Date: 09/30/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 5:Day 4 continued... and Day 5!!!
That was awesome!!! I wish I could write like that!
Author's Response: Lol, yea! I'm glad you ,liked it though!
Date: 09/29/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 5:Day 4 continued... and Day 5!!!
ok, so i really like this....it's a great plot for a horror movie and it seems really good...there are some things i'd like to suggest though, you do have a great story, but i mean i feel like the girls need more reason to staying at the hotel. if i found a finger in a bag of chips, i'd want to run...if there was blood dripping from the roof, i'd need more reason to stay. there's a lot of freaky stuff going on, but i feel as if there's not enough reason to stay with all the freaky stuff going on. and what i guess i'm a little unsure what the deal is with bill....he's dead right? or perhaps that's the way you wanted it...for us to be unsure even when it was over.....anyways i really liked it, kept me reading it all the way through, and i feel that if you develop it a bit more it could be one heck of a story/movie
Author's Response: Thank you. And Bill isn't dead. He was dead but Tom brought him back to life. In the movie its going to have more details about the chant and it goes more in depth. We just really needed to give everyone a basic idea as to what was to happen.
Date: 09/25/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 5:Day 4 continued... and Day 5!!!
It just keeps getting more and more interesting every time! =D
Author's Response: yup and now its done
Date: 09/24/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: Day 4(PART 1!!!)
I'm really liking ur story! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! you'll really like the next chapter then! And its almost done...
Date: 09/24/09 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: Day 4(PART 1!!!)
Holy damn...
Date: 09/21/09 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: DAY 1
ok, im going to be honest, this story confuzzled me
Author's Response: that's okay. It's suppose to confuse you to a certain degree. If it doens't then there's no point in the secrecy. But all things will be unveiled in chapter 4!!!
Date: 09/05/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 2:Day 2
as odd as it iss for a different take on the boys. its quite interseting. keeps you going and makes you want to know whats going on.
So in other words....UPDATE AS ALOT!!...lol
Author's Response: Ok! Thank you! Yea, they get alot worse... lol =^.-=
Date: 09/05/09 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2:Day 2
as odd as it iss for a different take on the boys. its quite interseting. keeps you going and makes you want to know whats going on.
So in other words....UPDATE AS ALOT!!...lol
Author's Response: I will, trust me... i will