Date: 09/27/09 02:24 pm Title: Do You Have A Penis, Too?
This is an amazing story. I love it. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'll try! xx
Date: 09/27/09 01:31 pm Title: Do You Have A Penis, Too?
Sheesh! I've been waiting for an update on this for a super long time! Well...not so long but a sig. amount of time! LOL It's nice to see how the story is moving along 'cause I almost forgot Tom and Bill were in the picture now. :') The first few scenes in the car was just beautiful! "Uncle Bill sings that? He Does? Would he sing for me? I want him to sing for me." Little Kayla is adorable. I'm so drawn to the Bandmember/Daughter pairing it's worrisome. LOL It’s not even clear that Paris will tell Tom, but she should! If she doesn’t tell him, maybe that bitch Michelle would? PANIC ATTACK #5(yeah I didn’t lose count LOL) : WHAT IF the news gets out to him simultaneously when Paris is about to reveal it ? Michelle (or anyone else like even Kayla too) ruins it. That would soooooo suck! Gotta wait for more, and I’m in school too so I know what it’s like to get a bit behind! Continue when ya can. :9
Author's Response: Gosh, you are my favorite person in the wholeeee world, you know that? :D You should totally aim me sometime xD Haha, anyways:rnrnI'm sorry about the wait- school, drama, family. Ugh. That's the only word for it. Ugh. I know it's no excuse, but I'm sorry DxrnrnAnd I actually went back and added those scenes. I wanted Kayla to know about Tom, but Tom not know about her...so I added that scene in at the last minute. ^.^ rnrnAnd keep your Panic Attacks under wraps... Oo... that could possibly happen... Sh! rnrnThanks so much for your support! xxx
Date: 09/27/09 07:45 am Title: Do You Have A Penis, Too?
I like the story.
I don't think your going fast.
I really wanted Paris to tell Tom in this chapter.
Or like by suprise Paris didn't know Bill was coming to the ice cream parlor, and Tom was with him and Kayla just yelled Uncle Bill.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Ya know, I was really thinking of doing that! Just not at that scene. What was really going to happen was that they were just walking down the street and Tom pulls up beside him with Bill in the passenger seat and Kayla yells Uncle Bill! And then yeah, it would have all came out there. lol. But I decided this was better and there are still some things that need to be discussed, so that's why I didn't. I'm glad you think I'm not going too fast- I always think I am. I'm glad you like my story and I'll try updating in the next day or two! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 09/26/09 11:02 pm Title: Do You Have A Penis, Too?
woahhhh.
This is awesomesauce.
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank youu :D
Date: 09/07/09 10:53 am Title: Yeah, They Thought My Vagina Was A Penis.
come back i like this fic!!! i hope everything is going well!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm just a tad busy right now. And I'm grounded, as well, indefinitely, so IDK when I'll be getting my computer back =/
Date: 08/30/09 12:04 pm Title: Yeah, They Thought My Vagina Was A Penis.
MORE MORE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE
HOW DO WE LIKE IT ? HOW DO WE LIKE IT ?
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!
;]
Author's Response: Haha I'm gladddd :)
Date: 08/20/09 12:16 pm Title: Yeah, They Thought My Vagina Was A Penis.
I love this! Definitely one of the best-written stories I've read so far. Please update soon?!?
Author's Response: WOW. What an awesome compliment! Thank you so much! And I'll try ;)rnrn
Date: 08/19/09 11:12 pm Title: Yeah, They Thought My Vagina Was A Penis.
PANIC ATTACK #4: OMG, THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO ME!!?? *faints* awww, that's so very nice of you! :)) i think it's super cute that Kayla has an imaginary friend that possesses symbolism. you meet Robby, and you're liked; you don't and you're screwed. xD Bill's meeting with Kayla was very cool, too. he didn't put on the "intruding" vibe for her, and kept it very neutral and welcoming. Johnny on the other hand should R E L A X!!! LOL he thought Bill was Tom and totally went pyscho for like 5 seconds. hahaa! i enjoyed this chapter and it's really heling to build up the Paris/Tom(perhaps Kayla?) conflict. also, i think that maybe...just maybe... Tom won't be so unfit the "father" job. although i'm not sure. gahhh i have so many thoughts going through my mind!! thanks once again for another great chapter. xD
Author's Response: LOL I know they cause you distress, but I love your panic attacks :D lol They make me giggle ^.^ YES. This is why you're my favorite reviewer! Because you get everything! Robby is symbolic, and I didn't think anyone would pick up on that! Awesome :D I'm glad you liked Bill's meeting Kayla- I wasn't so sure about it, but I totally trust your judgement 110%! yes, johnny needs to relax- but it's his baby sister, so he's protective xD Thanks for tuning in and reading again! Still the bestest! :Drnrn
Date: 08/19/09 07:30 pm Title: Yeah, They Thought My Vagina Was A Penis.
A very cute chapter, though it felt short -- probably because I kind of read the other 5 chapters all in one go, though, lol. I hope you update ASAP -- the story is getting so interesting!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It probably was a little short- I was in between going from my mom's to my dad's- so I probably thought it was longer than I thought it would have been -__- But, thank you none theless for reviewing!
Date: 08/19/09 02:11 pm Title: Why Are You Sitting With Those Losers When You Could Be Sitting Next To Me and Can Be Guaranteed A BJ Later?
*GIGANTIC GASP* TOM??? OMG i was SO not expecting that...WOW. write more, the suspense is killing me!!!
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad! Other people were like, yeah, it was obvious...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 08/19/09 02:04 pm Title: Like Oh My God, I'm Just A Whore Who Wants To Jump Their Bones!
i think paris had the baby of one of the members of tokio hotel...either bill or georg. i thought georg at first but now i think it's bill...anyways, loving the story so far :) can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Im really glad you like it! And you'll have to wait to see who's it is... :D
Date: 08/19/09 07:34 am Title: Why Are You Sitting With Those Losers When You Could Be Sitting Next To Me and Can Be Guaranteed A BJ Later?
No angry mob here! I kind of saw it coming, but only because I'm really good at reading curve-balls. I really, really like your story so far, and I'm definitely intrigued! I hope you update really soon, I'm tracking the story and adding it to my favorites list!!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! And glad you're not an angry mob ^.^ Thank you so much for favoriting it and tracking it- you're pretty chill :D Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 08/19/09 06:17 am Title: Why Are You Sitting With Those Losers When You Could Be Sitting Next To Me and Can Be Guaranteed A BJ Later?
*CHASES YOU WITH A PITCHFORK FOR THE ROTTEN CLIFFHANGER!* omg... PANIC ATTACK #2: BILL HAS ARRIVED. need i say more??? PANIC ATTACK #3: "Bill's not the father." She takes another deep breath. "But his brother is." [!!!] i knew it!! i love Tom's-The-Daddy fics, they make me smile. :D but I can't wait for Kyle to take notice. You know, I'm having a theory and it's a bit far-fetched but i'm think Paris doesn't want anything to do with Tom so maybe Kyle and Tom hook up and Michelle spills the beans and Paris is furious or is it...? like i said, it's far-fetched and i doubt that's gonna happen. i can't believe what's going on though and it's only the 5th chapter. x'D i can't wait for your next chapter. this story is so interesting. :D
Author's Response: *cowers and sobs uncontrollably* THIS IS WHAT I WAS AFRAID OF!!! Don't kill me please! xD lol okay, so more panic attacks? gahh, send me your medical bills xD It's not as far-fetched as you think, I wish I could have thought of that! that'd be awesome! lol But that's not where this story is going :/ I'm so glad you like the story! You're my favorite reviewer BY FAR. <3333
Date: 08/19/09 02:54 am Title: But Kyle's A Boys Name
that banner is gorgeous! it surprised me that it's NOT Kyle (but I kinda figured that since you wrotes that Kyle got her hair cut, and Hilary Duff doesn't have bangs. xD). so i wonder exactly who that is!! and about the "TH SHIRT ARMY" thing, you can't totally use that!! LOL xD *waits patiently for more of this lovely story*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! yeahh the chicka that did it for me is really talented :D It's supposed to be Paris, actually xD lol Thanks, I definitely will be. *creditsssss* Totally awesome :D
Date: 08/18/09 09:36 pm Title: Like Oh My God, I'm Just A Whore Who Wants To Jump Their Bones!
OMG. Unexpected entrance much??? xD I wonder why they're a few days earlier than expected. Usually, you'd think they would've have arrived like a week late or something. Oh well, surprises are fun. :)) So about Paris and her baby... I have a theory about her story, but I'll just keep it to myself and let your story do the talking. I'm really liking this story if you haven't noticed. :D
Author's Response: Haha, I have noticed, in fact! Thank you so much for the awesome review! I'm glad you liked Bill's entrance ^.^
Date: 08/18/09 08:17 pm Title: Why Are You Sitting With Those Losers When You Could Be Sitting Next To Me and Can Be Guaranteed A BJ Later?
AHHHH that was a twist!!!! ooo write more soon!
Author's Response: I am writing as we speak :D I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 08/18/09 07:51 pm Title: Why Are You Sitting With Those Losers When You Could Be Sitting Next To Me and Can Be Guaranteed A BJ Later?
*pouts* nein! i wanted bill to be the father... that way it wouldn't be so damn cliche....
...
okay, i'm alright now. at first i was like okay , yeah bill's the father... but then i read the family line and i was like... "nuh, no fuckin way... oh come on! tom?? really? "
*sigh* it's always tom impregnating girls... i want it to be billa!
*sigh* ...god, that sounded bizarre...
anyway, love love love, i can't wait for more! yay.
Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry :/ But, my 'co-author' (my sister) and I don't think Bill would ever...I don't know, do something like that. Do something...erratic? I try to keep all of my characters IN character, so I'm sorry if you think it's cliche :/ I hope you continue reading! Tom seems more likely to 'forget' about something as important as contraception... *scratches head* thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 08/18/09 07:37 pm Title: Like Oh My God, I'm Just A Whore Who Wants To Jump Their Bones!
*swoon*
that is what i want them all to do...
and what i just did.
...you know, for a het, this is pretty damn good.
cuz really, most of the het i've seen and partially read are all just REALLY bad newbies with the self inserts and so on...
but i really like this.. really...
oh and nice billa intro *claps* very nice.
oh and god damnit i want more!
... can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: :D That's funny- you reviewed at the exact moment I updated ^.^ rnrnThanks so much! I'm really glad you like it! That makes me like you :D Thanks, I love Bill ^.^ You dont have to wait, there's an update! Now! Look! Update! :D
Date: 08/18/09 01:50 pm Title: Like Oh My God, I'm Just A Whore Who Wants To Jump Their Bones!
OHHHH i love it! i have a feeling about where it is going and i am super excited!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you like it!! :)
Date: 08/18/09 01:45 pm Title: Like Oh My God, I'm Just A Whore Who Wants To Jump Their Bones!
why isn't this story getting enough attention >:O
its really good ! :D
i like that tokio hotel doesn't suddenly appear in the first chapter & its gong slow haha :]
& wow thats not kyle ?
mmm i have no idea who that is :P
Author's Response: *sigh* I don't know...slow moving, I guess, haha :) Thanks for the compliment! :)rnrnAnd what do you mean, that's not kyle? I'm confused >.<