im in loooooove!
i soooo adore bottom tom stories, great job, i cant stop drooling over 'im in charge' bill

Author's Response: *grins* in love is a good thing, yeah? xD

aww sad.

Author's Response: awww. sorry?

I'M NOT REVIEWING. I REFUSE, BECAUSE YOU MADE ME THINK.

...aw, crap.

Author's Response: hahahahhaa fail. but i love you anyways, and you sooo didn't tell me if you liked the story xD

I will kill you as well if there is no sequel >.> But I loved this, I did. I'm probably going to go back and read it again lmao.

Author's Response: hahaha. i'm trying to get all my fics updated today/tomorrow so i can start on the sequel >.> *is currently writing Lunacy* AND....hhaha yay for rereads AND...you should come online and talk to me so i don't get bored of writing this xD

a boTOMming fic.,... hm, I'm not much of a fan of those normally, but I like this one! Can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: i'm glad that this could be the exception ^^ and I can't wait to give you the sequel ^^

fuck!!!!!!!! marry me? I was thinking of making a Domi!Bill with the nipple ring but you beat me to it..

he's fucking manly and he's just.. omfg.. yeah.. a fucking wet dream.

omg.. this is my most favorite fic of yours ever..

O_______o never mind Tom having a heart failure, I think I just did. Your words are so pure and beautiful, I really love it when you write like this

Author's Response: hahaha *pats your heart for good measure* sorry? lol. i'm glad you liked it and i'm like super happy that you love it when I write like this, because it's my favorite way of writing, especially writing smut ^^

OMG!*gasps air*. This was purely amazing! I just fell in love with the first few sentences and I just knew it that this is going to be a hell of a ride. Wonderful, HOT, amazing, HOT, nice piece of fic.... Oh yes, fav's!

This is the writing style we've been so often talking about. That steam of consciousness. Few selected words and so rich language builds the environment so vivid and somehow suffocating almost. There is so much in everything that it's drowning, but in a good way. Like the life isn't plain, but instead a suffocating, obsessive and intoxicating world of madness and lust and weirdness around twins. You captured well feelings of both of them and Tom's desparate, but still obsessed and determined feelings to Bill. At thev same time Tom is Bill's big brother and other half of him, his guardian, and at the same time Tom is obsessed, demanding "fan girl" just like all the others who wants their piece of THE Bill Kaulitz. There is no big difference after all, I think.

Short sentences, thick and suffocating atmosphere, animalistic lust and at the bottomtone like always - denial. Escaping and drawing together at the same time.

Oh, and I loved how you put the nibble piercing(s) here :)(is there actually evidences or rumors about Tom having a nibble piercing too or is it just your idea to make it nice here?). Actually the whole idea of Bill changing so much during the last year is fascinating. A turn from a girly, pretty Bill to more provocative, sexual, challenging MAN. Well, Bill isn't a boy anymore, he's become a man and somehow I think he's now even more confusing (in a positive way). He wants just blow us all away and I really can't help thinking about the relationship between him and Tom, because all of this puts it too to a whole new light.

I just loved your work here, hun. I so need the sequal :)

Author's Response: *sits down and prepares to write a long response* sorry i didn't respond right away, i always try to wait until I have time to respond to well though out reviews like this ^_^

anyways, I'm so ecstatic that I could make you fall in love with the first few sentences. I'm always INSANELY harsh on the beginning of a oneshot because it can make or break a story.

I'm glad you could recognize the stream of conscious writing style. there are always various forms, first person to third person, but I think it's one of my favorites to write in, specifically for oneshots, because i'm putting so much into such a short amount of words.

I'm glad that you could tell the setting of the story, because I'm not to find of description, but I definitely wanted you to feel the way I felt listening to that song, the way I felt as I envisioned myself as their characters.

I wanted you guys to feel like you were suffocating, drowning, asphyxiating when you read it, to feel what they felt night after night, after soulless night.

I've never done anything where one was so painfully obsessed, or intoxicated with the other, and I REALLY was trying hard for you to see their desperation. Tom's when it came to them being together and Bill's when it came to running away from everything.

I'm also glad that you could see the parallel between Tom and the fangirls, because as Rose said, he is THE Bill Kaulitz and no one is immune to is charm, no matter how hard they try to fight it.

I lvoe that your words Short sentences, thick and suffocating atmosphere, animalistic lust and at the bottomtone like always - denial. Escaping and drawing together at the same time. described the whole of this story.

and yea, Rose asked for the nipple piercings, so they'll probably be in all of my smutties xD, but as far as I know, it's just Bill. Rose and I are not-so-secretly wishing that Tom has a matching one xD

and I totally agree with him changing. I think that him changing so much is a shock to us, but i think that it will play a major part in their relationship, brotherly or otherwise.

and I promise, the sequel should be finished soon ^_^

*smooches and waves, eyeing banner one last time*

Author's Response: *smooches back and waves* you can stare some more tomorrow xD

The stupid cell woke me up because the battery died, which is a good thing cause I was gonna be late for work otherwise! I should really go back to sleep now, but I refreshed the page, see what's new, SEE THE MOST GUHHHHH BANNER NEVER AND IT'S YOUR FIC! So duh, I had to read it!!!

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Thank you for writing this, because I so enjoyed reading it over, the bits you showed me. I wanted/needed more and GUH, that nipple ring is going to drive me nuts yet.

Bill taking Tom was the fucking hottest thing ever and YES, that line just made my stomach tightened in pure pleasure. Yes Tom, you WILL take every one of his thrusts like the man you are! Bill owns your ass.

But don't worry, dearest, the next one if all you, because Bill's ass was made just for your cock to enjoy!

and yea, Tom'll get his. OH AND THEY ARE SOOOOOOOO GETTING MATCHING NIPPLE RINGS IN PRINCESS CAFE.....just watch me pull it off xD