Date: 05/08/23 10:54 am Title: Part 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/13/12 01:44 pm Title: Part 2
damn it! I loved it but I'd love to know what would happen next x'D
Date: 12/08/09 01:21 am Title: Part 2
muahahaha RAPE TIME.
xDDD awesome, girlie!
Date: 09/13/09 07:25 pm Title: Part 2
Lovely!
It really is quite contradictory. Bill claims that he isn't gay, but he blew all the band members. Well...I think they enjoyed it. :)
Date: 08/17/09 11:29 pm Title: Part 2
“I thought you were still asleep, Billa.” Tom muttered, laying back against the bed as Bill pushed insistently against Tom’s chest. “I thought I was hearing things, too.” - lol he hasn’t’ seen Bill so he doesn’t know he’s invisible lol
“Keep the blindfold on or I leave.” Bill demanded, kissing right above Tom’s rapidly hardening erection. “Do we have a deal?” – ha ha really seriously he’ll disappear lol!!! *snorts*
Though Tom was the first guy he had done this too and really, Tom was his only judge and critic, if he went by how his brother reacted then he was sure that he was something akin to professional. – lol
Trying desperately to get it out, he didn’t even notice as his pants were thrown off of him. He only noticed that something was amiss in his lower area when he felt the moist wetness covering his dick.
“Holy shit!” He cursed, trying to move away but being held down by two strong hands. “What the fuck is this?!” – lol this is awesome!
Eventually he calmed, moaning softly as the mouth around him did a wonderful job of swallowing him down.
“Holy shit.” Was all he could repeat over and over again until he came in the phantom mouth, moaning loudly and falling back against the bed. – hot!
I’m not Gay. – lol!!!
Now something was giving him a blowjob…something that he couldn’t see with his own two eyes.
Figuring that he really shouldn’t look the gift horse in the mouth, Gustav let the phantom work his cock and damn, was this phantom good at what he was doing. - *cracks up*
As per usual, Gustav didn’t really last long under the phantom’s touches and licks and sucks. He was coming shortly after, his jizz mysteriously disappearing into almost thin air as two loud bangs were heard. Gustav felt himself being shook and he turned to Tom and Georg with a glare on his face. - *snorts and giggles*
“What the hell is your problem?” Georg asked, tossing a blanket at the drummer. “Don’t tell me the ghost got to you too.” – ha ha!!!!!
“Is it still in here? I mean, it’s not like the thing could have gone far…”
“I don’t know. All I know is that we have to get it before it gets to Bill.” – lol why do you care if it “gets Bill” *snorts and giggles*
the wheels in all of their heads started ticking. Bill had just appeared out of nowhere after being invisible, and all three of them had experienced weird phantom blowjobs… - *snorts and giggles*
“What…what’s wrong, guys?” Bill asked, trying to play innocent. Georg simply snorted, reaching to Bill and running his fingers down Bill’s chest before tweaking one of his nipples. Bill squealed.
“I thought you said you weren’t gay, Bill…” Georg started. “Straight boys don’t go around sucking off their band members, now do they?” – no they don’t!
Bill whimpered and the three of them turned to each other, grinning. If Bill wanted to mess with them, they had no problem with messing with him right back. Bill gulped as they inched closer and closer and closer and closer.
This was about to be a very, very messy night. – aaaahhhh you left it here?! *scoffs*
Date: 08/17/09 11:16 pm Title: Part 1
Mornings were for gradually waking up, not for getting raped in the face with sunlight and happiness. – lol
The whole time he was fixing his breakfast, his brother was staring in his direction with a confused and frightened look on his face. When Bill finally looked up to see his brother, he quirked an eyebrow. – lol
Bill grinned and licked his lips in anticipation, even though no one could see. This would be fun. This would be really, really fun. – lol!!!!!!
Date: 08/17/09 04:42 pm Title: Part 2
xD This was fun XD lolz seems like that would be a very interesting experience!
Date: 08/17/09 01:54 am Title: Part 1
*giggles* love it
Date: 08/16/09 10:03 pm Title: Part 2
Very cute (^_^)
Date: 08/16/09 07:30 pm Title: Part 1
Okay, I absolutely loved this. When I read part one yesterday, I couldn't wait for part two. And part two...well, it certainly lived up to my expectations! =D
Date: 08/16/09 01:03 pm Title: Part 2
cant you make a sequel to this? like what happend that night? :P (A)
Date: 08/16/09 09:16 am Title: Part 2
Awesome! Poor raped Georg. XD
Date: 08/16/09 09:13 am Title: Part 2
Oh, my god! so amazing, how do you come up with all of those amazing ideas?
Date: 08/16/09 06:28 am Title: Part 2
LOL! Let me just talk about the ending first, hahaa. (How backwards, right? xD) That ending was priceless! It was fun how they kinda cornered him and I like the imagery from that. We've all soon a show where that happens and when it's with TH it's like a trillion times better. :D Okay, now for the rest. Tom's reaction had to be the most unexpected. With all the twin-bond crap, he should've been the first to know! But I like how you wrote it better! Expect the unexpected. xD
Date: 08/16/09 02:08 am Title: Part 2
I really like this chapter!
XD