Date: 06/11/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
Are you continuing this? I think this has a lot of potential, i can not imagine what you have planned with so many warnings, though i would love to find out! I hope you havent forgotten this! :D
Date: 03/30/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
Itīs absolutle... I... I donīt know the word!! Itīs fantastic! Canīt wait until the next chap, please post mor soon!!
Date: 03/15/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
what going to happen next
Date: 03/07/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
OMG I need more. Please. Now. ?
Date: 12/25/09 10:15 am Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
Wikid!! I like it haha a shock for tom (: please update!!!
(: merry cristmass
Date: 09/26/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
OMG! I want to know what happenes next! Why did that Jacob kid call Bill mommy?!?!?1
Date: 08/28/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
D:
Mommy? woah lol
Date: 08/28/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
It was a clearer than last time. There was a moment that I needed to reread but eventually I understood. I like where this is going!! I'm in a bit of a fog of EXATLY what this is about, but that's the adventure, well for me!! Could you just explain to me what its about, I mean from the summery it didn't quite do it for me but all in all GREAT JOB!!!!! *gives u a cookie =D*
Date: 08/28/09 09:41 am Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
Bill having a son sounds so cute.
I can't wait to read more of this.
Date: 08/28/09 06:42 am Title: Chapter 2 - 1.
o.O
I'm confused.
Immensely.
Fix it soon pls (:
Date: 08/26/09 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Idk what to say about this so far. It's good but I have no idea what's going on >_O bah lol.
But I like it and I'll continue reading it x]
Author's Response: I promise one hundred percent it'll make sense real quick!!
Date: 08/26/09 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I liked it! I'm a tad bit confused but me thinks if you keep going it'll be clearer :)
Author's Response: Thnaxs! And yes, I promise it'll get clear real quick!! :)
Date: 08/26/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
At first I was confused, and so I have a tip for you =P Try putting the dialogue of the two different people in their own paragraphs. Putting a line from the mother and then another line from the boy in the same paragraph is actually incorrect... and can lead to all sorts of confusion X__x
Author's Response: Whoops!! :P Thanxs for pointing out the mistake! It was super late when I wrote this and most likely half asleep. lolz I'll be sure to go back and fix.