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Reviewer: KittyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/09 02:41 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero

Brynn is such a biatch !
But love this story =) keep going !!

Author's Response: She surreee is! Thanks so much love, I'll be sure to update soon!

Reviewer: DNT4GET Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/09 01:47 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero

Awww poor Kiyomi :(
Tom you...gah! Get your head out of your ass boy!

post more soon :D

Author's Response: I sure will dear! I love writing this story!

Reviewer: Emmerson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/09 01:44 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero

i love this story! it gives me chills sometimes.

Author's Response: Ohh I like that! I'm glad you like it so much, dear :)

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/09 09:02 pm Title: Can't Teach an Old Dog New Tricks

BAM! Get on his ass Ki!!!!!! xD

Author's Response: LOL so you liked that?

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/09 01:54 pm Title: Can't Teach an Old Dog New Tricks

They are both acting like jealous idiots.

That's pretty much my summary for this chapter. :)

Author's Response: LOL And a good summary it is! Because it is the damn truth.

Reviewer: Emmerson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/09 11:46 pm Title: You Drive Me Crazy

i love this story so far keep up teh good work hun!

Author's Response: Thanks so much; I intend to! :)

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/09 12:29 am Title: You Drive Me Crazy

Oh once again...amazing chap! :)

Author's Response: Thank you darling!

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/09 07:40 pm Title: You Drive Me Crazy

OH , how the plot thickens!

The sexual energy between these two could be smashed with a hammer I swear. I keep thinking they are going to bang...

That was an intense makeout session haha.

I don't want her to get too involved if Tom is still doing that bitch though. Like I really cannot stand her ugh.

Author's Response: And that is my point. :) Don't you worry, there is more roux to add to the stew and things will thicken a lot more than you think; this is just the beginning, m'dear.

Reviewer: Twins of Riot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/09 05:55 pm Title: You Drive Me Crazy

MORE please! LOve it! love how they cannot seem to let their minds go without thinking aubout eachother:D
something like a paragraph in this happend to me once.. but slightly different. the guy was really close to kissing me... and then he turned away. and I was like....f*ck! What just happend... and everybody tells me that he likes me and such.. (ok not really the same story as here.. but still:P) I'd love to read more!!!!

Author's Response: Don't you worry dear, more is coming! Thank you so much for the review; I love hearing from people! Especially since you like it oh so much. :)

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/09 09:08 pm Title: Public Enemy Number One

I don't think so!
Not every story has to go at a snails pace. I honestly think its going at a normal pace.

Author's Response: Okay good :) See I can never tell because that's just how things come out sometimes, you know? But good; I don't want to rush things and then everything is just weird. :) Hope you like the new chapter dear!

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 08:49 pm Title: Yo, Eggroll

HAHAHA “You can either sleep with me now or later. Your choice,”.

Tom is such a idiot.

Love it love love it!

So she's going to be working for them on tour huh? I sense a WHOLE lot of stuff brewing. And definitely drama, from that bynn character who I think Tom is more involved in then he is letting on.

But anyway, I think it's awesome that he suggested her to Jost. Like he obviously kinda likes her...I hope a bit more than just "fuck her" like her...

In any event, awesome stuff.

I was literally giddy when he mentioned her working for them. And then the voicemails he left ahhaha.

Too cute!

Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you found it so entertaining; I though it was too, I had a good time writing it. :) And oh yeah, this is just the beginning. I have some wicked things planned, don't you worry! I'm just worried it's moving a little too fast?

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 07:06 pm Title: Yo, Eggroll

UGH! LOVE! :)

Author's Response: <3!

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 06:57 pm Title: Strike Your Name From My Mind

OH DEAR HEAVEN...I LOVED it!!!! gawd oh gawd oh gawd!

I loved it XD

Author's Response: :D Awesome dear! I'm SO glad to hear it!

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 06:45 pm Title: He's Expecting

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

sorry for screaming...I can't help it xD it was THAT GOOD!!

Author's Response: LOL! I love how your "h"s run off the page! <3 x pi !

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 06:31 pm Title: Public Enemy Number One

I have no words...and I don't know if I wanna faint or do a happy dance.

that was REALLY GOOD! xD

Author's Response: Well thank you love! Glad you think so :)

Reviewer: KittyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 11:20 am Title: Yo, Eggroll

One of the best stories here 4 sure =) ! update soon

Author's Response: You just made me smile dear :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Cynnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/09 02:30 am Title: Yo, Eggroll

i just read this story. I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!!! its really interesting. Please post more soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it dear! Thanks so much for the review and everything! :) I'll do the best I can!

Reviewer: KittyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 03:20 pm Title: Strike Your Name From My Mind

Amaziinggg

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 05:59 pm Title: Strike Your Name From My Mind

Well Geewiz Tom is such a whore.
Ugh, I don't like that.
And he's getting Kiyomi all hot and bothered, mean while he's screwing that idoit Bryon or whatever the hell her name is. Not cool.
Kiyomi is smart to resist him.
But for how long with she?
I mean...Tom does just ooze of sex.

Ugh.

Looooooove it darling! :)

Author's Response: UM TOTALLY SEX. He oozes it but the girl has SOME willpower. BUT there's a reason why, but we'll get to that later :) LOL! And yeah Brynn is a whore, who gets in the way, but is Tom really telling the truth about her being his girlfriend? Hmmm.. 0:) Glad you loved it dear! Til next time!

Reviewer: Twins of Riot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 05:58 pm Title: Strike Your Name From My Mind

IEEEEPPPPP:D:D:D MORE PLEASE!!! GO TOMI! DON't let her down just cuz she won't do you yet!! :D yeeeyyyy

Author's Response: More is coming soon I promise! :) And Tom is a silly man, isn't he? We shall see what he is up to!

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