Date: 09/12/09 04:28 pm Title: the hand that feeds
I think it's more Tom is just bringing out something that was already there in Bill.
Author's Response: I think you might have something there. ;) Next part is up, thank you for your review!
Date: 09/12/09 03:30 pm Title: the hand that feeds
DUDE, EVICTION FOR PROPERTY DAMAGE = ME SOLD AND IN LOVE!
But shit, Bill hasn't been ALIVE long enough for him to have that many enemies! O_o
How many people have you pissed off, Bill, hmm? How many people have you fucked that you shouldn't have touched?
But yes, good questions all. I DO wonder if it's Tom's influence or just something that was inside Bill all along but buried.
I'm going to go out on a limb and say it's something inside Bill for now, because while I believe Tom has lots of influence over Bill's actions, he has retained his human tendencies as well, including calling his mother when a strong urge to kill. However, it could be that Tom being around him so much has made his Nephilim side come out, which is purely inevitable at this point.
Author's Response: XD THEY HAVE BEEN EVICTED FOR PROPERTY DAMAGE. DUE TO SEXING. LOTS OF SEXING.
I think Bill's ideas of "enemies" are a bit different from Tom's ideas of enemies. ;D Like, certainly there were a fair share of people he shouldn't have fucked, or wouldn't when they wanted him to, or got pissed when they realized they were one night stands, but...not enough to kill for.
We're building up to something, I promise. There's actual plot incoming.
Date: 09/12/09 03:07 pm Title: the hand that feeds
haha I want more!!! please continue!!! I love it!!
Author's Response: Glad you want more! Sorry it took me so long, next part is up! =)
Date: 09/12/09 01:55 pm Title: the hand that feeds
the smut as always makes me a horny little hooker xD
then there's Tom's jokes and their banter. pure love, doll.
and i almost wanna HIT Tom for pushing the whole killing thing, but *shrugs* I'm not a demon. I don't 'get' it xD
ah and LOL at your end notes AS WELL. they still make me chuckle. like a lot xD
Author's Response: Ahaha, I am glad to continue to please, then. XD; I really enjoy the interplay between them, I like for them to have fun together and think it shows how comfortable they are with one another in addition to having it on like horny newlyweds.
Tom's just going with his instincts, and Bill is having a tough time retraining him. Next part is up...I don't think the next part's end notes were nearly as much fun, but I have a neckache, bah.
Date: 09/10/09 09:08 am Title: closer
I'm so glad that you decided to continue writing in this universe. I'm curious who is behind those attacks on Bill. And I love how Tom and Bill are always over each other, annoying their friends with this kind of behaviour. ;)
Author's Response: I couldn't let this universe go! Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. And Tom and Bill definitely can't keep their hands off each other. ;)
Date: 09/07/09 11:55 pm Title: closer
Niiice man! Hahaha! I could totally imagine george reaction when he found them in the van hahahah! so funny.
Author's Response: Excellent, I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Oh, yeah, Georg was not happy. And he let them know. And of course, they didn't care. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/06/09 06:44 am Title: closer
as much as i loved (and fangirled) that chapter.....
your end notes just about killed me xD
it's like watching an episode of some random (yet super sexy) anime xD
oh and fyi, i'm totally lacing Bill up in garters and giving Tom some spiked chocolate.
like now xD
Author's Response: I'm enjoying myself with the end notes. We like to have our fun. XD And yeah, it definitely has that "end of anime" feel, no? Or one of those hyper-colored Asian doramas... GARTERRRRRRS. (I'm going to Victoria's Secret today! BOYSHORTS.) Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/06/09 02:42 am Title: closer
'that tiresome sex' is awesome!!!!!
Author's Response: Soooo glad to hear it. ♥
Date: 09/06/09 12:14 am Title: closer
There was no damaged property in this chapter! Damn, I really miss it.
Author's Response: There wasn't! It's coming up, though. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/05/09 11:39 pm Title: closer
Who opened the door Bushido? Ugh. And all those kills were in self defence so there's not much to worry about there.
Author's Response: No, definitely not Bushido; Bill would have recognized him. And, well, we'll have to see what happens with that police investigation... Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/05/09 07:50 pm Title: closer
Aha, the plot thickens! I feel like there's got to be some filthy innuendo I can pull out of that saying, but nothing comes to mind because, basically, guh. Their rough and needy, ahem, encounters, always distract me. Ah, I love the Nephilim twins. *happy sigh*
Author's Response: See, there is plot, I swear! It's just, uh. Yeah. They have a lot of rough and needy encounters. ;D That's going to work against them at some point. I love the Nephilim twins and I'm so glad you do, too. ♥
Date: 08/30/09 12:14 am Title: filthy mind
The line about Andreas' car is still my favorite.
I'm also enjoying bitchy Bill slapping hos out of his way. Tom is not stupid enough to touch one of them, even in flirtation, with a ten foot pole. STEP OFF HIS MAN, WENCHES.
Author's Response: I had fun with that. =D
The funniest part of that is that Bill totally did not think he was acting jealous! And no, Tom did NOT have his hand on her ass. DNW. THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING, BETCH.
Date: 08/29/09 11:45 pm Title: filthy mind
Oh I liked this chapter. It's not that I don't like the sex but there's so much of it, it gets tiresome. This had a stronger plot. I liked the sociopath part, I know what that is but I think for the sake of the story you should have explained it better. I also liked the Bushido part. Is he possibly part something too? If he's hard to read it's possible. I don't like him but I like what he adds to the story.
Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked! I'm sorry to hear it gets tiresome...these boys have a lot of it. ;D And if you skip you might miss teensy plotty bits; yes, plot can be worked into sex! You think I should have put the definition for sociopath in there? Sorry! I thought about making Bushido part Nephilim, but no, he's not. As for being hard to read, he's quite the businessman! I appreciate your review, and more is up!
Date: 08/29/09 11:36 pm Title: filthy mind
Oh I love a jealous Bill and posessive Tom. And I love your nephilim twins too. Bushido better back up though. I thought I had already favorited this but for some reason it didn't take. But rest easy, that has now been remedied. :)
Author's Response: Jealous Bill is really cute. He thinks he wasn't acting jealous at all. My Nephilim twins are so damned much fun! Bushido is definitely wanting the Bill, but sorry, he's got his one true love! ;D Thanks so much for reading, I'm happy you're enjoying this.
Date: 08/29/09 10:50 pm Title: filthy mind
Guh! *is brain dead* You def deserve the sushi after this, yuss'm, yuss'm!!! <333
I imagined that old-60's-type suspense voice, like at the end of the old-school Batman or something. Same bat time, same bat channel. A channel I will definitely be tuned into waiting for more. Amazing job!!
Author's Response: And it was good sushi, too! God, we got so much we couldn't finish. Same bat channel, a little late on the time though. Hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks so much. =3
Date: 08/29/09 08:39 pm Title: filthy mind
I LOVE IT!!! XD
PLEASE CONTINUE!!
CONTINUE!!!
XD
Author's Response: Will definitely continue! ;) Thank you.
Date: 08/29/09 07:10 pm Title: filthy mind
You forgot to ask if they had more property damage charges coming. XD
Author's Response: You're totally right. I should edit that end note to mention more property damage. ;D
Date: 08/26/09 04:31 pm Title: pure morning
Great opening. I'm dying to know more about whose going after Bill.
Author's Response: Thanks! We'll get there, in between plot sex and plot! Next part is up. =)
Date: 08/24/09 06:59 am Title: pure morning
Oh I've been waiting on this one! That poor landlord, but yum! I love the sex crazed nephilim twins. :D
Author's Response: Glad to hear you've been looking forward to it! I'm definitely enjoying playing with this version of Tom and Bill. =) Poor landlord indeed. Thanks, and next part is up!
Date: 08/24/09 06:30 am Title: pure morning
Yay there back my two fav half bloods tom and bill. i really love this story its as smutty and breathtaking as the first
Author's Response: Awesome, so glad you like them. Oh trust me, there's more smut coming. And danger and excitement as well. =D Thanks for your review! Next part is up.