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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/20/11 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS WAS A GOOD STORY!
U SHOULD ADD MORE TO IT1
Reviewer: screamtillyoufeelit Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/09 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/24/09 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1
i think bill had 2 shirts but the story was great :) your friend wrote this well
Author's Response: thanx il let her know :D
Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/20/09 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
it was good
it could use more description and a slightly slower pace.
it seemed a bit too rushed but the ideas are deffinitely there.
keep it up :)
Author's Response: yes thats exactly what i said =]
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