Date: 11/13/09 09:50 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
It's already rocking girl! :D
I loved it! It's cute how Bill is jealous about Tom wanting the girls to go crazy about him. Aw, poor little Bill. (I hope girls won't be an obstacle later D:)
lol @ the last sentence. x)
And the man was definitely creepy.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! ♥ Heh heh, Bill better get used to it...it will change, at some point. :D The man was definitely creepy and he came out of nowhere!! Thanks for your review. :)
Date: 11/13/09 09:44 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
That creep gave me the heebie jeebies. Thank goodness Tom is clever and slightly paranoid.
Author's Response: He popped out of nowhere, I swear. He wasn't even IN this part in my outline. Fortunately Tom knows when to go for an adult!
Date: 11/13/09 03:57 pm Title: Spring Fever
Twinkissing *___* AND twintouching *___*
It's so pure and innocent it's actually quite lovely (though I believe I'm warped as well), and I think it's especially because both of them are relating it to love and not just kissing or touching purely out of curiosity. I'm looking forward to more of those, especially the touching (warped, I say). =D
Author's Response: Yes indeedy! Twinkissing and twintouching! I completely agree with the pure and innocent. It's basically pre-sexual at this point, anyhow; it's just sweet exploration. ...We'll get to more touching at some point, you know we will. ;D
Date: 11/13/09 02:23 am Title: Spring Fever
aw, i don't quite consider this naughty either, but adorable as always. keep em coming.
Author's Response: Woohoo, consensus is "not naughty!" *carries on* Thanks for your review. :)
Date: 11/13/09 12:05 am Title: Spring Fever
*_*
Sooooooooo cute, and I think you're right, too innocent to be naughty. Just fluffy and adorable! :D
Author's Response: *is happy to deliver fluff* It's so innocent, so sweet. I don't think they even know what naughty means, yet. :D
Date: 11/12/09 11:30 pm Title: A Love Realized
Ehehe, I was so hoping this was what you meant when I saw the chapter's title. (Okay, I confess, my mind wandered elsewhere first, but after that.) I'm so glad Bill found his place in the realm of music, since Tom already did so long ago! Eee, I'm ridiculously excited for Bill, and definitely looking forward to the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: (My mind wandered elsewhere first, too, but...that's THE love, not 'a' love.) Bill definitely needed to find his place and have something to strive for.
Date: 11/12/09 10:42 pm Title: A Love Realized
awwww :) I'm grinning so hard right now. That was adorable, and I really love all the hints you're giving about what might be happening next/in the future :D
Author's Response: Hurrah, I'm glad to induce grinning! Thanks for letting me know it's adorable, and...and hinty. ;D I like to give little glimpses.
Date: 11/12/09 05:59 pm Title: A Love Realized
omg spring fever
*dumps gallons of sugar all over you*
*_*
Author's Response: Whee!! *lolls about in it* And yay for spring fever indeed. ♥
Date: 11/12/09 05:51 pm Title: What Makes a Family
I think this story is killing me. It's just so cute and fluffy, I'm seriously resisting squealing in delight. But yay, Bill got to sing! That boy belongs on stage. He finally found the "instrument" he loves to play!
Author's Response: Awww, hugs. I'm pleased to supply the cute and fluffy! I think we need it to get through the winter, or something. Yes! Bill got his first taste of singing onstage and it's instant addiction.
Date: 11/12/09 03:26 pm Title: A Love Realized
I will not pour sugar on you, woman. That's just... sticky.
Tom's such a prat, lol. Just give in and give Bill what he wants, unadulterated and incessant praise. Your life will be easier.
Go, Bill! From the chorus to the solo. That takes guts, I know for sure.
Author's Response: Okay, okay, you have a point. :P
Tom's definitely a prat! And he's going to struggle his whole life not to give Bill EVERYTHING he wants, I think. It takes a lot of guts, I remember myself. He had to do it to find his passion!
Date: 11/12/09 02:57 pm Title: A Love Realized
That was so adorable, I can't even. This butterflies and nerves and then the magic of him on stage. Awwwww, kits.
Author's Response: ♥ ♥! With him singing his little heart out! Thank you so much.
Date: 11/12/09 02:51 pm Title: A Love Realized
YAY! Oh, this is so amazing for Bill! Finding the one thing he's best at and now he can definitely keep up with Tom and not feel left behind!!
:DDDDDDDDDDDDD
Author's Response: Isn't it awesome?? I do picture Bill finding that passion so early, and it shaped his whole life. ♥ Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/12/09 02:41 pm Title: A Love Realized
Oh Bill was completely delightful in this chapter. Little bouncy, hyper kit. LOL. I loved the way you wrote this one, it felt like spring even to me.
And two chapters in one day? I'm not cynical terror, but I'm excited too.
Author's Response: He gets so excited, he throws his whole self into things! :) It's nice to write about spring when it's so cold, brr. Hope you liked the second chapter, twinkissing was featured!
Date: 11/12/09 12:56 pm Title: A Love Realized
Awwwwwwwwwww~ I LOVED this chapter! b29;
Bill singing. *nya!* So perfect.
Looking forward to the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: Hee, isn't he the sweetest! Yes, Bill found his passion! ♥ Thanks so much.
Date: 11/12/09 06:26 am Title: Enrollment
So cute. Thank you for updating so often, it gives me something to look forward to when I get home and want to relax.
Author's Response: I'm so pleased to hear it! =) November is when I hit it hard, and I've been having a blast!
Date: 11/12/09 05:28 am Title: Enrollment
Very interesting.
Tom and the ONS talk loool I wonder what will happen later about/because of that...
Poor Bill, he seemed so sad somehow in this chapter.
Keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I agree, Bill seems a little sad...he doesn't have his passion yet, the way Tom has his guitar. I appreciate your review!
Date: 11/12/09 04:40 am Title: Enrollment
And here be the stage where the kits are starting to grow differently and yet the same.
I knew Bill was gonna have a somewhat fit about Tom hearing that bit with Marcus. LOL
Author's Response: Yup, it's been starting slowly but gradually... and Bill is strangely jealous of Marcus! ;D Thanks for your review!!
Date: 11/12/09 04:25 am Title: Enrollment
As always with this fic, a delight to read
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm pleased to hear it.
Date: 11/12/09 04:25 am Title: Enrollment
I'm really enjoying this sort of perspective, a very close, almost day-to-day story of them growing up and the leisurely kind of pace. It reminds me of the books I loved when I was a much younger girl. =D The way they develop their identity and the issues that they find themselves confronted with feel so realistic and spot on. This is a different style and approach than in your other stories, and it is as brilliant as the others that you've done. Bravo. I will keep on reading (and hopefully be less lazy to review). =D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *wriggle* I feel sometimes like I'm drawing it out too much, worrying that I'm boring everyone, then I get a comment like this and I feel reassured I'm taking the right direction. It's definitely VERY different from the other stories I'm writing, and I'm so happy to hear that it's coming across well. I really appreciate your review. *works harder*
Date: 11/12/09 02:57 am Title: Enrollment
Bill trying to play an instrument . . . just doesn't seem right. He needs to sing instead. And have Tom play for him. Ya, that sounds good.
Thanks for the update!!!
Author's Response: Definitely not quite right, and Bill knew it too! Thanks for reading, more is up! :)