Date: 10/26/09 06:35 pm Title: 2.
Ohhh!!!! I missed this lol.
And yes.. very confusing.. but exciting x]
Date: 10/25/09 01:29 pm Title: 2.
I'm so confused with what's going on......
Date: 10/24/09 02:27 pm Title: 2.
This is confusing and sad. But really interesting and unique.
Date: 10/24/09 02:21 pm Title: 1.
Manslaughter doesn't get you the death penalty in Texas. Capital murder does.
Date: 10/24/09 12:54 pm Title: 2.
Im hooked but kinda confused. Toms dreaming all of these things? I loved the scene with the little girl. Update soon!
Date: 08/25/09 08:23 pm Title: 1.
that was defiantly different.. That scene with Tom being hung was heart wrenching. You did an amazing job :)
Author's Response: Awe thanxs!! And thanxs for the review. :D
Date: 08/25/09 06:02 pm Title: 1.
D:
Oh wow.. That was just the first chapter and it was intense. Thisssssss... is going to be good lol. Can't wait for the next update. Much love ^^
Author's Response: I hope it is! lolzrnrnAnd thanxs so much for the review!! Much love back. :D
Date: 08/25/09 02:45 pm Title: 1.
Should I feel stupid and be embarrassed when I cried a little when they hung Tom? It was pretty hard start, you know? One of those moments you keep repeating no-no-no-thereisanotherway-thereHASTOBEanotherway. Heartaches from the very beginning, damn :).
But yeah, don't be nervous. This is promising. At least in here the time jumping worked just fine and personally I enjoy that kind of jumping and moving, so I'll probably enjoy it in a future too. I'm eager to read more already :).
Btw, somehow there is something very beautiful in a relationship between Tom & Bill. I don't know, if it's not going to be that beautiful and what will happen in a future, though.
Author's Response: Awe...no don't feel bad. There's always a reason, even if its for a harsh start! lolzrnrnThanxs. And yeah, I always get nervous when it comes to the jumping around. Just something I'm not used to writing and something I'm not sure people like reading, you know?rnrnBut thanxs so much!! And I completely agree with you!! :D