Date: 11/04/09 05:28 pm Title: Heaven's Coming
HA FUCKING HA! Quinn got knocked over the head with a baseball bat! HOT DIGGITY DAMN TOM...I loves you xD AND shame shame shame on you for ever thinking of breaking up with Ki! the audacity of you (but I understand...you once were a manwhore...a sexy manwhore at that but thas not the point..I still understand your reasons...even if they suck giant purple polka dotted balls :D).
LOVED the chap...as always...you did great lady! :D
Author's Response: Yup! See everyone thought Tom was going to tell her he loved her, but that wasn't in the plans at all. :) I'm glad you liked the chapter so much, dearest! Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/04/09 04:39 pm Title: Heaven's Coming
SON OF A BITCH!
As much as I don't see Tom being the one to say 'I love you' like...ever...I desperately wanted him to say it. And then he didn't. I actually, out loud, freaked out. My roommate laughed at me. :D
Author's Response: LOL! Yup! You all thought it was coming, but that was definitely a twist in the story, was it not? :)
Date: 11/04/09 04:05 pm Title: Heaven's Coming
Gasp. Tom wanting to break up was the last thing on my mind. Imagine how heartbroken he would have been If he broke up with her and then found her lying on the ground all bloody and battered and bruised...he would probably have felt like even more shit than he does now. I think his comment about spending the rest of the time making it up to her was indication of deeper feelings. And i know Ki is there, she's just biding her time...
Quinn better rot in Jail.
And they should throw Brynn in there to give him free services :)
Author's Response: LOL! Mona! I completely agree; but alas, that is not what I have planned, sadly enough. And I know! I love how I threw that twist in there; everyone thought undying love was going to be admitted, but I don't really see Tom as that kind of person. I hope it all made sense though; like, his reasons why.
Date: 11/04/09 02:26 pm Title: Heaven's Coming
more pleasE! and good Tomi! came tp your sences!
Author's Response: He sure did :)
Date: 11/04/09 01:19 pm Title: Heaven's Coming
You had me panicking this chappy, missy!
I was all "Wait...WHAT? A break? No!!! Tom you retarded doofus you can't do that! NOOO!" Then I came so close to choking up when he told her that he was going to leave her.
In all, I think this is one of my favorite chapters.
Post more soon! xD
Author's Response: You know, I think it's one of my favorites too. There's so much emotion in it, and it's so bittersweet and beautiful. Thanks so much dear; I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 11/03/09 02:12 am Title: Atten-HUT!
Tom = The Sex
Quin = Ughhhhhhhh >:(
Author's Response: I agree wholeheartedly.
Date: 11/02/09 11:37 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
Oh my God you are evil...and I love you. XD
Oh and yay sex.
I'm already getting impatient for the next chapter. I can't wait!
Author's Response: *grins mischieviously* I guess I still got it, eh? Thanks love. :)
Date: 11/02/09 05:42 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
I KNEW HE WOULD BE BACK!
They just can't be fully happy for an extended period of time, ay?
What is with this psychotic bastard uggggggh.
I hope he doesn't hurt her :(
And hmm, I wonder what Tom wanted to tell her? I have an Idea, but it's just a hunch...idk.
Either way they are so cute, and that part where Tom curled up next to her and said he'll always be there...I hope he keeps his word...that was sweet.
Sucks about her mom though, ugh.
But I'm really anxious about this Quinn thing :/
Author's Response: MONA! My love! :) I have missed you! And yes, I do believe you said he would be back and look; the bastard has arrived. And what do you think Tom wanted to say? He seemed quite anxious, didn't he? I'm glad you liked the chapter dear, but I did leave it on an omnious note. :/ We'll see where this takes us!
Date: 11/02/09 05:10 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
omg!!!!!!!
this fic is great! i love tomXofc and this one is very good!!i love how tom is being so sweet!
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much, darling. I'm so glad to hear it!
Date: 11/02/09 05:08 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
Wait for it....SUPER TOMI!!!
Author's Response: You think so? :/
Date: 11/02/09 03:40 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
More please! TOMMMM SAVE HERR!!!!!! PLEASEEE
Author's Response: We shall see, dearest.
Date: 11/02/09 02:34 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
Oh fuck no! Tom just wanted to tell her that he loves her, right? And now Quinn is back ripping it all apart again... I am reading this with mixed emotions as I know this is going to be a new challenge for Ki and Tom... You better get this next chapter up soon!! :-)
Author's Response: LOL! I love how powerful you started out, Lelaina, all angry and what not. Of course, I'm not going to tell you what Tom was going to tell her, but it also may have been something bad, just keep that in mind.
Date: 11/02/09 02:02 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
OH NOOOOO!!!! Quinn......I hate that guy.
Author's Response: Me as well. :/
Date: 11/02/09 02:00 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
D: as if quinn comes back! tom best get his arse out there quick!
Author's Response: We'll see what happens. :/
Date: 11/02/09 12:36 pm Title: Atten-HUT!
DAMMIT! A cliffie!!!! D: oh how I hate these!!
BUT...it was good :) I hope Quinn gets his ass handed to him in the next chap
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it good, despite the cliffie :) You're amazing dear; thanks for the review.
Date: 10/29/09 11:48 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
I seriously LOVE Tom. LOVE LOVE LOVE! The way you've written him... UNF! One hundred percent team Tom right now. IF YOU MAKE SOMETHING BAD HAPPEN BETWEEN THEM. I SWEAR. IMM KEEL YEW.
jk bb :D
anyways... this chappie was amazing... AS USUAL!! maybe some sex soon jaja? :P
(and idk... maybe this is a bit wrong... but something inside me wants Lola and Kevin not to work out and Lola get with Georg x____x IM SO BAD I KNOW :x)
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BB! PARTY HARD!!
Author's Response: *giggles* I love your reviews Paige! They make me so happy! Thanks so much for the well wishes and I really appreciate the time you take to write such long reviews :) Sex soon too; good sex! :P
Date: 10/29/09 09:30 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
That was a sad and happy chapter all at the same time and I loved every bit of it.
Author's Response: Good! I'm so glad to hear it! :)
Date: 10/29/09 08:55 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! 21 is a blast. ;) hahaha. Great chapter. Silly Tom being drunk while meeting the parents. That's a great first impression. hahaha
Author's Response: LOL! Almost as good as Kiyomi's! :P I'm glad you liked the chapter dear, even though it had a twinge of sadness to it.
Date: 10/29/09 07:00 pm Title: Public Enemy Number One
Enjoy your 21st! (From a fellow Scorpio sistah.)
Author's Response: Thanks love! :) I appreciate the well wishes!
Date: 10/27/09 01:05 am Title: Tickle Me Pink
great chapter!
Author's Response: :) thanks so much!