Date: 10/06/09 11:53 pm Title: Different Kinds of Love
loved it hahahah
tom is a little rebel, I like that :)
Bill is so lost hahaha awww
Author's Response: Hooray, I'm glad you're still reading! :D Tom is definitely a rebel, defiant to the last. And Bill just wants to please everyone, poor bb.
Date: 10/06/09 11:23 pm Title: Different Kinds of Love
I feel so sad for them!
I do recall back in year one, that one of Simone and Gordon's friends said to watch out for them in their 8th year.....could this friend be coming back?
Author's Response: I know, me too. :( Unfortunately, Vardunzel lives in far-away Danver, and he won't be making an appearance in the story until a critical moment years down the line. Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/06/09 10:44 pm Title: Different Kinds of Love
:D I adored this so much, please do write more!!
Author's Response: Woohoo! All right, I'm greenlighting this sucker on down the line!
Date: 10/06/09 09:39 pm Title: Different Kinds of Love
I would never hold anything against you, besides twins, perhaps. :F I'd physically cram them in your space!
I think in any story like this, you'll see some of the same stuff, so no worries. :)
I love how this is progressing, and I adore Tom, the little punk. Just don't get caught, kits!
Author's Response: *feels immense relief* Thank you! Yeah, dealing with the under-age sexuality and a concerned mother... Glad you don't mind. :D
Progressing, albeit slowly, and Tom is definitely being a little punk! I think once I've got the further groundwork established with this year, subsequent years will go a wee bit faster until we get to the fun stuff.
And a big, "DON'T GET CAUGHT, KITS" from my corner as well. *bites nails*
Date: 10/03/09 06:48 am Title: Flair and Fury
Oh my precious! This was entirely too cute for words, despite it being such a pain in the butt for Bill. Oh haha! I said 'butt'!
Author's Response: Thank you! ...Yep, you did say 'butt.' Poor Billi. I'm glad you're still enjoying! ♥
Date: 10/01/09 01:03 pm Title: Flair and Fury
Hold on, hold on. Does this mean that you're actually going to write and post together? :o I can't wait! Squeeeeeeeeeee!
Author's Response: I am, I am! In November I am a mad, beta-free creature; no beta could keep up with me. I'd make them cry and quit within the week. And I'm really looking forward to making serious progress with the kits; their story is SO big. ♥
Date: 10/01/09 12:51 pm Title: Flair and Fury
Awww! ^___^ I really love this story! Thank you that you didn't stop updating it. I mean I was afraid that you'll give up(?) this story. (damn T_T Please forgive my mistakes. I'm trying to learn english)
And thanks for explanation ^__^ I'll sure their magic will be supercool!! Like creating a fireballs and smth like that ^__^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm definitely still working on this story - I'm persistent! I've got this outlined all the way through to the end. Your English is just fine!
Their magic will be very suitable to them, I can promise that. ;) Next chapter is up, thank you for your review!
Date: 10/01/09 04:27 am Title: Flair and Fury
*flutterclaps* A chapter so often?! I'm in pure bliss right now! :DDDD
Can't wait for the next. I'm scared for bed separation. ;__;
Author's Response: I don't know where this MAD PRODUCTIVITY is coming from, but I hope it continues! ;) Next chapter is up... poor babies.
Date: 09/30/09 11:23 pm Title: Flair and Fury
Heee, still so cute. I love how you've handled their development, and I really enjoyed the birthing-day celebrations in the last chapter--I can just imagine youko-baby-Bill twirling down an autumn dirt road :) I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! They're going to be cute a while yet, I have a feeling. ;) So happy you're enjoying it! Next chapter is up. ;)
Date: 09/30/09 11:00 pm Title: Flair and Fury
heeee!! just got done watching the TH TV episode...OMG Bill was twirling and I SOO thought of this chapter!!
Author's Response: There was definitely twirling...of sorts...involved. It made me laugh too! Thanks for your review - next chapter is up! ;)
Date: 09/30/09 06:55 am Title: Flair and Fury
The kits rule all! The end :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I happen to agree. ;)
Date: 09/30/09 06:41 am Title: Flair and Fury
Awww! They're cute.And that fight with Georgie was Quite typical among kids,and kits I guess lol.But you write it in such a way...It feels like I assist at the scene :)
Thanks for the update!^_^
Author's Response: Too cute, right?? Poor kits, they wouldn't have gotten involved if Geordie hadn't been such a jerk. Thank you, I'm so glad to hear that! And thanks as always for your review. ♥
Date: 09/30/09 05:09 am Title: Flair and Fury
yep it was pure cute =) yay.
and omg really a chapter every other day! yay how come? - scratch that i have just looked up NaNoWriMo on Google - wow i have never heard of it before, how exciting! thanks for the info!
Author's Response: Thank you! Success! Yep, a chapter every day for the first two weeks, I think. NaNoWriMo is a very productive time for me. ;) But this year already has been - I'm so grateful! Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/30/09 12:38 am Title: Flair and Fury
Ah yes, princess Bill. I can see it now. Bill in a pink frilly dress and crown with all the kids in school laughing their butts off. Anyway... Tom's reaction was so him. I can see him doing that to someone who crossed Bill the wrong way. Tom the protector and Bill the peace maker. So cute and sweet. I feel bad that Bill's tail now hurts because some jerk pulled it.
Author's Response: Totally Princess Bill. ;D And Tom will be his pirate knight, avenging his honor when the older boys laugh. Poor Billy...but there was twin cuteness! Thanks for reviewing. =D
Date: 09/29/09 10:57 pm Title: Flair and Fury
Bill's poor tail! Ouch. But it did lead to the saccharine twin fluff at the end of the chapter, plus the brilliant costume ideas, so I can't complain too much.
...a chapter a day for NaNo?! I'm going to be glued to my computer throughout the month of November.
Author's Response: I know, it was all in a good cause, poor baby. ;_; Still bad though.
YES, a chapter a day! At least! *excited already* I'm going to write until my eyeballs bleed. ...Okay, maybe I'll stop before then. But it's going to be wonderfully productive.
Date: 09/29/09 10:52 pm Title: Flair and Fury
*_*
that is all I can get out about the story and the end notes.
Author's Response: I am SO looking forward to it, believe me! ;)
Date: 09/29/09 10:35 pm Title: Flair and Fury
OMG i love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 09/29/09 10:27 pm Title: Flair and Fury
bill's poor tail ._.
Author's Response: It didn't deserve such rough treatment. ;_;
Date: 09/18/09 05:26 am Title: Eight Autumns
Oh my. What a lovely chapter sweetie. I don't really have much to say except yay for twin!kissing! ;D And noo for separating their beds, Simone. D: It must be so hard for her to see them kissing and want to do something but knowing they're still so innocent and don't know any different.
That party sounded absolutely luxurious it made me want one just like it. lol. And I love that they got a little star and moon afterwards, that was very sweet. Will the star come into play later at all, I wonder? With Bill's tattoos.... ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you think so! Yay for twin!kissing indeed. If Bill hadn't been so dead asleep, there might have been a little more that evening. Oh man, I want a party like that, too. As for the star, it's really the beginning of a bit of a recurring theme. ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/17/09 04:19 pm Title: Eight Autumns
EXCELLENT CHAPTER!
I am a detail freak so I think you're one of these fabulous authors who will have to suffer my reviews full of "I loooove this" instead of a coherent comment lol! I really love details and you always make sure to put MANY of them.I already told you several times,and I think you're doing a good job with it even more now: it's about the ears *_* God.I love it when you express their feeling by describing the ears : flat,perking up,twitching...*dies*
About detail still: I am really grateful that you put that they are now registered legally. You build this world with perfection there is nothing left out.Sometimes when I read some fics,the way the imaginary world the author create weem incomplete,how does the system work,what is what?The customs?Etc...YOU my dear friend created a perfect AU.It feels really complete when I read it.All the other details about anything they do, and even the subtility you use to make them more independent with their choices with something as random as clothes color(or even the same color but with just a little different pattern on the fabric XD)
Yay for Simone!She's trying hard.Hurray for Gordon,that man is smart.Your characters are haunting me haha,now when I see cats or stuff that reminds me of these kits,i think about them.No kidding.Sounds crazy,but it happened haha.
I don't have time to tell you all the things that struck me in this chapter.All of it is my favorite really.Can't wait to see the puberty stuff. Can youkos be in heat?or maybe there is a season their sex drive is more powerful than the rest of the year?
Hm.I shall find out,I know.
I'm in a hurry but I din't want to leave without leaving you a review.Me being so talkative doesn't help at all.Meh.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! Yeah, I love getting into the little details; their world is very real for me. I want to make sure I have everything fully fleshed-out. Simone is trying hard, indeed, and Gordon is going to try and make sure she doesn't do something that ends up hurting the kits, however well-meaning she is. Puberty stuff... well, we'll be getting into that. Wait and see! And, youko are a little different. You'll find out. ;D Thanks for such a long, lovely review!