Date: 11/16/09 03:50 pm Title: Forever Now
What an amazing story and journey! Wow. Right now I'm completely stunned, I relly am!
Speecles...
Wide-eyed...
I loved this one just as much as year one if not even more! The twins are insanely cute and the entire story feels so very real. Every action, every word and every single feeling is so real! It's like being there yourself and feeling it; you cry with the kits, laugh with them and love with them. Wow. Your writing amazes me every time I read a new chapter and I want this series to go on forever 'cause I love the entire world and your plots has been no less than amazing until now :D
There's so many sentences and scenes I want to quote and comment but if I had to do that with every single bit that I loved, I would be quoting the entire story! ;D I'm really sorry I haven't reviewed for some time now, but I've been here all along and I'm defieantly gonna be there right until the end of this (hopefully) very long journey!
So, so much love to you for writing and posting this story 'cause it's one of my favourites, for sure! Just like year one ^^
You. Are. Amazing! :D'
Oh, btw: I think it's really nice Bill and Tom didn't have sex in this 'cause it would feel a bit wrong already; there hasn't been builded up enough tension for that just yet. But hopefully they'll have some fun in year three! :D
Author's Response: Phew! I'm so happy you're enjoying it so much, and from your response, the way you're so caught up in the story really pleases me. ♥
*laughs* Sometimes it feels like it's going to go on forever... I'm really happy you're still enjoying the story. And no worries, they're going to take it nice and slow. ;) Thanks for your lovely long review!
Date: 11/15/09 07:46 pm Title: What Makes a Family
*squel* that was so cute!!! Thank you for this amazing story, it just keeps getting better, I don't know how you do it.
*runs off to read year three*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very pleased you enjoyed year two. ♥ I have to confess I'm glad to be done with it, ;) - but happy that others like it so much. Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/15/09 03:12 pm Title: What Makes a Family
I just noticed that my last submitted review didn't work entirely. I was saying that I also loved the title of the chapter, it's perfect! :)
(and it's one of my favourite songs of the album ;)
Author's Response: Augh, I hate it when that happens! I'm so glad you liked the title - I love that song, too, and I'm so glad they did the Greece live version in German. :D
Date: 11/15/09 11:00 am Title: Spring Fever
This made me laugh - they truly are adorable.
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad it made you laugh. Tom's so BLUNT, isn't he??
Date: 11/15/09 06:56 am Title: A Love Realized
Knew it, knew it, knew it. I just want to say you wrote the anticipation and excitement in Bill fabulously here - totally caught me up and I loved it.
Author's Response: Yup, you knew it! Ahh, thank you so much! I was hoping it would come across that way, and to hear you got caught up with him makes me absolutely gleeful.
Date: 11/15/09 06:35 am Title: Enrollment
I am catching up, slowly but surely lol. I loved seeing Tom having his own thing in this - and it entertains me that Bill's so much less able to deal with it than Tom has become over things Bill likes and he doesn't. Bill needs to remember he loved the singing though!
Author's Response: You are, and I thank you so much for commenting on chapters individually. ♥ They trade off, I think, over getting possessive that way. Bill wants to do his own thing but when Tom has his own thing and Bill isn't diverted, he can get childish about it! *wants to hug him* As for the singing...
Date: 11/15/09 06:16 am Title: Forever Now
Aw~ the end if this year is so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you liked it!
Date: 11/15/09 12:44 am Title: Forever Now
aw, I loved it. :) can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hurrah!! \^o^/ Thank you. More forthcoming.
Date: 11/14/09 11:57 pm Title: Forever Now
aww..perfect ending.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. ♥
Date: 11/14/09 11:37 pm Title: Forever Now
Aww goodbye to year two. *sniffle* but yay for year three!!
Author's Response: Sad to close the year, but hurrah for going on! Thanks for reading. ♥
Date: 11/14/09 08:42 pm Title: What Makes a Family
Yay, kit Tom with dreadlocks!!!!! Aww, I miss then so much on the real one, I'm so glad you are thinking of putting them into this story!!!
"...Tom, what's a pervert?"
Psh, hahahhahaha. Oh, pretty kits, you both have so much to learn.
Author's Response: We'll get there. ;) He's gonna be so cute.
I love that they both had to ask. Well, of course they would, lil' innocent kits. And hopefully they'll never truly learn. D: Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/14/09 08:19 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
Okay, ick on the buying poor Tom :( Yay Gordon and Marcus!
Ohhhhhh, Tom's gonna get dreadlocks soon, huh? *grins* Wonder when Bill's gonna get interested in the black dye...
Author's Response: I know, that pervert came out of nowhere. D: It's still gonna be a bit, for dreadlocks, but the idea is planted in his head!
Date: 11/14/09 07:32 pm Title: With Broad Strokes
Poor Kasimir, LOL. I love that they really are portrayed like kids and not little adults in this ♥
Author's Response: I do my best to make them come across as kids, mostly! I don't have much exposure to children, but I do talk it over with my girlfriend, who had little siblings and has nieces and a nephew and so forth. ;D
Date: 11/14/09 07:04 pm Title: Feast of Gratitude
They really are far too cute to be true. Felt so badly for Tomi in this though, getting all scared by the fire ;_;
Author's Response: Aren't they?? Poor Tom, repression just makes it worse when it actually comes out.
Date: 11/14/09 04:29 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
Oh, that was really creepy! D:
Bill is so cute with his jealousy, but I have a paranoid feeling that it might become a valid issue at some point. :(
Author's Response: I know, how dare he! D: He jumped right into the story before I knew what was happening... And your instincts are good ones. =__= These kits, I swear... Thanks for your review~
Date: 11/14/09 12:15 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
I've been following the story, well done! I've been unable to review, laptop issues, but I'm borrowing one now! Anyway, back to reviewing. PedoCreep is scary! Poor kits, having to be exposed to such people. It's awful! I'll be breathlessly awaiting your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry to hear you've had laptop issues, that really sucks. Yeah, PedoCreep surprised even me - he wasn't in the outline! It worked for the story, though. Hope you continue to enjoy the next updates!
Date: 11/14/09 09:50 am Title: Lessons and Modulation
Ok big weird guy just freaked me out. Gordon too, bless his heart. So now I'm worried for the kits, now that perverts have perverted ideas about them. Bastards lol.
Author's Response: So intended! D: He came out of left field even for me. But Gordon will protect his kits, for sure. Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/14/09 12:45 am Title: Lessons and Modulation
Is it wrong that I want to kick that pervert in the balls rather than the shins? Thank goodness Tom is too wary and clever to fall for that kind of trickery, but eep. Really shows that some people regard youko as less than human, too, which is fabulous world building on your part, but makes me want to throttle them. Ahem.
Also, randomly, I just realized how appropriate their pranks are given that they're kitsune, basically. Though of course, most kids that age like pulling tricks sometimes, so perhaps I'm reading too much into this. Anyway, quite relieved both kits are okay, and eagerly anticipating the next chapter as usual!
Author's Response: Not at all; Tom probably SHOULD be advised to kick perverts in the balls and run. D:
The pranks are a totally kitsune instinct, you're not reading too much into it at all! ;D So glad you caught that! The kits are okay, fortunately nothing too traumatizing for them in order to learn this lesson. ;_;
Date: 11/13/09 10:11 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
Tom is really clueless....
*psss*loved it! spent today reading like five chapters when i'd only been gone for like three days...*pss*
Author's Response: Glad I had several for you to catch up on! ;) Ehh, Tom is clueless in some respects, but pretty sharp in others! Thanks for your review.
Date: 11/13/09 10:03 pm Title: Lessons and Modulation
GASP!
That is so freaky! Be careful kitties! D:
Author's Response: I know, perverts on the loose! :( They gotta watch out for kitnappers.