Date: 08/24/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter Third.
even though tom sounds like the stalker, i don't think it's him...i think he's there to protect bill...that's just my thought process though...
Date: 08/24/09 09:24 am Title: Chapter Second.
pretty tattoo...and dreams can be very insightful...
Date: 08/24/09 09:10 am Title: Chapter First.
nice...even without dialogue...it sets the mood and let's us meet out characters...
Date: 08/24/09 06:05 am Title: Chapter Fourth.
oooohhhhhh creeppy
Date: 08/24/09 02:49 am Title: Chapter Fourth.
Terrrryyyy, Terrryyyyyyyyyyy.
But I do have a thing for psycho killers, but oh do i hate that name.
Date: 08/24/09 02:00 am Title: Chapter Fourth.
Shit! Holy fucking twist! :3 Exciting!! /squee
Date: 08/24/09 01:17 am Title: Chapter Fourth.
woah!
never saw that coming. awesome chapter!!
Date: 08/24/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter Fourth.
Oooh very sneaky you two. I definitely wasn't expecting that kind of twist. Very well done though- I can't wait for more
Date: 08/23/09 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Fourth.
Such a cliff hanger!!!!! Lord, update soon please ^_^
Date: 08/23/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourth.
WOAH. Didn't see that coming at ALL lol.
Date: 08/23/09 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourth.
I knew it!!! Tom was protecting Bill after all!!!! Although I certainly wasn't expecting them to be exs.
Can't wait for more.
Date: 08/23/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Fourth.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I fell off the bed, I really did!
This story is effin awesome!
Date: 08/23/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Fourth.
oooo...what a cliff hanger...and well i wasn't expecting that Tom was a police officer(???) and that they knew each other....can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 08/23/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Fourth.
Ummmm, I did not see this coming. Not going to lie. BUT IT'S AMAZING! I love it and I can't wait to see more!
Date: 08/22/09 02:20 am Title: Chapter Third.
I'm not too sure that I like Terry. I'm just saying.
WHY is Tom following Bill? He's looking for something, that much is obvious, but what? Is it something Bill has or knows?
Please update this one as often as possible, because I really wanna know!
Date: 08/22/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter Second.
That tattoo is amazing. It's beautiful, and I wouldn't mind getting something like tat inked onto me, but it's so big and elaborate, and I don't think I could afford it if I want to be able to travel next summer...
I've still got that feeling like I don't really know what's going on. It is supposed to be that way, right?
Date: 08/21/09 01:20 pm Title: Chapter Third.
Uh oh. That can't be good.
Date: 08/21/09 01:54 am Title: Chapter Third.
This story is amazing :D
Date: 08/20/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter Third.
uhm... wow.
Date: 08/20/09 05:47 am Title: Chapter Third.
I'm thinking Tom isn't really out to get Bill, as in harm him....right!!!