Date: 01/08/10 10:38 pm Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem For The Angels Part One
I hope bill and tom go and kill dame and georg for what they did to bills sister. O.o I just got an image of bill and tom fighting against two other guys and I got kind of a Mr. and Mrs. Smith moment....in other words it's hot
Author's Response: haha mr and mrs smith moments are in my head now lol. what i have in my head right now is hot, so i'm gonna agree with you on that. as for tom and bill killing dame and georg who knows whats going to happen. thanks for reading! x)
Date: 01/08/10 10:28 pm Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem For The Angels Part One
i'm glad they're together again...
i knew something like this would happen after bill's talk with his "boss"...
i hope bill doesn't make anything reckless that results in him and tom getting hurt...looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: hehe yea it's good they're together again. lets just hope that he doesn't do anything too stupid cause then that would be tragic and not good. thanks for reviewin/reading hun! muchly apreciated!
Date: 01/03/10 04:43 pm Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
(L) L.O.V.E it!!!!
(A) please writ more *_________*
Author's Response: awe thanks hun! muchluy appreciated! x) i'm in the process of working on the 13th chapter. x)
Date: 12/20/09 12:58 am Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
aw.so cute. and sad..
Author's Response: x) mhmm cute und sad. thanks for reading hun x)appreciated muchly
Date: 12/19/09 11:10 pm Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
Rayne reminds me of Sam XD Bill's daughter on Parent Trap :)
They should be friends X3
And make Bill and Tom make up like NAO! -glares-
Author's Response: hahaha we shld so write a one shot about them actually meeting and becoming friends. LOL random yes so don't ask. LOL NEVER! THEY SHALL NEVER MAKE UP!!!! *evil laugh* lol i'm kinda hyper atm. lol
Date: 12/19/09 10:58 pm Title: ELEVEN: I Am The Venom In Your Skin, I Am The Monster In Your Head
When I started reading I said to myself: Why does this sounds familiar?
Yhne it hit me that I already have read part of this chappie.
Poor Tomi :( -heartbreak-
Author's Response: hahaha! you read like the whole chapter of this weeks ago! The ending was just missing. lol BLONDE MOMENT!! it wasn't me for once?! OH JA!!! *happy dance* hehe poor tom is the general reaction to this chapter. what about bill?! lol
Date: 12/19/09 10:37 pm Title: TEN: It Sounds Like A Scene From American Pie
NO!!!! I refuse to believe it was a wet dream!!! -shakes head-
Hehe Tom playing Barbie's, I so have to see that one day xP
Author's Response: YES!!!! it was only a wet dream! Its horrible news i noe Jumbie but are you sure you'll be able to go on knowing it was only a dream?! ö haha a side chapter of tom playing barbies and dressing up with his little sister as a princess would be epic! LOL
Date: 12/19/09 10:18 pm Title: NINE: He’s the Salve for His Nerves and Worries but the Cause for the Best Adrenaline Rush
Nyya!!! -giggles-
I love Billa, and I know Tom does too XD He's so possessive, and we know that. Thankies for dedicating this to me wuvs!
I read it when you posted, but with school I just didn't review. So here I am doing it NAO. -huggus-
Author's Response: ah de nada Jumbie! you needed the dedication that week! school kicked your ass hardcorely bad!! *huggles back*
Date: 12/19/09 09:57 pm Title: EIGHT: It Was An "Oh Shit, What Did I Just Do?" Moment
I don't like any pairing that's not Bill/Tom >.<
Ha, you deserved that Geo. Billa loves Tomi and NOT you XD
I'm reviewing all the chapters I missed :P
Author's Response: lol I even mentioned the other day that i dnt like bill/georg pairings and yet i have MY story with it as a pairing. i fail at life. i really do. lol and yea Georg did/does deserve what Bill did. ;)
Date: 12/19/09 09:54 pm Title: SEVEN: Your Station Amongst Men Will Show Your Value In Due Time
I always enjoy a bitchy Billa and a Tom so not wanting to keep up with his tantrums XD
I also realized I have a Trümper/Kaulitz fetish X3 I just love when they use the last names to refer to each other, like in our story -jumbie dance-
Author's Response: yes bitchy bill is fun to write if i'm completely honest with you. your fetish with the whole Trümper/Kaulitz thing is odd Jumbie. lol its okay though. it is kinda hot. SHHH! don't give away the surprise! lol
Date: 12/19/09 01:44 pm Title: FIVE: Playtime For The Exhibitionst
lol i must say.. public sex is fun ;] well someone watching anyway LOL
Author's Response: HAHAHA that just made my day. thanks for reading hun!
Date: 12/19/09 04:42 am Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
Damn, that girls smart! You're doing amazingly well, plz keep it up.
Author's Response: really? amazingly well? *dances* thanks hun!
Date: 12/19/09 03:51 am Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
Wow! Rayne is one smart girl! I really hope next chapter has Tom going up to Bill's aunt's house looking for him!!! Maybe Tom taking Bill away from SinBiz is in the future?
Author's Response: that she is. she's way too smart for her age. lol who noes maybe bill goes back to SinBiz and forgets all about tom and everything winds up juts bieng a horrible dream? lol thanks for reading hun
Date: 12/18/09 06:03 pm Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
Rayne has so much more wisdom than anyone in or near that age range, it's not even funny. I feel sad that they're both sad but can't do anything to get past it. Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: Yea I figured that since she had Tom as an older brother she had be smarter than kids her age. thanks for reading hun! appreciated muchly!!
Date: 12/18/09 02:19 pm Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
AWWW :D:D:D I suddenly love rayne!
Author's Response: lol Yea you have to love Rayne. She just can't be unloved. x)
Date: 12/18/09 09:11 am Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
OMG! I love this story and ... hmm.. Im not good at rewewing but! pase update sonn^^
Author's Response: thanks! it actually surprises me really bad how many people like this and review and read it when i update. next chapter is in the process of being made!
Date: 12/18/09 02:44 am Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
awwww, i want them to get back together soon!!!! love ya babe!
Author's Response: yea they really need to get together again soon. not sure how i'm going to make that happen but i have some ideas working in my head. x) thanks for reading hun!
Date: 12/18/09 01:14 am Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
i loved how everything just stopped when Tom and Bill walked into the school and when they saw each other. this chapter would look so good in a movie!
Rayne is very wise for her age and Tom should take what she said into consideration
great chapter!
Author's Response: lol you think it wld look good in a movie this chapter? i can kinda picture it tbh. yea his sister is really smart for her age. Kind of based off of my little cousin Ashling if i'm honest. she's like nine or ten and is smart like that too.
Date: 12/17/09 10:29 pm Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
love this!!!!!!! please continue!! poor tom and bill !!!!!!! T___T
they are so sad!!!
want them together!! XD
Author's Response: they really are sad but they're stubborn and don't want to admit to anything. well tom kind of did in chapter eleven but that hardly counts i think.
Date: 12/17/09 09:59 pm Title: TWELVE: Hold Me Close Because I Built My World Around You
OMG...... I wanted to cry throughout this whole chapter, tom should listen to rayne she may be young but she knows what she is talking about. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: XD yea tom really should listen to his little sister but who knows. maybe he will maybe he won't. ;) next chapter is in the makings XD