Date: 01/04/10 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1
haha, smooch...
That was very cute and funny. Good job!
Author's Response: ^_^Thank you very much! ^_^rn
Date: 11/08/09 03:01 am Title: Chapter 1
RALMAO! :D
“I’m just glad no one other than David saw us,” Georg said and crossed his legs. Bill yawned and stretched. He turned to his band mates, a weary smile on his face, and said, "Well, it could be worse - at least we still have our dignity... and our pants."
Author's Response: LOL;D I take is as you liked it;D lol;D
Date: 09/06/09 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
....I’m always in front, cause I’m so hot, and when someone is in trouble, I still have to be in front... - hehehe, the curse of being hot, right bill???
...The eyes always worked, but why not now?... - yeah, why??? must be something big! oh uhhhh
...All boys were wearing the lacy, refusing to wear a thong... - *giggle* imagine it THAT got into the internet!
...Wait, he was enjoying it... - i certainly enjoyed it ^___^ though i wished david would wait a lil' bit longer, let the staff see them at dinner.. now that would have been something =P
Author's Response: Haha, yup;D Totally right;D rnFUNNNN! Haha;D rnYeah, I would love to pay to see those pics;D Hah! rnYeah, I thought about that too, but... then I couldn't write the last... lol;D
Date: 08/17/09 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
that'll teach them to rely on someone else to do their laundry...
Author's Response: haha! that's right! show them girl!
Date: 08/15/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
The idea here was a giggle and I generally enjoyed it. I particularly liked that David relented a little in the end. I think a beta reader could be handy to you, just to pick up a couple of errors/confusions, but it was cute overall!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! Haha, yeah;D Well, I'm a beta reader my self, so.... yeah, I know it went a little fast with writing and such... But Thank you so much!