Date: 10/02/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol XD
Bullies should die :/
Date: 09/06/09 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
...They were at the bottom of the social food chain of the school and nothing they did would change that... - seriously??? =P
...You’ll be opening up for the main band, so don’t get any ideas... - somehow i'm not convinced..hmmmm
.... Their band name was Twilight, but it had been before the stupid vampire novel and they had been searching for an alternative name lately... - owh i got a good one! how bout t.o.k.i.o. h.o.t.e.l.??? catchy right =P
...giving them a head start before he would yell to his companions... - good thing there's a good apple between the nasty worms *shivers* i DO NOT wanna think about how they were gonna greet people with nothing on!!
Date: 08/17/09 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
hat's a good point...i can't stand people who think it's ok to treat other people that way...
Date: 08/15/09 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked that this turned the world on it's head a bit. I think the final line might have worked better if the preceeding paragraph had a reference to the fact they haven't been seen naked by everyone - without that, you do kind of reflect that they were stripped down and that does hit dignity pretty hard. Over all though, I really liked this - they were still cute, even when geeky.
Date: 08/14/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwww tomi's guitar..and well i was going to say thier dignty....but that doesn't realy fit.you know?????gah i hate this keyboard but its still so cool
Date: 08/14/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gosh i really wanna hurt spike and his dumbass friends. Good job lmao!