Date: 03/04/13 05:59 am Title: Knock, Knock
u should do a sequel to this
Date: 08/25/09 01:48 pm Title: Knock, Knock
Wow this is pretty damb hot! nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried my best!
Date: 08/14/09 02:25 pm Title: Knock, Knock
What else he is planning to trick Tom into ;) Those delicious thoughts ;P And please don't change it! I love it this way :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I'll make a sequel! Off to the thinking lab! It'll be in a series called... I dunno know yet. ;) LOL, thank you!
Date: 08/14/09 12:24 pm Title: Knock, Knock
Hahaha great job, this was really funny. XD I can't believe Tom actually fell for Bill's little disguise. XD
Author's Response: LOL, :) Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08/14/09 12:11 pm Title: Knock, Knock
I loved it!! :D Gott, I wanna know Bill's thoughts in the end xD Looolz xD
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: What do you mean by 'Bill's thoughts at the end'? :) If you think I can improve it in anyway I'd love to know. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!