Date: 06/20/11 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I hate to say this but Ivy's a whore. And Bill's kinda stalkerish. lol
But that makes the story interesting! lol On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: haha, yes ivy is some what of a whore.rni think bill is a little more than stalkerish.
Date: 06/20/11 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to point this out, but the dialogue is a little confusing. You should put the whole Bill said, Ivy said, in there a few times because I sorta got lost.
But otherwise this is a good chapter. Great job!
Author's Response: i know, im sorry you got lost.rni've had people tell me to do it less often
Date: 03/25/11 09:26 am Title: Chapter 18
I loved it. I can't wait for more. Tom and Ivy are so cute together :) please keep up your amazing writing and update real soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Probably start working on the chapter tonight and have it up by saturday night!!!
Date: 03/19/11 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow, what a twist! Can't wait... ;D
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/19/11 08:17 am Title: Chapter 17
OMG! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU FINALLY updated I absolutely love this story I loved this chapter. Please keep up the great writing and update real soon I just gotta read more and find out what will happen next! :D
Author's Response: lol i know its been a while huh? I honestly just had no inspiration and when i would look at what i had originally for chapter 18, but i didn't like it, and i really didn't like chapter 17, so i thought a re-write would help me get my mojo back. Glad you love this story!!
Date: 03/14/11 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/14/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/14/11 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanksrn
Date: 03/14/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/14/11 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/14/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/14/11 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/01/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
I enjoyed this, can't wait for a update
Author's Response: i'm trying to write, but with school its kinda hard.rnIvy is leaving london soon!
Date: 09/01/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 15
I really liked this chapter, and the fact Ivy walked out on her mother. Good job!
Author's Response: aww, you finally decided to read!!!
Date: 07/16/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
AWWWWWWWWWWWW tomi is so sweeeeeeeeet :))
loved it update soon please ^^
Author's Response: haha.rni will!rnim hoping to make the next much much longer.rnwhich is what you should do with the epilogue of undisclosed desires
Date: 07/06/10 03:34 am Title: Chapter 15
oooh i thought it was much better this way! and sorry it took me a while to read, i havent been on the site in a few day so i didnt see :S
anyways, i really liked it :)
I hoep you'll update soon!
and also thanks for the dedication :D
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can.rnI dont see this story ending soon.rnmaybe 25-30 chapters.rnBut i'm working on another story right now, well trying too.rnrnBTW, is Undisclosed Desires going to be like YLAD, where it had like sixty something chapters?
Date: 04/21/10 07:20 am Title: Chapter 14
Umm okay what is happeneing i'm confused.
Author's Response: sorrry. ok, basically tom walked in on ivy yelling that she was pregnant and it kinda upset him since she didnt say anything to him when she first found out. Now she left and took a drive when she found her moms house, who she hasn't seen in years and it goes from there?rnrnUnderstand now?rndo i need to explain more?
Date: 04/21/10 07:16 am Title: Chapter 13
:O wow. Niceending ! I love this story
Author's Response: aww thank you!
Date: 04/21/10 07:12 am Title: Chapter 12
OMG WHO IS THE DAD?! I HOPE IYS NOT BILL!
Author's Response: we're not sure yet, and wont find that out for a few more chapters
Date: 04/21/10 07:07 am Title: Chapter 11
:( STOOPID BILL! grrrrraaaaarr
Author's Response: yeah, he's an ass hole