Date: 07/31/12 08:36 am Title: Chapter 3
this sounds like a really good story!
u really should add the rest!
Author's Response: Gah! I'm sorry! I totally fell off a cliff with this story! >.< I really do need to get this one finished... thank you for reading anyway!
Date: 07/13/10 11:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Awww, I wanted to see them go at it, lol. It was still good though.
Author's Response: Oh trust me, that's almost the entire next chapter. I'm just putting the finishing touches on it. ;) And thank you. :)
Date: 07/13/10 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Um...I wanna call the Tokio Hotel Phone Service...I'll be sure to ask for Tom :D
(Great Job! Can't wait for the next chapter :D )
Author's Response: You've no idea how much I'd LOVE to call! lolz! And I could give you a number but I'm not very good at impersonating voices... >.> lolz! jkrnrnAnd thank you so much! It's almost done too! -happy dance-
Date: 04/25/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG...wow. WOW. This is really going in the reight direction. More pleeease
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know I really need to work on the next chapter more. I guess I've just hit a personal block. But I promise to get working on it. Worst comes to worst, I will have work begun again by summer. Feel free to bug me if I'm taking too long! :D
Date: 11/28/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this!!! :D Totally something for me xD It has a lot of SEX in it, so, yeah xD Lolz xD Biggest perv (pointing towards self) ;P I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I'm working on it! And, yes, this story is my outlet of sexual frustration. Because, I too am a ridiculous perv! I scared my guy friends the other day with a couple comments and they're like, "woah! But you're a girl." I just said, "Girls are just as pervy as guys, we just don't feel the need to broadcast it twentyfour seven!" :D Anyway, THanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/27/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD thats epic, cookies work pretty great for me to. Like i use to go to a youth group and we would have just finished dinner and i would be in the middle of talking about some extremely serous, like i'd be all into and the second the cookies came out i was like "blah blah blah ooooo cookies" i do that a lot >.> .
Author's Response: Lmao! Awesome! Cookies are good... -nods in agreement-
Date: 11/27/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
XD i like that mines more of "I don't have AD- ooooooooooooo shiny"
Author's Response: Lmao! That's some of my friends.... and it's rather entertaining to carry around something shiny in your pocket and take it out when you need to. rnrnIt was so freakin funny in Band class when, just before we hosted a competition, the pit members were bringing the trophies into the band office. Everyone was watching the boxes of trophies going by and Mr. O pick up his keys on his lanyard around his neck and shook them saying, "Oh, look, shiny! Watch up here! Ignore that shiny! Watch this one!" I nearly died laughing! Our band director figured out how teenagers work!
Date: 11/25/09 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1
lol mine tries to, its sucks being a writer and having ADHD XP
Author's Response: Lmao! Yeah. I can relate. Tho mine is more like ADOC. Attention Deficit- Oh! Colorful! :D
Date: 11/24/09 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol yeah im scared to leave some untouched but my mind is set on finishing it!
Author's Response: Ah. That makes sense. My brain just jumps subjects to other interests.
Date: 11/24/09 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Your welcome, and see im having such issues with this new fan fic im writing and its taking me FOREVER to write my chapters T_T.
Author's Response: Aw. I sowwy. I know how that feels. Wonder why some of my stories haven't been touched in.... a long time? Das ist why...
Date: 11/23/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh see im great when it comes to the chapter breaks but for awhile it was just that i didn't write enough before the breaks T_T. But from the looks of it your breaks are awesome now.
Author's Response: Why thank you! And yeah, I understand the shortness issue. Had that with another story with the most recent chapter. It took so long because I couldn't come up with another scene to fill the chapter out.
Date: 11/23/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 3
wow that waz intense..
yu shuld keep adding to thiz story
Author's Response: Lolz. ja. Will do!
Date: 11/22/09 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah i know what you mean, i slightly hate that about my fan fic, for a while i had written short chapters but now im writing nice long ones. And looking back i can't believe i wrote such small chapters!
Author's Response: Ja. My problem was my old stories didn't even have chapter breaks. I didn't know how to break up the story properly and I didn't post most of it so it didn't matter anyway.
Date: 11/21/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
BOOOOOTH!!!
Author's Response: Huh? *ist confused*
Date: 11/21/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL nice okay! I'll bug you till it is that is i remember xD But yay! I like that you have long chapters =D
Author's Response: Of course! I can't stand short chapters. They make me feel like I'm reading the story quickly. I'd rather have more to the chapter than more chapters.
Date: 11/20/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah dude! Oh my god its just insane like you think you got it figured out and then you add one small thing and it changes XD Please tell me your going to post again soon!!!
Author's Response: Of course! I can't make it predictable! And I can't make any promises but I've already got like two of my 6 page limit done so it shouldn't take long! Bug me if it does!
Date: 11/20/09 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
DANGER DANGER BRAIN OVERLOAD DANGER DANGER BRAIN OVERLOAD
Author's Response: OMG LMAO!!! HAHA! I love the reviews I get on this story! Thanks for reading!! And cheering me up!!:D
Date: 11/20/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Eeep! I think I need some alone time after reading this. Hehehe, I like all the coincidences that have them almost living across the hall and never knowing. Really enjoying it so far, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Lolz! Thank you! Glad you find it so enjoyable! This is one story that I absolutely love writing!
Date: 11/20/09 10:05 am Title: Chapter 3
I just read your whole story so far through and I really like this. The way they were always around eachother but never really seen eachother. And all the things that connect them. And love how they think alike about how they want to see eachother and interact in person. Things just fall in place and this little chance encounters were great to and how they both had to put pieces together to see what's in front of them the whole time. Especially bill's revolation was funny and now that he has him he doesn't know what to do with him. But he's at least not running away from this experience eventhough he doesn't want to have a relationship with a guy because of family. He should just do what feels right I hope. This is a great story and can't wait to see more of it.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I think this is the longest and most thorough review I've ever gotten! Thanks! I love getting these! I'm glad you're enjoying yourself! I've already begun on the next chapter and hope to have it up in the next week! :)
Date: 11/19/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
i dont know its just something got me thinking....i guess its just i wonder if something is going to happen between the two and then he'll suddenly just snap and start freaking out! UGH im starting to over think XD
Author's Response: Lolz! Yeah, don't over think. Crack is one of the warnings for a reason. I want this to be fun, silly, insane, and of course smutty. I feel like I'm writing a lot of it lately though... *sigh* oh well. If you wanna over think, go check out the W&C. It is het but it's perfect if you want to get your brain worked up.