Date: 11/18/14 08:38 pm Title: Epilogue - Memories
Why must you make me cry? Nevertheless, I loved it. ;_;
Date: 08/23/10 12:05 am Title: Epilogue - Memories
*is nearly speechless*
Wow, that was just.. Heh, I'm in awe...
That was very, very heartbreaking. But not in a way I hate you for it XD
Lol, I'm so sad... Mein Gott. *little heart*
Author's Response: Awww Thank you! *hugs* You're really sweet =)
Author's Response: Awww Thank you! *hugs* You're really sweet =)
Date: 01/06/10 06:26 pm Title: Epilogue - Memories
Wow. That was stunning.
It was...so original. I never would have thought of something like this. And it was beautiful. The wording, the imagery, everything. This was honestly one of the best short stories I have ever read x3
*favorites*
Author's Response: Omg *////* I don't know what to say... just... THANK YOU! rnI'm so so happy that you liked this little story. It's very important for me, 'cause I really like writing about death character (yes... I know, I'm strange XD but it's like a challenge. It's difficult, so it's better :P), but I don't always know if a reader can find the story beautiful or pathetic :/rnThank you for all of your words, you're really nice *hugs*
Date: 01/06/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Heart
Oh my god :O
Bill is dead...and this kid Karl has his heart transplanted inside of him? And that's why he was getting Bill's memories? Heilig scheisse. You wrote Karl so much like Bill that I was sure it was Bill until just now...
Author's Response: :P Sorry XD And the answer for all of your questions is yes :)
Date: 01/06/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Step
Aw, the memory/dream/whatever of him and Tom was so sweet x3 The one where Tom was telling Bill that he did it. It was so sad how Bill was thinking that he was always the second one to do things, the one behind Tom ;-;
Ahhh, I love this.
Author's Response: Thank you :3 *hugs*
Date: 01/06/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Goodbye
Oh, this is so sweet. I want to cry ;-;
I just...gah. This is written beautifully. Starting like a lot of sentences with the word 'and' would normally seem choppy but with this it really works.
Author's Response: :3 *hugs*rnAwwww *blushes* Thank you ;O; I don't really know how my stories are in English, 'cause I write in Italian and I use a lot of particular things (like short sentences, starting lines with 'and', play with the meanings of the words), so I'm always unsure when I post a translation. Thank you so much *hugs*
Date: 01/06/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fallen
I love how you made Bill's thoughts about Tom. How Tom is the strongest person there is and no one can hurt him. It's really sweet and it's the way I like to portray Bill's thoughts of Tom so I can totally relate x3
Again, I'm not really sure what's going on and why Tom doesn't exist anymore and why Bill is hurt and it's a good kind of confusing that makes me want to keep reading x3
Author's Response: I know that it's confusing, but I'm glad that you want to keep reading X'D
Date: 01/06/10 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Fear
Wow, I was right. This is really intense. It's got beautiful imagery and even though I don't understand half of what's going on it's still really beautiful. I like it so far x3
Author's Response: Again, thank you, you too nice :3
Date: 01/06/10 05:52 pm Title: Prologue - Something missing
Okay, this perplexed me. I really liked the excerpt of the summary and the way you started this off was intense. I loved the one-word thing. Crying. Loneliness. Pain. Laughing. Crying. Running. That was all really neat and I don't see that in many peoples' stories.
It seems like this is a short story so I'd really like to see how you wrap it up in only six chapters x3
Author's Response: Awww thank you!rnI write in a really weird way, I think XD But I like to create a particular rhythm in the story with words and punctuation. I'm glad that you liked it! :)
Date: 10/14/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 5 - Heart
OMG wait... this is... i cant speak. i love this story but how did i not notice it from the first post?
Author's Response: I know that this is sad... but... the epilogue is full of hope, I think. So, keep hope :) *hugs*
Date: 10/13/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Heart
-speechless-
Author's Response: *hugs*
Date: 09/06/09 04:22 pm Title: Prologue - Something missing
*claps* Oooh, this was on LJ!! I was lurking there the other day!! :) I love, love, LOVE this! It fucking RAWKS! XD
Author's Response: Yep, it's also on LJ =)rn*////* Thank you soooo much!!! I'm happy that you love it *O*! THANK YOU!!
Date: 08/22/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Fear
I dont understand
Author's Response: It's only the beginning, and I know that it's difficult to follow the story, but believe me, in the end it will be clear =) (I hope :P)
Date: 08/21/09 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Fear
This confuses me to no end 0.0
Author's Response: Yeah, I know :P But in the end it'll be clear =)
Date: 08/18/09 11:44 am Title: Prologue - Something missing
-whistles- oooooooohhhhhhhh
Author's Response: :DDD
Date: 08/17/09 10:59 pm Title: Prologue - Something missing
interesting :D
i loveee.
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Date: 08/17/09 04:57 pm Title: Prologue - Something missing
O.o Continue!!
Author's Response: :D Soon the first chapter, I promise
Date: 08/17/09 11:16 am Title: Prologue - Something missing
O.O omg. this is just so perfectly...i dont even know how to describe it, but it has my attention. definatly. i need to know what happens! post more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :D And soon, I'll the first chapter ;)