Date: 09/29/09 12:01 pm Title: Then I'm Fucking Rafiki
haha i love the little sarcastic commenst in the story! i LOL'd!
Author's Response: Sarcasm is my middle name :)
Date: 09/27/09 01:20 am Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
HOLY SHIT Tom? Girlfriend? :O oh damn...hell has frozen over xD
and Kiyomi kudos to you lady! (you and your motherfucking roll xD love that part by the way) total Tom pwnage! whoot! good chap! i was completely shocked by Tom at the end but at least he aint being a lil beotch anymore and is being a MAAAAAAAAAAN! a sexy hot man! BUT this is Tom we are talking about here...why do i have the feeling he's gonna fuck up again? i just know he is...its what guys do! yea gurls do too by we own up to our bullshit...well...i do at least xD
Author's Response: Psh, I do too thank you very much! Boys are a wholllle 'nother story all together.
Date: 09/26/09 09:16 pm Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
Ohemgee!
He wants her to be his girlyfriend!
I'm not sure if that is the best step to take right now. I don't believe that he is mentally in the state to be in a monogamous relationship right now. I think he's once again saying whatever the hell he can to get her to stay, and he'll be back in Brynn's slot before long.
Then again, I may just be extremely pessimistic.
Hmm.
Author's Response: You know, this could actually go both ways. *cackles*
Date: 09/26/09 06:02 am Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
She has to say yes
Author's Response: Hm we shall see!
Date: 09/25/09 05:55 pm Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
hm, I dunno TOm.. You screwed up big time! but.. seeing that she's utterly and completely in lOVE with you.. I think she might just forgive you.... more please!!!!!
Author's Response: He really did screw up big time; I mean, I don't know about you guys, but if I walked in on the guy I liked fucking another girl, even though I wasn't his girlfriend, I'd feel pretty shitty and unforgiving.
Date: 09/25/09 05:14 pm Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
kiyomi has to say yes! update soooooooooon.
Author's Response: LOL oh so she has to? Hm, we'll see about that. :P
Date: 09/25/09 03:51 pm Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
Awwww :)
Tom finally got his head out of his butt. Good for him. I was about to smack the guy for being such an block head.
Author's Response: Lol weren't we all? And I love the insult "block head". You don't hear it too much these days. :P
Date: 09/25/09 03:08 pm Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
this story it truely awesome. it has made me cry, hurt, pissed, happy, jump for joy, i love it update soon please!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh I most certainly will! I'm glad you like it so much dear! :)
Date: 09/24/09 07:47 pm Title: Those Be Fightin' Words
OMFG.
WHY.
WHY.
He fucks her, and then decides to just ignore her. HE IS SUCH A DOUCHEBAG. Like now she needs to leave for real. He is so heartless.
Tom, there is NO real love in you!
Author's Response: *holds Tom's black heart* There really isn't.rnrnrn...or is there?
Date: 09/23/09 09:21 pm Title: Those Be Fightin' Words
:( Noo make it better please..! Blah stupid Tom..! He should stop acting like an asshole! Update soon Please :)
Author's Response: I shall, m'dear! And yes, yes he should, but you know he won't. :P
Date: 09/23/09 09:20 pm Title: Those Be Fightin' Words
I have no words after reading this chap. I am completely shocked and pissed off by Tom's actions...I mean got damn...he acting like a lil bitch!
Kiyomi deserves better...so much better than the way Tom is treating her...he could at least talk to her! ugh...I'm so upset with Tom...he's being a penis head. I still love him lol but damn...he is an ass...literally. anywho...good chap...update soon...let Kiyomi get revenge...make Tom suffer and all that jazz LOL :)
Author's Response: Oh trust me, Mr. Kaulitz will suffer love; but do we all so soon forget that Kiyomi slept with Tom? Granted, he had no right to ignore her, but did she set herself up for it?
Date: 09/23/09 06:03 pm Title: Those Be Fightin' Words
MORE PLEASE!!! TOM!! YOU'RE a ****** ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!! Love it!
Author's Response: *dances* Thanks dear!
Date: 09/23/09 04:47 pm Title: Those Be Fightin' Words
tom's and absolute jerk. end of.
update soon?
Author's Response: Update soon, m'love :)
Date: 09/23/09 03:34 pm Title: Those Be Fightin' Words
did that just happen!?
Author's Response: Sure looks like it, doesn't it? *giggles mischieviously*
Date: 09/22/09 05:48 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero
I usually don't read Tom/OFC stories.. but ohmygoshh i love this story ^_^ I just read the first 8 chapters all at once and I'm pretty positive that this story is becoming addicting. :) The writing is fantastic; I hope to read more soon ^_^
Author's Response: Oh I love when people don't usually read stuff like this like my story! Thanks so much boo, I'm really glad you think so highly of it and I hope to hear from you soon!
Date: 09/21/09 08:59 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero
Oh shit...
TOM YOU (BLEEPING) ASSHOLE!!!! THE (BLEEPING) NERVE OF YOU TO DO THAT IN A CLUB WITH THAT RAT (yes I said rat) INFESTED TRAMP SCALLY WAG (spelling? who cares...I'm on a roll :P) AND KIYOMI IF YOU LEAVE I DON'T BLAME YOU GURL BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD STAY AND MAKE TOM'S SEXY ASS SUFFER, THEN BANG THE MONSOON OUT HIS ASS SO HE KNOW WHAT A REAL WOMAN IS LIKE AND NOT SOME CHICKEN HEADED HO...THEN BANG HIM AGAIN (cuz you just can't do Tom Kaulitz once...no matter how much of a man-whore he is...he's a sexy man whore) so....yea xD good chap!
Author's Response: HAHA! No, no you can't just do Tom once. I wholeheartedly agree. Now I just have to get that first time rolling... *sighs* Loved the rant; thanks for the review!
Date: 09/21/09 07:58 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero
Arrg.. poor Kiyomi :( I really hope that she is not just gonna pack up and leave or something.. She should make Tom suffer haha! And then maby fuck him? yess! I really, really really hate Brynn, make her go awaaayy!! update very sooon please :)
Author's Response: A very soon update is in the forecast and I'm really glad you're liking the story!
Date: 09/21/09 06:48 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero
THAT FUCKING BITCH!
I AM SICK AND TIRED OF BRYNN OMG I HATE HER! AND TOM WHY ARE YOU WITH HER STD INFESTED ASS? AND KIYOMI WHY ARE YOU KISSING ON TOM IF YOU KNOW YOU ARE STILL PARANOID ABOUT SEX AND SO ON?
*storms off*
Author's Response: *giggles after* It's allll part of my master plan!
Date: 09/21/09 04:28 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero
OMG! TOM YOU PIG!!!!!! more please!
Author's Response: More soon! Promise!
Date: 09/21/09 03:39 pm Title: Phillip Labonte, You Are My Hero
gah. update soon. i love this story! xD
Author's Response: I will do so dear; thanks for the review and glad you like the story!