Date: 10/20/14 01:04 pm Title: At late hours
Hmmm, IMO this needs another proof-reading. And it moved too fast, so many missed opportunities between first kiss and sexing... :(
I liked this, I swear I did, but I didn't love it. I've definitely read better from you. I think you're a better writer than this. Sorry for the lackluster review... maybe it's my mood or something. :(.
Date: 02/24/14 01:10 am Title: At late hours
Awh so sweet and so hot at the same time. :)
Date: 11/22/13 10:11 am Title: At late hours
AHH PERFECTION!
Date: 03/30/10 11:41 pm Title: At late hours
it killed me but dont you have a story without too much intimacy
Date: 09/20/09 04:19 pm Title: At late hours
WOW, i really love this! It's so sweeeeeeet
Date: 06/02/09 04:13 pm Title: At late hours
One of THE BEST shorts i've read-love the romatic, gentle tone!
Date: 05/26/09 08:17 pm Title: At late hours
I am so glad I read this! It was beautiful and not full of smut, and I could feel the Twins emotion! Beautiful and not to sugary, just reomatic and beautiful!
Date: 03/12/09 07:27 pm Title: At late hours
awww the last bit was really cute !!!
Date: 02/07/09 05:59 pm Title: At late hours
This story lit up my evening. It wasn't too sugary at all. I loved it.
Date: 02/06/09 03:24 pm Title: At late hours
I thought it was very very good! I loved all of the fluff that you put throughout the story. You know just the little things that make it seem like Bill and Tom!
Date: 01/09/09 11:55 pm Title: At late hours
It was beautiful.
Author's Response: thank you !
Date: 12/31/08 04:34 am Title: At late hours
this was awesome.! Adorabill.! HOT.! Amazing.!
I loved it(:
Author's Response: adorabill LOL xD thank you so much !
Date: 12/19/08 07:41 pm Title: At late hours
That was sooo sweet, and wasn't sugar coated @ all. I've read some really over done ones. But this was perfect, still very in character. Congrats on a wonderful one-shot. Yay!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm surprised people still read my old fics xD it made me smile hearing you say this !!!
Date: 12/03/08 04:04 pm Title: At late hours
awww cuteee loved it , ty again lucy hehe great as useral
love luccyyy x
Author's Response: hihi, hi lucy ,) hey, question, it says your name is luna, but you call yourself lucy, which one's the right one? thank you for this, much love
Date: 10/31/08 02:59 am Title: At late hours
it wasnt too sugar coated, i loved it. I could picture every word, and i like that in a story. Good job! Im gonna add you to my fav authors too...my first! oh and pineapple.
Author's Response: oh my God, thank you so much <3 this meant a lot to me, I love reviews that make me blush and smile, again thank you !!!
Date: 10/25/08 10:15 pm Title: At late hours
it was good, but I think you sort of rushed the emotion. Like you wanted to get it over and done with, in a sense. I'm sure thats not how you originally planned it, but thats how it turned out.
other than that...
It
was
adorable!!
I think Bill wearing Toms shirt was my favorite part! It seems like just the thing Bill would do!
Author's Response: it was rushed, I know! but this was one of my first fics ever, I think it was the third or something, my grammar was bad, my characterizations worse xD I'm glad you liked it though. If you check out some of my more reacent work, wheither it be a one-shot or a chaptered fic, you will find a big improvement, my language and plot skills have improved and I've gotten myself a beta so grammar mistakes are basically non-existent ;) thank you for reviewing me, it means a lot !
Date: 10/17/08 10:42 pm Title: At late hours
Aww, this was so cute! You definately got what you aimed for!
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so much ,)