Date: 10/17/09 06:50 pm Title: battle for the sun
The detectives are getting close. Oops. 0_o
Author's Response: They're closing in...but they're NOT the only ones. *bites nails*
Date: 10/17/09 05:46 pm Title: battle for the sun
I love the plot of this, with the investigators and the assassins. Very cool. :) It's almost as good as twin smut, but is there anything better? I don't think so!
I'm excited to see all the goodies you've written when you get back from your cruise!
But don't work too hard. :F
Author's Response: Eee, awesome. Yup, the twins may be in over their head... but there's always room for more twin smut. :D Thank you so much! I finished my Big Bang during the cruise, but aside from that, not TOO much got done. Though I brought back inspiration for something new. :) And the next chapter is up and ~stuff happens~.
Date: 10/17/09 05:05 pm Title: assassin
Kali's shrivled tits?!! haha.
Author's Response: They swear by all sorts of gods and all manner of crazy things. ;D
Date: 10/17/09 03:50 pm Title: battle for the sun
Ooh, I like this. I think it's my love of crime shows that made me grin through the first bit. Bill and Tomi, confusing the forensics team, love it. That Randall fellow seems fairly sharp, though, and Pierce sounds deadly. Eep. Can't wait to find out what happens with them, not to mention what Tom and Bill are going to do now that they haven't got an apartment!
Author's Response: Stealthy: they're not so good at it. Fortunately, being what they are has confused the forensics team more than it's helped them. But if Randall gets access to the database and finds out there's a pair of twins in the area... EEP, I've said too much! Next chapter is finally up, and...er, not progress is made toward that end. ;P
Date: 10/17/09 03:10 pm Title: battle for the sun
hahaha i love it!!! but poor bill!!! but tom will protect him for ever!
Author's Response: Awesome, thank you so much! "Poor Bill" definitely applies, but yes, Tom will protect him...so long as he's there to do so. ;) Next chapter is up, sorry for the delay!
Date: 10/17/09 01:29 pm Title: battle for the sun
so, my first thought was WHO ARE THESE RANDOM PEOPLE IN THE BEGINNING OF THIS CHAPTER???
it's too early for me to be awake dude, but whatever, my brain finally connected the dots, and I found myself kinda upset that there was no more police investigation stuff happening in the last half of the chapter.
Also, I totally love how Bill rubbed off Tom somewhat, and as always, how protective he is over him. my head is going crazy from all the thoughts of what would happen if one of them got seriously hurt. hell on earth b/c the other would go ballistic *nods*
okay, so that's as far as i can review without babbling b/c i am thoroughly exhausted. I loved this chapter, as always and i'm gonna miss your updates while you're on vacation
Author's Response: LOL, they were earlier in the fic. ;P Have your coffee first! Police action stuff is making progress, but we'll see where it goes... *shifty*
It's good that Tom is rubbing off on Bill, right? Yes, you're not wrong - BAD THINGS would happen if one of them got seriously hurt. ._. Glad you enjoyed it, and I finally, FINALLY got the next chapter up! ;P
Date: 10/10/09 02:35 pm Title: assassin
I bet they did leave evidence behind!
Oooh no!!!
Author's Response: I bet they did! :D What's gonna happen!!
Date: 10/05/09 02:33 pm Title: assassin
They're kinky and all but sometimes not too bright. They didn't clean up the crime scene and didn't get the hell out of ther fast enough. God they're dumb.
Author's Response: They're...enthusiastic! Yes, enthusiastic. And unfortunately, they thought wiping the psychic trace was good enough. Thanks for the review, hope you're still enjoying. :D
Date: 10/05/09 07:41 am Title: assassin
The nephilim twins are so freakin hot. *rawr* Who is after Bill? Daddy? :D
Author's Response: More plotty bits are up; read to find out! ;D Thanks! I'm glad you find them hot. So intended. ^_-
Date: 10/05/09 01:16 am Title: assassin
I love that practically any moment is an opportunity for these two to have blazin' hot sex. =D The plot is very interesting as well, and I think the prolific sex works to dispel some of the "What happens next?!" urgency I feel as the plot unfolds. It's a very good mix. =D
Author's Response: They're like industrial-strength magnets, I swear. Or something. More plotty bits are up! And this version of the twins is just...yeah. I'd say "high sex drive" is a bit of an understatement. Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 10/04/09 11:53 pm Title: assassin
That was an awful lot of bodily fluids floating about at and near the scene of a crime... *hums CSI theme song*
On another note, I am quite fond of this chapter. Mm, fights and intense sex, my favorites! Gotta admit, though, I was seriously pissed at the guy trying to take Bill's head off. Bill doing some serious combat training with Tom sounds like an excellent idea.
I try to refrain from begging for more, but, um, I wouldn't complain if the next chapter showed up soon.
Author's Response: Ahaha, it doesn't bear thinking about! Oh, boys... Now I'm imagining Grissom coming across THAT crime scene and... nooo, what a mind-melting crossover.
Thank you! I spent more time on that fight scene and added the second half on the advice of my beta, and I think it strengthened the chapter. And it's bad that it took getting to that point, but Bill really did need proof that he needs to work out with Tom! ...No, Bill, between the sheets does not count.
Sorry it took so long, but the next chapter is up! :D
Date: 10/04/09 11:50 pm Title: assassin
Ooooo! Yay! I actually said YAY aloud when I saw this had updated. :F
Don't feel bad about this one, it's so damn good. Really. :D People never read what's good for them, I swear!
Author's Response: :D *is dorkily pleased* I'm probably branching out in too many different genre directions but I'm having FUN and that's what matters, hehe. Thank you, I'm really happy that you like it!
Date: 10/04/09 11:41 pm Title: assassin
Whooooo is iiiiiiiiiiiiiiit? I have to know!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: Gonna be a bit, yet! :D Next chapter is up, at last. Sorry for the wait!
Date: 09/15/09 12:20 am Title: pure morning
I'm a happy endings person, too. My BFF thinks I'm crazy, but excuse me for wanting to be happy at the end of a story, right?
Author's Response: That's the kind of escapism that is nice to find in fiction, I think.
Date: 09/15/09 12:12 am Title: the hand that feeds
I loooove this story! I'm totally tracking it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy. New part is finally up!
Date: 09/15/09 12:03 am Title: closer
"Ugh," Georg said. He hastily cranked down his own. "It smells like dirty boysex in here. I wish I didn't know what that smells like."
That is a genius paragraph. XD "Boysex" LOLOLOL Poor Gs.
Author's Response: Thank you, I particularly enjoyed that line myself. ;) I think Gustav mostly tunes it out except when he just can't; and then he asks them to stop. But Georg makes it too much fun for them to tease him.
Date: 09/14/09 11:44 pm Title: pure morning
I love this fic! I'm happy you're doing a sequel. I wanted to ask, but I didn't want to pressure you.
But one thing... Do you think you could maybe let me know if one of the twins is gonna die? I couldn't handle it emotionally. :( If you don't mind giving out that info, anyway.
Author's Response: Excellent! I'm happy you like the sequel so far. ;) There was no way I could leave this version of the twins alone!
No worries, it's not a spoiler - there's no Major Character Death warning for this fic, after all. I simply could not bring myself to kill either of the twins. I'm a happy endings kind of gal.
Date: 09/13/09 10:22 pm Title: the hand that feeds
What enemies? where are Bill and Tom going to live? Argh, update soon!
Author's Response: Good questions, and they will be answered in due time... And, I updated today! Sorry for the long wait, and thanks for your review.
Date: 09/12/09 11:10 pm Title: the hand that feeds
Oooh! So I finally caught up with all of this and it's so very FUN and hot and mmm. You know?
My favorite sorts of fic are fun and hot and mmm! Thanks for writing just the kinds of stuff I want to read. :)
Author's Response: *happy it's all fun and hot and mmm.* That's how it's been to write it, just fun, I'm just enjoying it, kind of playing around, but also leading towards some conflict. Eventually. If I can stop writing them sexing long enough for plot to happen.
Thank you so much. I've been kind of down about this one because I can tell not as many people are interested in it, but I'm still enjoying writing it. And I really appreciate your review. =)
Date: 09/12/09 05:49 pm Title: the hand that feeds
Yes. WHAT enemies Bill?
And I think Tom is just bring something out in Bill that was already there. Just hidden. ^^
I hope it's both type of action. =P
Author's Response: ...The enemies he thinks he has? =D
I think you may have something, there. And it's definitely both types of action - next chapter is up! Thanks for your review.