: 10/11/09 12:48 pm Title: Lesson #3: Have Good Table Manors
I like Toms character already. And Bill is just a plain cutie!! Tom will teach him well!
I can't wait for the their first lesson! Something with Mouth. KISSING!
Date: 10/11/09 12:43 pm Title: Lesson #1: Know Your Fiancé
Awwh, Bill is adowuble!!!
Date: 10/07/09 04:01 am Title: Lesson #1: Know Your Fiancé
I like where this is headed. Shy Bill is so cute. I hope you add more chapter frequently.
Date: 10/03/09 07:06 pm Title: Lesson #3: Have Good Table Manors
AND they are off! lol poor bill....
Date: 10/03/09 06:19 pm Title: Lesson #1: Know Your Fiancé
well, some of the parts were things that might just be typos but.. i'm guessing u'd still want them out of there.. it's not that big of a deal, but it was things like "him" or "his" instead of he and a few minor gramatical errors..
i think u'll spot it if u read through it once more with that in mind ;)
Author's Response: Kay, much appreciated, Thanks for the review! :3
Date: 10/03/09 11:25 am Title: Lesson #3: Have Good Table Manors
*new reader alert*
uuh!! me like me like! =0
i love every part of it so far, though i feel sorry for bill, since i feel like andi's "buisnes trips" are more for pleasure than buisiness *pets bill's head*
only thing i can see that's a tad bit faulty is ur english, but i'm guessing that'll work itself out as u guys write more and more =)
update sooon xD
Author's Response: Haha, yes, Andy is a tricky bugger! And, our English? Over which parts exactly? We'd like to fix these errors! xD