Date: 09/14/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is pretty good, sad thing is, is that I can see this happening in the future, like the whole illegal kids shit. As for what POV you use, doesn't matter to me.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. And the crazy part is that I'd be a third child if this was happening now.
Date: 09/07/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh getting good! One of the most original fics I've read on here!
Author's Response: Yay! :D
Date: 09/07/09 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
no problem. i love the story please update soon.
Author's Response: =) I'll try to update as fast as I can!
Date: 09/05/09 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I was going to ask if this was based off of Among the Hidden, but I read the reviews first x]
Great. Fucking. Book.
and I'm very excited for this =] Good job, much love
Author's Response: Hahah, thanks. =)
Date: 09/03/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's a good story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to write as fast as I can.
Date: 09/03/09 01:30 am Title: Chapter 2
did you get the idea from a tv show? I think I did see a tv show with the same story line hmm well anyways I still really like it and tom is effin crazy why is he always trying to beat some one Lol
Author's Response: I got it from a book called Among the Hidden, and every time I listened to the song "Forgotten Children," I thought of that book. So that's why I wrote it.
Date: 09/02/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
i read the among thr hidden series and loved it. i love bad-ass tom he is awesome. please update soon
Author's Response: OHMIGAWD. I thiiink I read that series, too! :D Thank you! I'll write as fast as I can!
Date: 08/28/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry X__x I didn't read this... because I couldn't. As much as I would love to. PLEASE separate each paragraph with a space. It makes it much less confusing, love. When you do, I'll come back :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I was in a bit of a hurry, and the thing took foreeever to post. I'll run and do that right now! :]
Date: 08/28/09 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol wow I really do love the way tom thinks
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to make him as vulgar sounding as possible! :]