positively brilliant. i loved the story idea and the plot summary was enticing. looking forward to more works from you. as a bit of criticism, i would make the suggestion to prolong the intimate moments... the kissing, the touching, the feeling ripping through their gorgeous german bodies. it will enhance the emotion and change the pacing. :) awesome job.

oh mein gott (L) perfect bed-story! haha
loved the concept : ))
I'm so sleepy right now -.- I don't know what to write x )

just one thing ;
barrabababaa - ich liebe es 8D

haha omg that was sooo good!
I wonder if they actualy ever lurked this site before...

(pineapple =P omg..I watched that video you had..soo funny. but that one picture with Toms hand on Bills leg I was like WOAH!!)

I like!

Lots of spelling mistakes, but oh well it was cute.

I loved it. The way you worded everything came out very fantastically. I just thought the-the everything was great!

I am amazed and know not what to say So I'll just stoop with my damned ramblings lol.

Super terrific whoop-de-doo twincestilicously amazing lovely freat job.

Okay...this story was aweeeessssoooommmmme. It kind of makes you think...have they ever heard of these stories? For all we know they've seen them and are all like...shocked or something. lol. Well written, and it made me giggle! You rock...this was just way too good!

Author's Response: or maybe, they actually know about these stories and reads them...who knows ,) thank you so much for this, it really means a lot to me to get wonderful reviews like this one!

aww I loved that fic. It was amazing. Especially the end ;)

xD

First of all, I have to apologise my English, mistakes and stuff, because I'm from Finland and my national language isn't English. :)
But I guess you'll still get my point. ^^

I found this site just few days ago and since I like read and write fanfiction, I have read these absolutely fantastic fics and now I dare to review for the first time! :D

I though I had quite a good imagination, but now I don't feel that way anymore. :'D I can't believe how you came up with this kind of idea! But anyhow, you did it very, I really mean it, very well.
All the things you wrote was so easy to imagine, it felt like a really good movie.
Even though I didn't know/understand every word on the text, but I did'n let it disturb too much. I stil got the point, and i got it very well. ;)

With all my respect to the writers back in Finland, it seems that people here write way better stories. Of course writers here are more, how should I say... Here are more writers and I dare to say that average age is higher here than in Finland.. :'D
I guess that is one of the reasons.

Getting back to the point, I liked the way you kind of played with Bill and Tom's characters and it was very nice to read and imagine that there was "two of them", real and fiction.

But like I said, I liked this very much and you really are a good writer. ^^

Author's Response: oh wow, that review just made me smile so much ,) first of all, don't worry about your english! when responding to reviews no author care if you mistype or anything, it's just really nice to get feedback on one's work! Haha I actually think that a lot of the authors in here could be real authors in real life, the way that they write. You should read 'Out with the old in with the new' by Beren, I swear that fic should be a book! Oh and 'The boy and the buttefly' by el-garned, it's so beautiful I cried! Thank you so much, I really apreciate all the nice stuff you say about my story, I wrote it a long time ago and it hasn't even been betaed, but I'm very happy you liked it! again, thank you so much. much love, lucy

I vote for A!
xD.
Write that next chapter!
really good idea, by the way!

~ golden_leafs

Author's Response: hmm, I am very happy you reviewed, but I don't know if you noticed, this story is done, it's got three chapters already xD and by the way, A won I think