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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 05:39 pm Title: Can I Hold Her?

Awww that was so frikkin cute! ^-^ Almost enough to be a panic attack, but there was so much fluff and sweetness that it calmed me down. Out of all my reviews I've given, only this story is PANIC ATTACK-worthy. LOL *is on her way to the next chapter*

Author's Response: I feel honored that this is PANIC ATTACK worthy. It keeps me going ^.^

Reviewer: darkangel16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 05:01 pm Title: We're Musicians; We Know These Things

Keep going. I love this!

Author's Response: Thank youu!

Reviewer: eloquenceisdead Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 04:41 pm Title: We're Musicians; We Know These Things

*happy squirm* Oh, how I would so love to witness the water thing. ;)

What a lovely surprise! Got home after a long day and I see, not one, but two different chapters! Easily put a smile on my face. :3

Author's Response: I think we'd ALL like to witness that happen ;-)rnrnI know! I thought you'd be excited, hahaha :) I'm glad I made you smilee today ^.^rnrnThanks for reviewing lovie!!

Reviewer: erdbeere Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 04:31 pm Title: We're Musicians; We Know These Things

so here i am (:
as i told, i'm not into such stories anymore buuut... i think this is really good
i like it (:
it will not "cure" me but i guess, i may keep reading it...

uuh this comment-thing again...
i hate this with the german hps...
and actually there it doesn't really work.. i tried that once, too xDD...
maybe it works here?

so i really think this story is great and you should really go on.
i don't think there's anything wrong with this chapter.
don't worry xD

Author's Response: WELL. I am glad you decided to stick around :) That makes me happy ^.^rnrnAnd German hps? *scratches head* I'm a bit confused, because that whole paragraph was absolute jibberish to me. I'm blonde, so that may have something to do with it, but could you clarify it with me? lmao. Thanks <3rnrnI'm really glad you think so! Because I hate this chapter -__- lolrnrnThanks so much for reviewing!!

Reviewer: unreachable102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 10:43 am Title: Can I Hold Her?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
^.^
lol i think thats all i have to say :]]

Author's Response: LOL thank youuu <3

Reviewer: nothingbutadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 10:28 am Title: Can I Hold Her?

Omg. Omgomgomgomg! Amazing! Freaking amazing!!!

Author's Response: lmao. Thank you so much! xx

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 10:08 am Title: Can I Hold Her?

I love your story thus far...

I think Tom took it rather well, however, what do I know? LOL

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I thought he did too- I tried making it as real as possible. Some people wouldn't freak out as others think. So I'm glad you thought he took it well lol :D Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lalauri Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 09:37 am Title: Can I Hold Her?

Awwwh that was far too adorable! Love it =]

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 08:47 am Title: Can I Hold Her?

Aww.. This was a lovly chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 05:06 am Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

Nice chapter :) Continue :D I hope Tom will love his daughter

Author's Response: Thank you! I will; I'm about to post the next one in a minute :D

Reviewer: eloquenceisdead Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 12:50 am Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

*whistles* Just read this all in one sitting, and I'm most definitely glad I decided to click and read...Of course, I'm not exactly happy at the ending, considering that I'm not exactly the most patient person, but whatever, I'll survive *cough*aslongasIgetthenextchaptersoon*cough*

Wut.

Anyway, love it. And since I always have a hard time falling in love with het fics in this sight, it's saying something. The pace is great and so is the writing, and I'll most definitely be following this one. :)

Author's Response: Oh, yay! I'm really glad you like it. I'm glad you falleded in lovee :D Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 12:04 am Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

PANIC ATTACK #6! OMG, Tom knows there's a daughter. Not that it's his, but she has one! O_O I hope he doesn't blow up about it and think she screwed around on him. That would be soooooo suckish. I can see him doing it though but that'd cause anothe world of trouble. Esp. since Kayla is involved and she might think her dad doesn't want her. Aww. :'( I can't wait to see how you follow this one up! You're gonna really have to out-do yourself. xD

Author's Response: Oh, no pressure or anything though, right? Heh xD You'll have to wait and find out, no more panic attacks for you, missy! Maybe Michelle will come along just to ruin it all like the bitch she truly is! Muaha!

Reviewer: Cynnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 11:36 pm Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

OMG, i love this, and omg i want to know what is next. Post more soon.

Author's Response: Glad you like thisss! Next post later in the morninggg. <3

Reviewer: thedramabean Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 10:46 pm Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

4th review/5! Such a freakin' cliffie! Gaah! PLEASE update ASAP! I know you said it would PROBABLY be the last chappie of the night, you could be REALLY nice and make it like.. the 3RD to last chappie of the night?? lol. Maybe two more before the night is through? Maybe? Perhaps?

Maybe I'm just being selfish. Gaar. You have things that you need to do, people you need to see...

...but I still want to know what happens next! If you update tomorrow, I won't get to read it until 6 at night because my job is a b****! Please, please, PLEASE at least one more tonight? :D.

Quick question, though -- is this story going to be more focused on Kyle or on the Paris/Tom romance?

Author's Response: Oh, lovie! Dx I feel horrible now. Because I totally would have. I really would have. But I got kicked off the computer, and now I feel horrible Dx I dont like to disappoint. You're not being selfish- if I had places to go, people to see, I totally wouldn't be writing fanfiction lol. My life is just wayy too empty DxrnrnI'm sorry your job sucks. lol. Don't they understand that sometimes you just need a break?!rnrnAnd to answer your quick question: It's going to be focused on both- what I mean is, once Paris/Tom/Kayla is over and done with, there's still a whole lot more to the story- its like a double plot, because there's still so much more to say. There's quite a few loose ends to wrap up and I'd like to do that nicely, so we'll see where that goes :DrnrnI'm really sorry about this. I'd post now, but it's 330 in the morning and I doubt you're awake lol. Sorry lovie!rnrnxxx

Reviewer: nothingbutadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 10:22 pm Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LMAO I know! xD ahaha

Reviewer: Risu-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 10:03 pm Title: I Think It's Funny When You're Crazy, Mommy.

Argh cliffhanger I see.
Now you're going to keep me clawing for more.
I won't be able to sleep.
I need a new chapter nooowwwwwww.

Author's Response: I'm sorry lovie! It's late, my mom needs the computer...tomorrow morning fersuree <3

Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 08:44 pm Title: I'm PMSing, Got A Problem With That?

Sratch the whole "2nd comment" I was talking about. :( I'm 4th, but that's okay too! xD

Author's Response: LOL This counts as a second comment, but only because it's coming from you, lovie! xx :D

Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 08:30 pm Title: I'm PMSing, Got A Problem With That?

-2 review now, because this is the 2nd comment for this chapter! WOW! Michelle...GAHHH where do I even start with her?! Could she be even more a bitch? I don't even think she can. Thank God for the principal because it totally stopped me from having another panic attack. -_-" Whew... That was so close! I totally thought she would have to confess in front of the whole school. :O I hope you get the five reviews becaues I wanna keep going. REVIEW GUYS! D;< (Hope that was effective! ;D )

Author's Response: Ahaha, yes! I have five reviews! And I'm about to post again, so please continue to readddd!!! xxx

Reviewer: nothingbutadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 08:18 pm Title: I'm PMSing, Got A Problem With That?

Amazing, amazing, amazing!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Danke, danke, danke!! <3

Reviewer: darkangel16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 08:09 pm Title: I'm PMSing, Got A Problem With That?

OMG!!! I absolutely love this. Please please please continue!

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you do! And I will! Hopefully I'll update either tonight or tomorrow morning, but don't hold me too it lol Thanks for reviewing!

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