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Reviewer: icame2party Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 05:29 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Yeaaah, those options are definitely just for the lawls alright. I hope Bill forigves him though. Like, it's not THAT bad. Tom loves him, Bill loves him. They can come to an agreement!

Reviewer: icame2party Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 05:27 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Yeaaah, those options are definitely just for the lawls alright. I hope Bill forigves him though. Like, it's not THAT bad. Tom loves him, Bill loves him. They can come to an agreement!

Reviewer: icame2party Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 05:26 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Yeaaah, those options are definitely just for the lawls alright. I hope Bill forigves him though. Like, it's not THAT bad. Tom loves him, Bill loves him. They can come to an agreement!

Reviewer: icame2party Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 05:26 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Yeaaah, those options are definitely just for the lawls alright. I hope Bill forigves him though. Like, it's not THAT bad. Tom loves him, Bill loves him. They can come to an agreement!

Reviewer: SallyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 05:24 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Well that was definitely unexpected, but really good. This is what you told me about isn't it! Tricky tricky, but has to be done even though it saddens me. I love Tom, and he seems like such a jerk in this one, but he better wisen up or i'll smack him in the face! Lmao! Awesome update sweetie!

Reviewer: Kenyatta Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/10 04:30 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

# 1 please! Awesome chapter please write more soon

Reviewer: x22rebel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/10 03:46 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

tom's practicly bleeding out on the floor of his office. ANd in the hospital he cant remember what he's done.

Or tom has something wrong with his brain and the alcohol didnt really help.

Tom goes begging at bills front door.

Tom hates himself and wont come out of his office and almost starves himself and bill comes to help him.

Coulnd think of anything else

Reviewer: PocketMunster Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 11:59 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Love this story and I choose option one :D

Reviewer: Extacccyyyfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 11:19 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

oh wow, you know what just wow. i did not think you wud make tom fuck up so much xDDDD oh shit man wow really good chapter though. you shud make bill hate him but eventually forgive him

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 06:38 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

#1 ofcourse. andy is an asshole for not calling. bill should by no means be marrying someone that treats him that poorly. keep up the good work, i look forward to more.

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 12:27 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

as long as it's not that 3rd option...i like option 1 though, Bill doesn't seem like the type to hold a grudge and the fact that Tom was drunk might change things

awesome chapter!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 12:16 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Ok.... The thought of Bill as a Mexican Bull Fighter cracked me up.

As for what happens.... I'll just go along with whatever you have in mind lol

Reviewer: Adalia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 08:13 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

;'(

It took me a half an hour to read this chapter, wasn't kind of.. internalize it :D
So, you actually know what you're gonna do, huh? Then please, please, make Tom apologise, and Bill forgive :DD Yeah, I'm too romantic, I just want a happy ending.. :)) Of course, Bill could first hate Tom, but then realize that he loves him, not Andi and.. Gonna stop now.

Reviewer: xXKommXRetteXMichXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/10 10:12 am Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

Bill kills himself?... now what would the point be behind that. Tom would be left alone and most likely end up killing himself and the whole story will be like a really weird, messed up Romeo and Juliet.

You know I still want to think that in the back of his mind, Bill sort of.... liked it. Putting aside the fact that Tom tried to rape him -___-

Then again, Bill has done a lot of forgiving.

And Tom also needs to tell Bill how he feels and maybe he can go to his house and say "Bill... I-uh... Look, I'm sorry. I was..." And Bill is just standing there, scared. Hands held tightly over his chest as if to protect himself. "I...I love you" Bill's hands drop. He looks uncertain, but moves aside to let Tom in.

And then there's a whole explanation thing and that leads to learning the next step, in Bill's house :D

That's just how I sort of thought it out in my mind, when I chose number 2!

Lovely update, hope you can update soon!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 11:12 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

o_o Wow I really hate drunk Tom... there's no option that says ``it was all a dream, Tom is not a rapist and they live happily ever after ?!`` lol I can't wait to read how Tom is going to have Bill forgive him, please update soon!

Reviewer: ruddiexox Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 10:35 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

omg tom!!! what a stupid thing to do. i vote #1 bc tom really is a good guy. i kinda don't like andreas tho...something seems fishy in thats situation...hmm

Reviewer: ruddiexox Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 10:35 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

omg tom!!! what a stupid thing to do. i vote #1 bc tom really is a good guy. i kinda don't like andreas tho...something seems fishy in thats situation...hmm

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 08:40 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

lol ok hum number 1 huh? XD

Reviewer: TWINcest Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 07:11 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

This story is AWESOME!
That's just it , nothing else to say ow exept for the part that this is EPICAMEZINGFUNNYCUTEHOTandEXTREMELYGOOD!!!
I guess I made my point xD

Reviewer: T_F_B_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 03:48 pm Title: Lesson #11: Never Drink to Avoid the Pain

1. you stay gold too

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