I rarely see something written well in first-person, but this was really good--Tom's observations and internal commentary felt almost similar in style to The Catcher in the Rye or something. This was very entertaining and I can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: That's...well, that's new for me. lol I've never had anything remoltely compared to anything as amazing as Catcher in the Rye. lol Thank you so much.