Date: 06/13/10 05:37 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
2. Bill hates Toms guts and never wants to speak to him again.
Date: 06/13/10 05:23 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
1 ;DD
yayyy! omgz poor Billi, once again I loved your fic hun, it was great!
update soon!
xoxoh
Date: 06/13/10 04:45 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
TOTALLY THE 3RD OPTION!!! lol jkjk I like the 1st one :)
Date: 06/13/10 04:34 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
AHHHH awesomeness:3 I think a mix between option 1 and 2, or, mostly 2. If he forgives him it should be at the end(: Or whatever. I'm sure it'll be absolutely fantastic anyway:3
Date: 06/13/10 03:51 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
It was awesome....
i knew Tom would mess things up when he got drunk
and now, they're like ten steps backwards
i'd go for option one although i think that it's Bill who should forgive Tom
Date: 06/13/10 03:41 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
i like this 1 but 1 think you should go for the first 1
Date: 06/13/10 03:20 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
Wow, I'm just shocked at Tom's behavior. Granted, he was drunk, but that anger and forcefulness is so out of character for him. I'm looking at your options at the end here and what would Tom need to forgive him (Bill?) for? Bill did nothing wrong at all. Option 2 pretty much ends your story because how do you fall in love with someone who tries to rape you? And of course, option 3 isn't a real options. But I'm really confused about this chapter and where you're going with this. This really isn't like Tom.
Author's Response: Oh dang-nabbit! Name typo! lol, it was supposed to be BILL forgives him. That would make more sense. Thank you for pointing that out. And yes, it's suuuper out of character for Tom, but there is reason for it, which will tie together in due time. I kinda already know where I'm going next, so the options today were mainly just for the lawls.
Date: 06/13/10 03:14 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
2! but then 1 comes along! :)
Date: 06/13/10 03:02 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
omg do NOT kill Bill.
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I choose 1 please but I think Tom should have to do some pretty hard grovelling!
Date: 06/13/10 02:41 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
awwww
Poor Billa.
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Date: 06/13/10 02:17 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain
NUMBER 1!
OMG! Please update soon!
Date: 06/10/10 04:11 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
1!!!! Definitely!!!!
Date: 06/08/10 11:21 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
I VOTE NUMBER ONE! and you need to update. like now. for serious. i'm dying here!
Date: 06/08/10 08:54 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
I actually find the "Tom get's drunk and tries to make out with the dog," choise. It seems the best one to me, sinse Bill and Tom's relationship doesn't really get hurt from a form of stupidity, that can become Tom's mind at times.
Then again the "Tom get's drunk and goes too far with Bill" idea doesn't sound all that bad. Maybe my some odd force, deep down Bill likes it and ends up finding kindness deep in his heart and spares Tom a slap in the face remorse from both him and Tom....? Maybe?
Oh, and I have to admit that I loved the part in chapter nine where you put in "His mouth had trained his hands well." Was I the only one that caught how sneaky that part was (Maybe it was only sneaky to me?. I mean isn't Bill good with his tongue? And now thanks to Tom's newest lecture on using his hands, Bill has managed to work in both things while around Tom....
Either way it's a lovely story and I can't wait until you update next. I'll be looking forward to reading the update. So please update soon!
Date: 06/08/10 08:51 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
222222! x)
Date: 06/04/10 09:45 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
3.LOL:) That would be hella funny! Btw awesome chapter! Write more soon!
Date: 06/04/10 09:45 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
3.LOL:) That would be hella funny! Btw awesome chapter! Write more soon!
Date: 06/04/10 07:48 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
Btw, I am sooooo extremely anxious for Chapter 11!! Is it coming soon?!? :D
Date: 06/04/10 07:47 pm Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
TWOOOO!! I like Rebecca, she's adorable for an OFC.
Date: 06/04/10 06:39 am Title: Lesson #10: Prepare For Surprises With Friends
You know the new song, In my head, by... some Jason :D Well, the song kinda reminds me about this fic.. :)