Date: 08/31/09 10:32 pm Title: THREE: Are You Scared of the Past? Do You Think That You Might Crash? Do You Think That You’re in too Deep?
i love it!!! please continue!!!
GM -generetics models, hehe something like that? hehe
well continue it!
Author's Response: awe thansk hun! you love it rly?! yaye! wats generetics mean? never heard of the word tbh. will most deff be continuing this! its my new baby XD
Date: 08/31/09 09:17 pm Title: THREE: Are You Scared of the Past? Do You Think That You Might Crash? Do You Think That You’re in too Deep?
At first I thought it was a premonition, speaking of Tom's dream...then I realized it was a memory. OMG! This is getting good with each chapter :)
I was going to ask you what GM meant XD
Keep it up.
Author's Response: Yea the starting was Tom dreaming of somehting that happened in the past. I'm so glad you like it hun! And yes, GM are the initials of the gang Tom's now leader of. Debating on what to actually have it mean though lol. XD
Date: 08/31/09 08:51 pm Title: THREE: Are You Scared of the Past? Do You Think That You Might Crash? Do You Think That You’re in too Deep?
OMG!!!!!! i think i love Tom already even though i don't know too much about him in this story...he better watch out for Bill and i mean come on he should really take heed to that dream he had about what happened and realize that Bill is the one who did it to him...can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: More about Tom shall be revealed as time goes by. Yes, he better watch out for Bill lol. Mornings don't really agree with anyone so you can kind of let the fact that he was blonde enough not to put two and two together about Bill's eyes from his dream to Bill in real life (as real life as this can get anyways lol). thanks for reading!
Date: 08/31/09 08:48 pm Title: THREE: Are You Scared of the Past? Do You Think That You Might Crash? Do You Think That You’re in too Deep?
no way! tom was one of bill's victims! that is going to make things complicated.
Author's Response: YEP! Tom fell victim to Bill's playtime! XD and yes it shall make it VERY complicated in upcoming chapters! thanks for reading!!
Date: 08/30/09 09:27 pm Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
Damn! Looking forward to reading more!
Sounds good so far... rather fond of vicious Bill
Author's Response: thanks for reading hun! new chapter in the next day or so. just gotta work out a couple kinks..(endings being stupid) XD vicious Bill is far from what he is. :) sadistic, cruel and cold hearted are just a few that come to mind. you shall find out in nexh chappie on why XD
Date: 08/28/09 10:25 am Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
tom in the next chapter for sure!!
Author's Response: :) y'all seem to really want to see Tom in Chapter Three so it shall be done! lol Just have to stop debating with myself on how to exactly do it! lol it's a tie between two ways of bringing him into it :) thanks for reading!!
Date: 08/28/09 10:14 am Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
i love it :)
Author's Response: XD thanks for reading hun! much appreciated!
Date: 08/28/09 12:49 am Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
YEAH now i really can't wait i want to know what Tom's like...again can't wait :)
Author's Response: XD In the process of writing Tom's introductory chapter. :) I like where it's going so far :) More in the next few days though. I got work all weekened and on Monday :(
Date: 08/27/09 09:46 pm Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
OMG! Another awesome chapter! :)
I think you should write next chapter about Tom, kind of the same way you've done with Bill. Let us know what he does and thinks! Keep it up.
Author's Response: It's really OMG worthy?! Ö wow! I like that idea! Hadn't thought of it that way! Thanks for that hun! Will most deff be using that idea! In a way anyways. I already have an idea! Ö Thanks for reading this hun! Danke!!
Date: 08/27/09 07:41 pm Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
awwww poor bill!!!! but I can't wait to see bill and tom together!!
Author's Response: Yes, poor Bill. having to do all that without wanting to. I'm not planning on having them get together for a lil' while yet! ;) Not all lovey dovey anyways. ;) thats the only spoiler you will get I'm afraid. lol if you can call that a spoiler lol :)
Date: 08/27/09 06:08 pm Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
Awesome chapter!
& add tom :DDDDDDDDDD
Author's Response: it's awesome?! Ö thanks! Tom will be introduced into Chapter Three most deff! You all seem to want to see him in this chapter! lol :) Thanks for reading hunni! I love ya for it! :)
Date: 08/27/09 05:29 pm Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
Hmmm just do what ur heart tells U Ö,
and write with you magic hands!
I really want to read te rest :D
x.
Author's Response: :) I have magic hands? lol Thanks! Didn't knwo I had magic hands lol thanks for reading hun! I really appreciate it!
Date: 08/27/09 04:23 pm Title: TWO: Dead Before I Reach The Driveway
you should definitely bring Tom into the story in the next chapter...this story is good so far.. can't wait fort he next chapter
Author's Response: Done! Tom shall be brought into this in Chapter Three! Next one will be up as soon as its written :) thanks for reading luv! muchos appreciated!
Date: 08/26/09 01:24 am Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
I really like it!!!!XD continue please!!!
Author's Response: nks for reading hun!! I'm still working on chapter two so it it'll be up as soon as I get it done. :)
Date: 08/25/09 10:41 pm Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
i rlly like this, continue :D
Author's Response: thanks for reading hun! means a lot to me!
Date: 08/25/09 10:40 pm Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
i love this so far *nodnod* i can't wait for more. oh and feel free to contact me if you need help, someone to talk to or just a fangirl to egg you soon xD my info is on my profile and i LOVE getting to know that people that are writing some of my fav. fics nowadays.
Author's Response: you actually love it?! omg! thanks hun! means so much to me to hear that! I will most deff be needing help with this! I have plenty ideas but sometimes my mind hates my life lol i'll try and have chapter two done as soon as I can!
Date: 08/25/09 10:27 pm Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
This looks like it's going to be awesome! I really liked your first chapter and hope to read more. For your first slash, this is doing great. Keep it up.
Author's Response: awe thanks hun!! That makes me feel so much better about this! I'm wicked nervous about writing slash. I read it sometimes (mostly now lol) and I'm always like I'll try and write one one day but I always skip over it cause I'm a chicken shit. lol not anymore apparently! more will be added as soon as I write chapter two!!