Date: 08/30/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter 10: The Phone Call!
Creepy stuff...
Date: 08/27/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 9: Family
aww thats so cute... and yea going slower is making it better
Date: 08/27/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 9: Family
Favorite chapter so far! Me lovess.
Date: 08/27/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 9: Family
"for Bill I felt like I was hugging a friend, for Tom it felt like I was hugging love."
that line just made my day!! :)
Date: 08/27/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 9: Family
Very cute. :)
Those girls are annoying though! :P
Date: 08/26/09 02:26 am Title: Chapter 8: Return of Bo
hmm, this was a little sad, but also so happy that he told someone :D
that part with his dad in the window creeped me out though.. i can totally picture that scene in a horror movie :D lol
Date: 08/26/09 01:05 am Title: Chapter 8: Return of Bo
well. this is acctually a really good plotline. its amazing, the idea. but i feel like it was a bit rushed. like the last four chapters were supposed to happen a tinch later. the twins are a tad out of charater. unless you did that on purpose, your entitled to your creativity, no duh :) but beside those things i like how the story is going. good fic. 8D i like it.
Author's Response: ik it seems rushed ugh i hate how I do that hahaha hmmm but thanks for liking it :) I wanted the twins out of character :)
Date: 08/25/09 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 8: Return of Bo
Truthfully I didn't like the end of this chapter but the rest was awesome as always :)
Date: 08/25/09 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: Return of Bo
i thought that he wouldnt see those guys again... so did he see his dad or was it his imagination
Author's Response: Imagination, you know those things where ur scared and u think u see the person ur scared of?? yeah thats how Ayden is.
Date: 08/24/09 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Protection
So cute, but still, why would his dad out word out he's going to kill him?
I guess that's where all bad guys go wrong, telling in advance what they are going to do. :P
Date: 08/24/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 7: Protection
omg aw.
Date: 08/24/09 12:50 am Title: Chapter 7: Protection
aww thay got together thats so cute
Date: 08/22/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: Oh No!
Tom and Ayden are so cute! :D
He's got to tell them about his dad now though...
Date: 08/22/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Oh No!
Omg! Great chapter! I'm so excited for the next one :D
Date: 08/22/09 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Oh No!
oh my god that cant be happening... how did he break out... aww thats so cuye of ayden and tom
Date: 08/22/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Oh No!
Shit!
cant wait for more!!! :)
Date: 08/22/09 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 6: Oh No!
ohh no :O
This story is very good; It's cute & written nicely. Every time I read a chapter, I can't wait for the next!
Date: 08/21/09 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: School
*new reader alert*
awww ^^ cute fic!!! or wel.. not all of it's cute.. alot of it is actually pretty awfull.. but u know what i mean!!! xD
i'm really loving it so far and i can't wait for more ^^
Date: 08/21/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter 5: School
Great chapter, me loves :D
Date: 08/21/09 12:02 am Title: Chapter 5: School
aww thats so cute ayden and tom