Date: 12/17/09 05:07 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
omg!!! the true was reveled!! XD
please continue ! XD
love this story!! want them to be together!! XD
Author's Response: yep! truth was revealled! XD they'll get together...just not right now. more soon promise!
Date: 12/13/09 03:04 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
Oh.. oh no :( Poor TOM!
Author's Response: x) what makes you say poor Tom only? Bill's hurting too! lol thanks for reading/reviewing hun!
Date: 12/12/09 11:53 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
ahhhhhhhhh :D:D:D why couldn't they have a little cat fight? right then and there!
Author's Response: lol i'll take that "ahhhhhh" as a good thing? lol well they did have a fight.... just not a cat fight.
Date: 12/12/09 07:02 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
Aww damn. I was afraid of this, but you can't really blame Tom though. Bill is the one with the change of heart here and THAT is Tom's fault.
There's already a past between them that already feels like a great divide but they can't really ignore the way they react towards each other. Bill may have gotten the ultimate high my marking Tom like so, but he can't deny that fucking Tom was an even bigger high and addiction. Yes, that's why he runs away, but I just don't know how soon Tom will forgive him this. The man after all is supposed to have gotten rid of Tom or at least help bring him down, but I can't see Bill doing any of this, even now that all the cards are on the table.
Yes, Tom has an edge now over Bill, but how far would he go to exploit it when there are still those newly awakened feelings inside of him? Yes, he might doubt them now, not his own as much as Bill's but I hope if Bill truly feels something for him, that he tries to make amends somehow.
Accepting Tom's chain would mean having his protection, but then Bill's life is at stake. He would basically betray his own gang and that would mean that they would be out for his blood, but boy, what a team would they make in the same gang. XD
Author's Response: Yea it had to be done. I don't blame anyone really for the way this is panning out but my head is twisted as fuck sometimes so it just ends up writting and not giving me a say in the matter. lol. This is probably one fo the best reviews I've read for this story so far. I love long reviews and hearing exactly what you think! danke hun! We shall see in the next few chapters how Tom deals with this edge/advantage he has over Bill. And yea they would make a damn good team in my opinion on the same gang. XD More is in the makings! *dances*
Date: 12/12/09 07:08 am Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
I really hope you plan on updating really soon!!! I want to know who Tom is going to kill for Bill, Dame and/or George.
Can't wait for the next confrontation!!!
Author's Response: hehe the new chapter is in the process of being started/finsihed so I'm hoping the new update will soon too!
Date: 12/12/09 12:56 am Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
omg cliff hanger update
Author's Response: hehehe I'm not really one for leaving chapter's off with a cliff hanger but this one had to be done like this.
Date: 12/12/09 12:53 am Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
damn it Bill! why can't he just accept the necklace, wear it and love Tom like he's supposed to. even fictional Bill can't let love be.
can't wait for more
Author's Response: he did take the chain from Tom. Its mentioned in the beginning/middle of the chapter when he runs out of the room x). lol Billl's an odd character in this though lol
Date: 12/12/09 12:44 am Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
Oh wow...great chapter...Poor Tom though...
Author's Response: hehehe thank you hun. really. yea poor Tom in a way but it's not just him hurting now
Date: 12/11/09 10:35 pm Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
You definitely succeeded in it..... I knew it was coming just not this soon and not that way, the whole chain thing I did not see coming at all, I never even thought it was possible, guess I was wong with that.
Author's Response: YAY! Yea I was originally planning on that chapter being a little further down the road in this but the way I have the next few chapters planned out it needed to be now. x)You didn't see the whole Tom giving Bill his chain thing? ö another surprise?! *dances* I'm doing good lately!
Date: 12/11/09 09:35 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
-growls- that fucking DAME! I just want him to die!!! Good thing he's not real cus I can say that! I love this story! I'd tell you to update but you kinda just did... so...keep up the good work?
Author's Response: Yes I know eh? Dame's an....UGH! I don't like him at all either. It is a good thing he isn't real cause he'd have a lot of people going after him that read this lol. Well that's what I think anyways. Update will be up as soon as I can get it finished.
Date: 12/11/09 09:02 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
Oh wow... i hope that Bill and Tom can work this out and get together... somehow...
Author's Response: ah we shall see if they can work it out. dont know how it'll happen though but lets hope it does work out!
Date: 12/11/09 08:15 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
WOW.....didn't see any of that coming.....just wow..... No other words to explain how I feel about this chapter.....can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: *dances* i surprised you! i surprised you! i surprised you! lol okay now that my hyper attack is over... thanks for reading hun! I was hoping this chapter would come as a surprise of sorts for you all! i guess i succeeded?
Date: 12/06/09 06:52 pm Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
Hmm.. this is a confusing story.. :) I like it. But don't tom now that it was bill that tortured him? Continue soon! :D
Author's Response: ö im not trying to make it confusing! crapola. and no tom doesn't know yet that it was Bill who tortured him. its coming soon though i think. more will be up soon-ish...
Date: 12/06/09 01:16 am Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
so the sex was a dream? wow! it was an awesome dream. awww Tom's in love! thats awesome.
i can't wait to read about Tom playing Barbie with his sister, that would be so cute
Author's Response: yep! twas all a dream! a very vivid dream mind you lol. and yes Tom is in love but I think he's terrified about it. went cryignto daddy didnt he? lol
Date: 12/05/09 04:32 pm Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
Aw! This is sooo cute!
Author's Response: x) thanks for reading hun. x)
Date: 12/05/09 01:25 pm Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
was that a dream tom had? did he only dream that? omg, i totlly thought it was realll!!!!!
Author's Response: yes and yes. that was only a dream that Tom had. it wasnt real. lol
Date: 12/05/09 11:53 am Title: THREE: Are You Scared of the Past? Do You Think That You Might Crash? Do You Think That You’re in too Deep?
LIKE!
Date: 12/05/09 01:49 am Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
awwwwww so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more babe, this was scorching hotness!
Author's Response: XD haha it was kinda hot wasnt it? more is in the makings
Date: 12/04/09 07:53 pm Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
AWWWW! You know, I know they're supposed to be enemies, but they can't deny this chemistry between them. Like, really. And look at the difference Bill's made in Tom's life already! And vice versa.
Loving it! <3
Author's Response: yea they're supposed to really hate each other but they're FINALLY starting to learn that they can't deny the obvious anymore. i'm just waiting for them to actually rip each other clothes off in this for real. lol won't happen for a while yet but it's coming! yea the change bill has made ion toms life is more obvious than tom on bills but glad you picked it up! i was hoping someone would notice the change in Tom! yaye you!
Date: 12/04/09 07:35 pm Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
I am in love with this story. I really wait for this to be updated every day! (i do have a life) PLEASE UPDATE
Author's Response: hehe i'm super glad you like it this much hun. i'm sorry about the lack of always updating but my brain and fingers always end up getting into huge arguments and refuse to work with each other so its hard to get chapters out sometimes. lol this time they liked each other so the update was faster x)