Date: 01/22/12 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god. more please.
Date: 10/09/09 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn this was hot hot hot. I think I will get my husband to read it. ;) Submissive, gorgeous Bill - damn. I can't even fucking think straight right now. as;dklfjasdlkfjasfjks;
Date: 08/20/09 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
The imagery in this was very well done; the words played outstandingly with the story. I haven't really read much BDSM/Bondage on this site, so this was a fairly nice piece. The relationship between Bill and his Mistress was fun to read, and you didn't just push the whole thing infront of us. The sex took time and teasing, that was nice. :) And I loved how she had full power of Bill, him being 6'2 and all.
One thing I wasn't too clear about was that in the Summary you put the Main Pairing as Bill/Tom/OFC. I didn't really see any of that in here. It was all just Bill/OFC. Not that that was bad or anything. It was good. :) I was just a bit confused, that's all.
Date: 08/20/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was thinking of a sequel where Tom more or less steals Bill back then punishes him for defiance,.... any takers? haha
Date: 08/20/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great! I would love to see a version with Tom as the master.
Date: 08/20/09 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice! I really enjoyed it. Well, I've had one fic a bit similar to this one on my mind, but I guess I'll just have to do my own version then. This was interesting and I liked the way you created possessive relationship between Bill and his owner. Stap-on is always a big plus :).
On the other hand I got pretty upset in the end because I really hoped Tom to participate and after all my opinion is that twins belong to each other eventually. But it's ok, it's just my opinion and doesn't affect to the fact that I liked this one. Good job :)
Date: 08/20/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
different but really great. I hope you have a sequel.
Date: 08/20/09 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1
*nods* i liked that. it was... strange and hot at the same time. good job ^^